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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
kutie u r just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo GGUDD

but one request plz. show sum tia ranny chemistry plzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
i mean no more fights puhleeeees
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
hey it's awsummmmmmmmmmmmm n i am waiting for the next part eagerly
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
wow kutie 👏 i read three parts together. its really very nice.
i was out of station so didnt read it before so sorry for not commenting
u know what....i just luvvvvvvvvvvvv seeing ranveer jealous 😉 cont fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
#65
hey yaar ur fan fic rocks. plz cont asap. don't wait 4 comments as we r reading ur fanfic but r 2 lazy 2 comment. now all i hv 2 say is:
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cont asap.

sagarika
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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
ya plz continue fast.i m commenting on this part 2nd time.so u know how much i love ur fic.plz do it fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyz thanx for ur comments,i will surely cont the next part by tonight.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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all right guyz this is my next part.here it goes.

ranny-bas tia?bahut ho chuka.apko kya lagta hai ki aapse bichad ke hume bahut khushi ho rahi hai.aur aap kis letter ki baat kar rahi hai.

tia-oh ab tum tia se jhoot bhi bolne lage ho great.itne bhole bane ki koshish kar rahe ho jaise tumhe kuch pata hi nahi hai.(and she starts to move but our hero catches her tightly in his arms)

tia-ranny tia ko chodo.

ranny-aap hamari baat sunke jai.humne aapko koi bhi letter nahi likha hai,aur hum jhoot nahi bol rahe hai.hum aapki kasam khakar kehte hai tia ki hum aapse bahut pyar karte the,karte hain aur hamesha karte rahenge.

tia is shocked as well as confused if ranny has not written any letter then who has written it.then she remembers all shy's evil plans.

tia-tia is sorry ranny.tia ko maaf kar do.tia ko tumse iske bare main poochna chaiye tha.

ranny-its ok tia.(and they both hug)

ashi and uv saw them and ashi said

ashi-akhir timbo-thakur milap got succesful.

uv-right ashi.

rhul came to tia's room and he saw ranny and tia hugging.he got tensed and he went away from there.

ranny-tia aap is sab ke bare main bhool jaiye.hum aapse bahut pyar karte hain aur hum aapko dukhi nahi dek sakte.(he said by wyping her tears)

tia-thank u ranny,tia janti thi ki tum tia ke saath aisa kabhi nahi karoge.but tia was confused.

ranny-tia abhi aap so jaiye.aap bahut thaki huvi lag rahi hai.

tia-par ranny its only 8.30,aur band ki meeting bhi to hai.aur tum to jante ho na ki tia ko itni jaldi neend nahi aati.

ranny-thik hai tia.par aap hume promise kijiye ki aap humpar kabhi shak nahi karegi.

tia-tia promise karti hai ranny(she said by her innocent expression in her looks)

ranny smiled.

ranny-toh chale tia.band ki meeting ke liye.

tia-yes.

and they walked hand in hand towards shed.

GUYZ tell me hw is it,and the next part is going to be performance.so wait and watch.at last i have patched up tia n ranny.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey guyz posted the next part.tellme hw it is.waiting for ur comments.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey it's awesome... i just read it and i luved it... 👏 ...plz post the next part soon...

by the way i guess i m the 1st 1 to reply...

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