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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wowww viji awesome update yar loved it a lot

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: payalpari
awesome loved it dear
hey sona dear 🤗 why didn't u continue it with u r naughty brain i wanna read more plz😍

😃thanks payal muahhh🤗

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: NoorFatima
awsome sona.. *claps*

okie so whose next.. :p

😃thanks🤗

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ok yaro i'll try and send next update 😳

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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PART 5

geet came back home and shocked to see her rellatives there and they all r seeing her with strange look

she got scared and go to her BUA ji

geet;;;;;;;kya hua hai bua ji?sab mujhay aisay kiyun dekh rahay hain aur yeh taya ji tai ji achanak kyun agayae inhay too kal ana tha na?

BUA ji turned her back angerly towards geet which make geet shocked

BUA JI;;;;;;GEET tu aisa kaisay ker sakti hai CHI CHI tu us larkay ke sath kya ker rahi thi😡abb NA mat bolna tujhay TANU ne khudh dekha hai

GEET turned around to see TANU

GEET;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;BUA JI mera yakeen karo mainay aisa khuch nahi kya plzzz

BUA JI;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;chup chup ker ja

GEET;;;; nahi main chup nahi rahoongi jab mainay khuch kiya hi nahi too main kyun chup rahoon

mainay khuch ghalat nahi kiya hai (GEET THOUGHTS)is kaminay maan ki too aisi ki taisi khota ullu ka phata mujhay kahan phansa diya kaminay ne khudh aram se apnay ghar main so raha hogaKAMINA (end of geets thoughts)

on the other hand MAAN doing TAI-CHI😍

he was so angry on himself and on that GEET to

eee wat that girl thinks of herself she's telling me that she's PARI aur main? main kya hoon DUSHT DANAV(🤣me loving it🤣)kya sabit kerna chah rahi thi 😡

is GEET ko to sabak sikhana paray ga

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

PHEWWW yeh update long likha hai 😳 😆

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Pooja Verma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

good going guys...

keep it up👍🏼

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: impoojaverma
good going guys...
keep it up👍🏼

thanks pooja😃

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honeygrape

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

omg sona...you wrote again...great job dear...yeh creative thread toh naye naye writers ko janam de rahi hain...😆 awsome attempt dear👏

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sona rai

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: honeygrape
omg sona...you wrote again...great job dear...yeh creative thread toh naye naye writers ko janam de rahi hain...😆 awsome attempt dear👏

hi purvi🤗🤗

thanks yar thread per atay hi dil kya jaldi se khuch likhoon😆akeli thi koi aur tha hi nahi sooo i wrote part 5😃😆