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Writers, writers, writers!
Why is is that for every dozen things you do superbly...you murder some basics? One of the hall marks of your writing, that I have enjoyed, has been how you build your characters and the relationships between them...of course I will ignore the aberration called "Pig-headed Aditya" and his never-ending "Mara Dads Bhagwans Se" rant! 🤔
Can you please stop showing Uttara comparing what Brahma did to Devyani with her own sense of betrayal...there is absolutely no comparison at all. 😳 👎🏼 😔 😒 🤔 Brahma psychologically and verbally abused Devyani for decades. In contrast, he merely cheated Uttara in an affair she went in to eyes wide open! 😳 Do not destroy what has been, for most part, engaging and compelling writing by ignoring this.
Yours,
A loyal viewer who also happens to ❤️ your creation SJ! 😳 😆
PS: I would not mind a side character called Basanti in Maryaada to add some tadka to the Shubu - Devyani prem kahaani! ☺️
Why is is that for every dozen things you do superbly...you murder some basics? One of the hall marks of your writing, that I have enjoyed, has been how you build your characters and the relationships between them...of course I will ignore the aberration called "Pig-headed Aditya" and his never-ending "Mara Dads Bhagwans Se" rant! 🤔
Can you please stop showing Uttara comparing what Brahma did to Devyani with her own sense of betrayal...there is absolutely no comparison at all. 😳 👎🏼 😔 😒 🤔 Brahma psychologically and verbally abused Devyani for decades. In contrast, he merely cheated Uttara in an affair she went in to eyes wide open! 😳 Do not destroy what has been, for most part, engaging and compelling writing by ignoring this.
Yours,
A loyal viewer who also happens to ❤️ your creation SJ! 😳 😆
PS: I would not mind a side character called Basanti in Maryaada to add some tadka to the Shubu - Devyani prem kahaani! ☺️
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