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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: fehmida
it was very nice ...hope that cvs could read that !!

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please next part !!

Thanks so much :) yes i will post as soon as i can 😊

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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

I will make sure NA gets what she deserves ...

😆 if no post tomorrow then defo friday morning.. actually have a busy schedule

Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago

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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Part 6 - Ishu tells the truth and Rajpreet unite :)

Simran- WHAT!!! MOM!!! YOU SEPARATED RAJBEER AND PREETO ? WHY MOM WHY DID YOU DO IT? I CAN'T BELIEVE WHAT I'M HEARING ... MY OWN MOM DOING ALL THIS !!

NA- Simmi ! (weeps) I did this all for you ... your happiness ... beta you loved Rajbeer and I didn't want Preeto to get in the way ...

Simran- MOM PREETO WASN'T GETTING IN THE WAY ... BY GETTING PREETO OUT OF THE WAY WILL NOT HELP RAJBEER COME TO ME OKAY... AND WHY SHOULD I FORCE HIM ... I HAVE NO PROBLEM WITH RAJBEER AND PREETO ... I WAS UPSET BECAUSE HE DIDN'T TELL ME EARLIER ... BUT WHY DID YOU BLACK MAIL PREETO ... TELL ME THE TRUTH WHAT DID YOU SAY TO HER ??????...

NA- I swear Simmi ... maine yeh tumahri liye kiya ... isliye maine Preeto ko kaha ke tumse door rehe ... I told her she shouldn't ever come between Rajbeer and you...

Simran- HOW COULD YOU!! MUJHE TOH SHARAM ARI HAIN KE TUM MERI MOM HO... I HATE YOU MOM ... I CAN NEVER FORGIVE YOU... NEVER!!

NA- SIMMI!!! listen ...

Neelam Aunty regretted what she splurted out in anger... god!!! what have i done!!!

Simran went out the house then she got her phone and rang Rajbeer

Simran- Hello Rajbeer

Rajbeer- Hi Simmi ... gussa tanda huya?

Simran- Ha gussa tanda huya aur sach bhi saamne agaya

Rajbeer- Kya matlab

Simran told everything what her mom said to her ...

Rajbeer- hmmm mujhe pata tha koi toh baat hai ... tumhari mom ne Preeto ko black mail kiya but kaise ...

Simran- Even I don't know that ... Mom ne sirf yeh kaha that she told Preeto to get out of the way ... i can never forgive her... abhi kaha ho ? I want to meet you...

Rajbeer- Mein Preeto ke ghar par hoon ...

Simran- Preeto ke ghar ... okay i'm coming in 10 minutes...bye

Simran started her car and zoomed fast to Preeto's house ...
Everyone greeted her ... Preeto was there to ...

Simran- Sorry Preeto ... mom ki waja se ... tumhe bauth kuch suna para... really want to apologise

Preeto- It's okay Simran...

Beeji- Koi baath nahi Puthar ... acha tum log baath karo mein athi hoon ... meeta , bani zaara aao...

Rajbeer came ... and hugged her ...

Simran- I'm sorry for what I said before... I was angry at you for nothing

Rajbeer- It's okay ... tumhari galti nahi hai ... anyways i need to talk to you ... baar chalai?

Simran- Yeah sure...

Rajbeer- Simmi jo tumne kaha phone pe ... thats's can't be all ... i'm sure there's something else to ...

Simran- Yes I think I know ... Mom never treated Ishu Bhabi properly... she always had a problem with her ... mom must have black mailed Preeto for Ishu bhabhi's happiness...

Rajbeer- But why did Preeto even listen ...she could have told me ... Mein kuch na kuch toh karta ... Preeto ko kam se kam sacrifice toh nahi karna parta !

Ishu on the other hand ... heard everything ...
Preeto ne yeh saab meri khushi ke liye kiya ... apne pyaar ko kurbaan karke ...
and as usual started crying...
Rajbeer and Simran heard her and went towards her ...

Rajbeer- Ishmeet... tum roh kyun rahi ho ... tumne humari batein sunli na...

Ishu- Preeto ne yeh saab meri liye kiya ... apna pyaar ko chor kar meri khushiyo ki fikar kari thi ...

Simran- Bhabhi mom ne kya kaha... humein bataye ... Preeto ke liye please ...

Ishu- Mummy ji meri aur Dhruv ki shaadi se kabhi kush nahi thi ... woh hamesha mujhe taane deti hai ... mera haar kaam unko bhura lagta hai ... Dhruv ke saamne woh itni achi baanti hain par jaise hi Dhruv kaam se jahte hain woh mujhe bura bartaav karti hain ... Simmi tumhari pills bhi uno ne change ki thi aur blame mujh par dal diya ... jab Papa ji ki tabhiyat karab hogi maine unko note lika baatane ke liye ke mein kyun ja rahi hoon ... par Dhruv ke saamne uno ne yeh kaha ke maine nahi lika... woh mera aur dhruv ka rishta tor na chahti hain ...Dhruv bhi mujhse rootai huyen thhe... ( Crying) ...
..a..aur phir Preeto ko maine sab kuch bata di aa... woh zuroor Mummy ji ke paas gayi thi ...
isliye Dhruv mujhse baath kara he ...

Simran- Bhabhi apko mujhe batana chaiye tha ...

Ishu- Tum kabhi yakeen hi nahi karti ... par ab toh tumhe bhi pata chalge mummy ji ke bare mein...

Rajbeer- Acha ab sab kuch samaj mein ara ha hain ... Neelam aunty ne shart raki ke Preeto mujhe bhool jae aur woh ishmeet ko kuch rake gi... thats why Dhruv aur tumhara rishta teek hai ...

Simran- I hate her!!! mujhe yakeen hi nahi hora ke meri mom aisa kar sakti hai... don't worry ishu bhabhi mom ko samak sikaye ke ...

Rajbeer - Chalo Preeto se milte hain .. yeh saab toh sort out hogaya ... ab Preeto ko mana te hain ...

Rajbeer , Simmi and Ishu went ... up to Preeto ... Only Rajbeer went up to the room ... he told Simran and Ishmeet to stay out ... He held Preeto up

Preeto - Rajbeer .. tum yahan...

He put his hands on Preeto's shoulder and pulled her close to him

Rajbeer- Shhh He put his finger on her lips ...Kitna bolti ho tum ...
kisi ki nahi sunthi... tum apne aap kp kya samaj thi ho ... tum koi super women ho kya ke saab ki problems solve karti ho...
Mujhe pata hain ke tum mujhse door kyun ho ... saab pata hai ... tum yeh ishmeet ke liye kari ho na ...

Preeto - Tumhe kaise pata...

Rajbeer- Oh come on Preeto ... mein bewakoof nahi hoon ... Simran ne aur Ishmeet ne saab kuch bata diya ...

Ishmeet and Simran came in ... Simran told Preeto everything ...

Ishu- Meri liya tumne yeh kiya... itni baara balidaan apna pyaar ka ... baas Preeto baas... hor kuch mat ke ... itni baari bhi mat ban ... bauth madat karli tunai ... ab humari bari hain

Simran - Yes Preeto ... apne Raj ke pas nahi jaongi ... she pushed Rajbeer more to Preeto and laughed chalo bhabhi ...

They went ... and left Preeto alone ...

Rajbeer- Preeto please ab kisi ke liye kuch mat karna ... koi bhi problem hogi toh mujhe batana ... promise karo

Preeto - Okay Promise...

Rajbeer- Preeto trust me ... sab teekh kardu ga...

Preeto - I'm sorry Rajbeer ... please mujhe maaf kardo ... maine ap ka dil dhukaya ... par meine yeh saab ishu di ke liye kiya...

Rajbeer- Dekho Preeto ... bhool jao saab ... Neelam aunty ko toh jawab denge ...

Preeto - Nahin Rajbeer ... yeh teekh nahi hai

Rajbeer- Kya teekh nahi hain ... woh Ishu ko aur pare shaan karege ... aur Dhruv ko brainwash ... mere paas plan hain ...

Preeto - Kya?

Rajbeer- Itni kya kaldi hain ... itnai dino se mujhe door rahi .. ab mein tumhein kahi nahi jaane du ga..

Rajbeer touched Preeto's face

Rajbeer- I love you Preeto ... kabhi bhi mujhse door mat jaana ...

Preeto put her arms around Rajbeer and hugged him tightly ... Rajbeer did the same ...

Preeto- I love you too Rajbeer... mein bhi tumhare bina ji nahi sakti...

Background music - la lala lalala la la la lala lalala la ...

They both looked at each other ... and Rajbeer kissed Preeto's cheek ...
Preeto blushed and hugged Rajbeer again ... they were both happy...

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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Guys its long ... all i had time for ... next bit tomorrow :)

Neelam aunty band bajao is next bit ...where Rajbeer comes up with a plan ... hope you enjoyed this update ...

saina i fulfilled you one wish of rajpreet scene
but NA slap slap ... next update ... and then more love scenes of rajpreet ❤️... hope you all can wait ...😊

Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago

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Raj_preet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Wow Aqueela sorry dear for late jst read part 5 & part 6 aww bth are super no dragging u r straight forward loved it and old sim is back...the way u convince sim char is very good 👏

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Saina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Yay , I am on cloud 9 Aqeela for the cutest Rajpreet scene you gave

Blush Blush 😳

Very nice hamare pagal CV's ko tumhari copy dena chahiye

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fehmida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

my god !! its too good Aqueela !! its the best way to solving all this EA !! the dialogues are mind blowing because they are fit to every character !

you are very gifted ! i cant wait to read the next part where rajbeer will deal this blackmail !!

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Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Aqeelah you are a very good writer. I agree you go straight to the point and lovely dialogues. Nice Rajpreet together again. Keep up the good work.

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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Thank you so much :) Everyone :)

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Aqeelah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Part 7- Rajbeer's Plan

Rajbeer, Preeto, Ishu and Simran were in Preeto's room as Rajbeer called them ... because he had a plan but he wanted to make sure Simran was okay with it.. she said she was perfectly fine with it and that her mom deserved it and atleast it's a good way of Dhruv to get to know the truth ... this plan could be made easy but Rajbeer wanted a plan that would get Dhruv to the truth and also by Preeto and Ishu taking revenge from her ... and giving Neelam Aunty what she deserves... Rajbeer began telling the plan who was doing what ... they were in a circle... and he told ishu that she has to do the smart bit ... and that she shouldn't be afraid ... he told her to have confidence ... and that she has to make sure everything fits in ... and that if she wants Dhruv and herself to lead a happy life she has to do it... he then told Preeto that she has to do some nautanki and Simran would let him in his bedroom so he can do the recording... and then after that she has to fetch Dhruv...

The next morning Simran took Rajbeer, Preeto and Ishu to their house... so Neelam Aunty would not spot them all together... Preeto and ishu stood outside ... ready to make their entry as soon as Rajbeer goes to Simran's room ... Simran took him and he was ready with his phone ... Simran then did a wave with her hand so that Preeto and Ishu can enter ...

Preeto and Ishu went in together...
Neelam Aunty came out of the kitchen and spotted them

NA- Aao Aao Ishu ... ghar ki yaad agi ... tumhe ... par mujhe tumhari zaroorat nahi hain ... so get LOST!!!!

Rajbeer was recording this...

Ishu- Par Mummy Ji ... yeh mera ghar bhi hain

NA- Kisne kaha ke yeh tumhara ghar hain... yeh mera ghar sirf mera ...
samaj gahi ... ya samjana pare ga ...

Preeto- Ap humein dhamki dehri hain? kya karoge ?

NA- Abhi toh tumne kuch deka hi nahi ??? jab mein kuch karoongi tum darr jao gi...

Preeto- Yeh damgi se mein nahi darti ... Ishu di mummy ji ke liye chai toh lekar ayi ... mast punjabi chai ...

Ishu did as she was told ...

NA- Chalak mat bano Preeto...

Preeto- Woh toh ap hain na jisne itna bara plan banaya par absos aapka plan pani mein doob gaya ...

NA- Abhi toh mera ek mohra baki hain Preeto ... DHRUV!... mein Dhruv ko use karoongi aur bauth jald tumhari ishu ko divorce mill jayenga... dekhna tum!!! ...
kya lagta hain tumhe ... mujhe tumahari emotional fool behen nahi chaiye...

Preeto- Ap kuch nahi karsakti ... kuch nahi... pas damki deni ati hain aap ko Neelam JI!!

NA- Don't challenge me Preeto!!! I can do anything !! Dekhna chahti ho??

Ishu comes out with the tea ... on a tray ...
NA waits for ishu to come ... and makes a ugly face ... she then slams the tea with her hands so the tea falls on Ishu's hands ... Ishu screams in pain ...

Ishu- AAAHHH!!! Mummy Ji ...

NA- Dekha Preeto mein kuch bhi kar sakti hoon... do minute mein maine ishi ko chot pochai aur agar yeh meri baath nahi maanti mein isai bura hashar karoongi ... mere bete se tumhe door jaana hain you understand ISHMEET!!...

Simran was about to go down ... her mom was so evil... how can she hurt Ishu bhabhi... but Rajbeer pulled her... he whispered for her to go get Dhruv... She went immediately ...

Rajbeer stopped the video and did thumbs up to Preeto... she understood now what to do ...

Preeto went to NA and pulled her arm so she was facing towards her and slapped her on her face...

NA- HOW DARE YOU!!

Preeto slapped her again really hard...

Preeto- Apko kya laga ap meri ishu di ko chot pochaoongi aur mein dekhti rahungi ... yeh sab mein pehle bhi kar sakti thi par apne shart raki ke warna aap ke ghal mein pehli hi laal kar deti ...

NA- Just shut up!! Preeto... You will pay for it...

Preeto copied NA... making a funny face...

Preeto- You will pay for it ...!!! kya karenge aap... huh? kya...

NA- That's it... Naukrani sweep up now...

Neelam Aunty was talking to Ishu ... Ishu grabbed the broom ...
Neelam Aunty thought Ishu listened to her but she didn't even know what was coming... Ishu held the broom side ways and hit Neelam Aunty with it ... she kept hitting her... on her back ... on her waist ... on her arm...

NA- Stop this IMMATURE ACT ISHMEET!!!

Ishu- MAINE TOH AAP KI HAAR BAAT MANI ... PHIR BHI AAP MUJHSE KABHI KUSH NAHI THI ... AAP NE PREETO KO BE ISTAMALL KIYA... MERA NAAM LEKAR...

Ishmeet kept hitting her...

Ishu- Kya laga aap ko keh aap saab pe control kar sakti hain ... ab nahi ... mein apse nahi dharti sun liya...

Neelam Aunty was really shocked that Ishu stood up against her ... Preeto snatched the broom from ishu and faced it the other side ... so she's using the brush bit... she held it up to Neelam Aunty's hair and waved it around her hair so her gets messy ...
NA- What are you doing you stupid girl!??

Preeto- Kangi per rahi hoon ... ... wow new hairstyle ... pasand aiya... (laughs)

Ishu laughs to and Preeto does a high five with her ...

NA sorts her hair out ... really annoyed... she got a taste for her own medicine

Dhruv and Simran were coming in ... and Ishu spotted them ... she made a face expression to Preeto ... so she see's them ... Ishu put the broom in Neelam Aunty's hand ... she was confused ...
then ishu fell on the floor...

Ishu - Please mummy ji mujhe mat mariye... maine aisa kya kiya...??

Preeto- Neelam Aunty ... meri behen ko mat maro please...

Dhruv and Simran were watching all this... Preeto went to Neelam Aunty and was doing a drama of snatching the broom then she got it ...
Neelam Aunty was so confused...

Dhruv- MOM!! Yeh kya hora hain??

Neelam Aunty looked at Ishu...Ishu winked at her... then started weeping...

Dhruv- Ap Ishu ko jaroo se mari thi.. why he helped Ishu get up.. Ishu are you okay?

NA- Dhruv beta wo...h...

Dhruv- Ishu yeh marks?? he see's the red marks ( there the marks that she got from NA dropping the hot tea on her)

Ishu - Woh mein mummy ji ke liye chai banai... une pasand nahi ayi ... gusse se uno ne mere par dhol di... (sniffs)

Dhruv- Mom apne yeh kyun kiya?? kya hora hain ?? ek chai ke liye aapne ishu ko takleef pochai ...

NA- Yeh choot bol rahi hain beta ... I didn't do anything like that ...

Dhruv- Ap Ishu ko choota ker rahi ho? Ishu kabhi bi choot nahi bolti ...

NA- Nahi Dhruv ... why would I do this...

Rajbeer- Main batata hoon ... he came down the stairs ... tumhari mom jitni seedhi dikhti hain utni hain nahi... Neelam Aunty ne Ishu ko sirf aaj nahi chot pochai balke yeh saab kitne haafto se chal raha hain par tumne kabhi notice hi nahi kiya kyunki Neelam Aunty tumse choot bolti thi ... Saare galat kaam yeh karti thi aur blame Ishmeet par lagati thi... Simran ki goliya Ishmeet ne nahi balke Neelam Aunty ne ki... Ishu jab ghar jaana chahti thi .. woh tumhare liye note chor gayi par Neelam Aunty ne woh note par diya hoga aur phir tumse kaha ke Ishu ne koi note nahi chora... woh kabhi kush nahi thi Ishmeet se kaam se aur har waqt Ishmeet ko tanai deti thi...

Dhruv- Par Mom yeh kyun karengi ???

Preeto- Kyunki woh chahti thi ke Ishu di aur tum alag ho jaiye... woh kabhi bhi ek middle class bahu ko apne ghar lanai mein labhi kush nahi thi... woh tumhari shaadi ek ameer khandan se jor na chahti thi isliye...

Simran- Aur yeh hi nahi bhai ... woh Preeto aur Rajbeer ko bhi alag karna chahti thi ... so Rajbeer mere paas aiye ... par acha huyan ke galti se mom ke mu se saach bar agaya ... infact woh toh Preeto ko blackmail kari thi ishu bhabhi ke happiness ke liye...

NA- No beta ... I didn't...

Rajbeer- Aur abhi bhi agar tumhe yakeen na aiye toh yeh seko ...

He played the video and gave his phone to Dhruv to see his mom's true side... Dhruv watched the video ... and what his mom was saying.. NA band toh baaj gaya ...

NA- Dhruv beta ...

Dhruv- DON'T DARE CALL ME BETA!!! AAJ APKA BETA MAR GAYA ... AUR MERE LIYE MERI MOM BHI MAAR GAYI... ITNA BARA GAME KHEL KE AAPKO SHARAM NAHI AYI?? Apne Ishu ko hurt kiya!! Rajbeer aur Preeto ko alag kiya... ... Preeto ko black mail kiya... I'm ASHAMED OF YOU MOM!!! SO ASHAMED OF YOU...!!

NA- Dhruv please forgive me ...

Dhruv- You want me to forgive you... mein apko kabhi maaf nahi kar sakta... you betrayed me ... kaash mein ek anath hota ... kam se kam aaj ka din toh nahi dekhta par tha ... aur itna dhuk bhi nahi hota... he goes to him mom and spits on her her ... i hate you !!

Simran- I'm ashamed of you mom... Preeto puts her arms around Simran ... so she doesn't feel lonely...

Dhruv- Sazaa toh ap ko mile gi ...

NA- Kya matlab??

Dhruv- (on his phone) Hello Police station ... there's been an incident ... jaldi ajayi...

NA- Dhruv you can't do this ...please am begging you ...

Neelam Aunty went on the floor ... crying for forgiveness but Dhruv was not ready to forgive her and neither was Simran ...

Dhruv- No more Drama... please... agar yeh saab mujhe saach nahi batate no mujhe kabhi nahi pata chalta ke aap Ishu ko kya kari thi..

NA tried legging it out but Dhruv didn't let her ... The police came and Dhruv told them everything ... and showed the video ... that she was doing violence with her daughter in law... the police took Dhruv's, Rajbeer's, Preeto's , Ishu's and Simran's statements then arrested NA... one of the officers handcuffed her ... and took her away...
NA was shouting...

NA- Nooo!!! HELP ME PLEASE!!! DHRUV , SIMMIII!!!
Please you can't do thisss!!!!!!!

and then they put her in the police car ... at the back...

Dhruv- Rot in jail mom!!! he shouted...

Dhruv- Sorry Ishu ... maine tumhara yakeen nahi kiya... meri apni hi mom ne tumhare saath

Ishu- It's okay Dhruv ... main toh sirf yeh chahti thi ke tumhai sach pata chale ... aur agar Rajbeer nahi hota toh yeh possible nahi hota...

Dhruv- Thanks Rajbeer yaar... and I'm sorry I was mean ...

Rajbeer- It's okay yaar ... tum toh mere ache dost ho aur yeh mera farz tha ...

Simran was quiet .. Preeto asked if she was okay and she said yeah ... Preeto asked if she was happy with her and Rajbeer's relationship or not... Simran said of course she was fine ... she was just sad because of her mom but Preeto gave her a hug and said don't worry ... Rajbeer and Preeto said bye to everyone and then Rajbeer offered to drop Preeto home... Preeto agreed ...
and they chatted in the car...

Rajbeer- Ab kyun chup ho?? Neelam aunty ka sach toh bhar agaya

Preeto- Haan .. par Dhruv ko police ko bhula ke teekh kiya??

Rajbeer- Preeto woh yeh deserve karti hain ... bari ayi plan bana ke ... mera plan better tha ...

Preeto- Oh toh saara credit ap le jayenge kya ...
hahaha...

Rajbeer- Waise agli bar aisa huyan toh mujhe batana ha?

Preeto- Acha baba batao gi ...

Rajbeer- Promise karo

Preeto- ooof!! okay promise!! kush?

Rajbeer- Bauth :)

They reached Preeto's home ... they got out the car ... Rajbeer went towards Preeto...

Preeto- Thanks

Rajbeer- Ab kisliye ?

Preeto- Neelam Aunty ko ...

Rajbeer- Shhh mein tumahri liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon ...jaan bhi de sakta hoon

Preeto put her hands infront of his lips...

Preeto- Aisi baat phir kabhi mat karna?? main tumhare bina ji nahi sakti Rajbeer...

Rajbeer- Mein bhi

The long gaze in each other's eyes... smiles on their faces ... the Preeto felt shy .. she was on her way inside... stopped looked at Rajbeer ... Rajbeer opened his arms to her... Preeto ran back into Rajbeer's arms... her head on his chest ...

Rajbeer- Ab humein koi alag nahi kar saktan ...

Preeto- Ab saab teekh hain Rajbeer ...

Rajbeer- Aur teekh hona chaiye ...

Preeto- Mujhe ab jaana chaiye ... Beeji intazar kari hogi ... bauth raat hogi hain ...

Rajbeer- Nahin mein nahi choru ga ... he grabbed her even tighter ...

Preeto- Please ...Rajbeer

Rajbeer- Pehle Promise karo mujhe kaal milo gi ... shaam ko

Preeto - Okay Promise ...

He let her go ... Preeto smiled ...

Preeto - Rajbeer yahan aao She told him to come close to her ... Rajbeer lowered his head...

Rajbeer- Kya

Preeto gave him a kiss on his left cheek and ran inside...

Rajbeer smiled and touched his left cheek ...

Edited by xxAqeelahxx - 13 years ago

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