Come on Writers...Better characterization please!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Writers, writers, writers!

Why is is that for every dozen things you do superbly...you murder some basics? One of the hall marks of your writing, that I have enjoyed, has been how you build your characters and the relationships between them...of course I will ignore the aberration called "Pig-headed Aditya" and his never-ending "Mara Dads Bhagwans Se" rant! 🤔

Can you please stop showing Uttara comparing what Brahma did to Devyani with her own sense of betrayal...there is absolutely no comparison at all. 😳 👎🏼 😔 😒 🤔 Brahma psychologically and verbally abused Devyani for decades. In contrast, he merely cheated Uttara in an affair she went in to eyes wide open! 😳 Do not destroy what has been, for most part, engaging and compelling writing by ignoring this.

Yours,

A loyal viewer who also happens to ❤️ your creation SJ! 😳 😆

PS: I would not mind a side character called Basanti in Maryaada to add some tadka to the Shubu - Devyani prem kahaani! ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jaya ... 😲 besharam, and i thought it was Rits who had no shame 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Jaya...😃 Amen to having a Basanti character in Maryada...👍🏼... I for one would like to see how someone like SJ is attracted to Devyani...Nothing against Devyani per say...I know he is impressed with her transformation into being a strong person to stand upto Brahma...but still they need to show what makes his eyes lit up and sparks fly when he thinks about Dev when he self admittedly questioned himself today...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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haha Basanti ji self promotion??

Anyway I agree Ut n Brahma betrayal comparison is like apples and oranges literally.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Even I went😕😲 'when she said I can't believe the man who made our life hell just gone away from our life'. Then I thought probably she was missing him😆😆 but didn't have the guts to say so hence the cover up line😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This show is definetely getting a little dull now...Whats happening with priya and aditya's characters... there seems no progress at all... when will they patch up... vidya seems to be just clinging to the family with no purpose... everything seems sooo confused...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: FIZK6

Jaya ... 😲 besharam, and i thought it was Rits who had no shame 😆



Jab pyaar kiya to darna kya! ☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: my_view

Jaya...😃 Amen to having a Basanti character in Maryada...👍🏼... I for one would like to see how someone like SJ is attracted to Devyani...Nothing against Devyani per say...I know he is impressed with her transformation into being a strong person to stand upto Brahma...but still they need to show what makes his eyes lit up and sparks fly when he thinks about Dev when he self admittedly questioned himself today...



Thank you ji Ravina! 😆 SJ seems like the kind of person who is attracted to women with strong core...he admires that about her. He sees what others do not see about her...the fun woman who has ignored herself for decades for the sake of her family.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvdekha

haha Basanti ji self promotion??


Anyway I agree Ut n Brahma betrayal comparison is like apples and oranges literally.



Aur nahin to kya? 😆 Main apni favorite hoon! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: damon_biteme

Even I went😕😲 'when she said I can't believe the man who made our life hell just gone away from our life'. Then I thought probably she was missing him😆😆 but didn't have the guts to say so hence the cover up line😆😆



Me too...it was too much for me Damon!

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