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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

@viji78 ... awsome attempt..

@sona.. superb yaar .. didnt thought geet k ghr walo ka source itna fast hay :P .. but great job hun..

ghar walo ko kaisay khabar padi yeh NEXT WRITER batayae😉😛😆

thanks😃

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

Originally posted by: meena..
hey sona🤗
loved it dear
awesome
y dont u write a ff dear
luv u❤️

meena🤗

thanks for loving it yar😃

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: namita25
amazing update sona...
loved it...

thanks yar😃

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

Originally posted by: bangalores
want me to post another one fro u?😃

how abt that😉...let me see what u make of it😆😆

hmmm its awesome 😉RAAT KO MILAY HUM CHORI CHORI😉😆

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

oops binduechi.. u trapped me... lol kamini

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

Originally posted by: craziekudi
oops binduechi.. u trapped me... lol kamini

😆comeon comeon write an update deepu😃

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craziekudi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

PART 6

Small part by deepu(craziekudi)

Maan kept thinking about the girl... 'Why is she affecting me.. why.. who is she... I will go mad...' I need to sleep ... and clear my head...

He goes to his room to change and suddenly feels a breeze... he turns around.. and and looks into the mirror and sees Geet in it laughing at him.. He gets angry and turns around.. and sees a soft movement on his bed...

There she is sleeping in his bedroom on his bed... with a smile on her face... as though the smile is mocking him in sleep... He gets irritated and thinks... i am going mad.. why will she be in my room... ha...

He looks again and sees her cuddling his duvet... he gest jealous of that duvet... she is hugging the duvet to her chest and hugging it. He feels a pang of desire going through his veins... He goes near the bed.. sits on the bed...

Leans forward seeing her face.. to taouch if she is real or his imagination... hoping to god that she is real...He sees her smiles and he feels a knock on his heart , he just ignores that and moves forward and forward and forward and slips and falls on her and ... She opens her eyes and looks at him... He keeps looking into her doe shaped green eyes...'so beautiful eyes'... touches her mouth, 'soft like a petal.'...leans forward and forward to kiss her...

leans falls on his face on to his bed...

He gets up with a growl 'Why do I loose my control seeing tis girl... I need to have her.. by hook or by crook...

Next part pic. soon

( reserved)

Bday part of Geet handa...

Continue ... friends...

Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago