Galti mujhse hui hai...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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...Tujhse shaadi karke



Apna ghar choda

moh maya se muh moda

naram gaddon pe sona wala main

thande sakht farsh par bhi soya


15000 ghanton mein udaane wala main

Ek mahine mein itna kamata hoon

Burger Dosa khane wala main

ab sukhi roti has ke khata hoon


Gussa aata hai mujhko kabhi kabhi tum par

par kya karoon main bhul jata hoon

Ki jis se khafa hota hoon kabhi kabhi

usi pe dilo jaan lutata hoon

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Posted: 13 years ago
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dear are these the lines said by him ? ya ur lines... wateva...ITS AMAAZING... n thanks a million for sharing this... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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He just said 'Galti mujhse hui hai'. Rest of the lines were composed by me... :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kashish_kr

He just said 'Galti mujhse hui hai'. Rest of the lines were composed by me... :-)

amazing then!!! i've alraedy fallen in love with those words...good one!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sajinifaby

amazing then!!! i've alraedy fallen in love with those words...good one!!👏👏👏


Thanks dear:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awsome post yaar shayar banjao tum bhot achi lekho gey shairey😊
Edited by CARINE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awww lovely, u shud b a shayari guy, its super cool
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks all for liking my poetry:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You really wrote it.. truly fabulous words👏

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