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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ankitaluv
Can't wait to see you throw the evil witch out...She is just so annoying in the show

Don't worry all my anger is gunna go towards her ... evil witch ... i will post it tomorrow night or after next bit...
thanks 4 ur comments :) makes me happy :)

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Bobby1810

@Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Aqeelah what a wonderful part 4. I am glad you are sorting the evil witch out. May be cvs need to take lessons from you. I aslo like the fact you are making Preeto's sisters stronger in character and standing by thier sister. Awesome. Thank you. Waiting for the next one.

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Part 5- Simran finds out the truth

Rajbeer- Simmi?

Simran- Rajbeer tum yahan kya kare ho?

Rajbeer- Tumse milne ayaa hoon aur kya

Simran- Kyun??? ab kya kehna baaki hain

Rajbeer- Dekho Simmi... mujhe pata hain tumhein bauth bura laga ... I'm sorry simmi par agar mujhe pehle pata hota tum mujhse pyaar karti ho toh mein pehli hi keh deta

Simran- Toh kyun nahin bataya? I feel like an idiot!

Rajbeer- No your not an idiot ... par pehle kyun nahin kahan?

Simran- Kyunki mujhe laga ke tum mujhse pyaar karte ho... mein intazaar kari thi ke tum pehle mujhe kahon...

Rajbeer- Nahin Simmi... maine tumhare baare mein aisa kabhi nahin socha... tum sirf meri ek achi dost ho aur kuch nahin... kash mein tumhein pehle Preeto ke baare mein bata deta toh yeh confusion hi nahin hota

Simran- That's your fault!

Rajbeer- I agree ke meri galti hain par Preeto ka kuch samaj nahin aata... pehle toh bauth acha waqt humne bitaya par pata nahin achanak se kya huyan ...

Simmi wiped her tears ...

Rajbeer- Kuch samaj mein nahin ataa... woh mujhe avoid kari hain isliye mein mehendi ke waqt uske paas tha usai poochne ke liya aur saab gar bar hogi ...
mujhe lagta hain kisi nain kuch kahan hain Preeto se

Rajbeer didn't know if he should say it or not... but took a risk... he looked at simmi

Rajbeer- Kya tumne Preeto se???? ...

Simran looked at him ...

Simran- What ??? your blaming me ? why would i do that?

Rajbeer- Simmi please ... I was just asking...

Simran- You know me for all these years ... how can you even think like that

She looked at Rajbeer ... he just stood there staring at her...

Simran- Oh no ... don't you dare... my mom has nothing to do with this...
i agree that she said a lot but she's my mom aur unai meri fikar thi isliye uno ne Preeto ko bura bala kahan... I know my mom she wouldn't threaten Preeto ...

Simmi started crying and rajbeer went towards her and put his arms around Simmi ... maybe he said to much ..

Simran- Just go Rajbeer ... leave me alone...

Rajbeer left her ... he hurt Simmi so much all the friendship even Dhruv broke friendship... He went to Preeto's house and told everyone he went to meet Simmi but NA and Dhruv chucked him out then he told how he climbed up to Simmi's bedroom to talk to her...

Rajbeer- Tohri upset hain par main usai achi tara jaanta hoon ... woh sayada din se gusa nahin reh sakti ... jaise hi uska gussa tanda ho jayega dhauri chali aye gi...
Preeto kaisi hain??

Beeji- Bas puthar kal se kuch nahin kayan ... apne hi kayalo mein hain

Rajbeer looked sad ... Beeji noticed this

Beeji- Tu fikar na kar puthar mein Preeto ko samjalu gi...

Simmi sat on her bed recollecting memories of her and Rajbeer ... she put her hand under her pillow to get a picture of her and Rajbeer . She looked into his beautiful eyes. All the memories came flooding back to her ... how her relationship with Rajbeer was ... they were so happy ... laughing and messing about just like kids then she came into the present ... her meeting with Preeto ... she was a nice girl but as soon as she came into Rajbeer and her life ... Rajbeer didn't give her importance all the importance went to Preeto ... she remembered the day when Rajbeer left her alone and went by Preeto... Simmi wacked her head ... she started talking to herself

Get a grip Simran... what's wrong with you... You can't think like that of Rajbeer ... he's just your friend ... but why do i find it so hard to accept that he loved Preeto and not me ... she laughed like a crazy person
Rajbeer ne toh kabhi mujhse Pyaar nahin kiya.. Kaise maine soch liya ... Paagal thi mein Paagal!!! Nahin Preeto ki koi galti nahin hain ... woh toh rajbeer se door hona chahti thi kyunki Rajbeer ne abhi yehi kahan ke Preeto usai ignore kari hain...
Rajbeer agar Preeto ko Chahta hain toh mein hi unke beech mein arahi hoon ...

Simran ... open your eyes and accept the fact ... mein apne ache dost ko nahin kona chahti ...

Suddenly at the same moment NA came into the room ... with breakfast for Simmi...

NA- Simmi beta... how you feeling now?

Simran- Better mom

NA- Yeh juice pi lo ... look i bought you your favourite breakfast.. aloo ke parathe

Simran- Thanks mom

Simmi drank her orange juice slowly but her mom knew she was thinking about something... maybe she hasn't forgotten Rajbeer yet ...

NA- Simmi ... look i know what you've been through is a lot... all because of that Preeto but beta i promise you that Rajbeer will be yours ... only yours

Simran- Mom seriously I'm okay ... and please don't try putting me and Rajbeer together... he's just my good friend ... woh Preeto ko chahta hain and I don't want to come between them ...

NA- Simmi ... I know that you haven't been able to forget Rajbeer ... I Promise na ke woh sirf tumhara hoga ... uss Preeto ko toh mein...

Simran- MOM!! what's your problem ... why are you brainwashing me ...Rajbeer aur Preeto ke dusre se pyaar karte hain... mein kyun kebab mein haadi banu... leave it mom...

Neelam aunty got really angry that her plan was ruining... she started talking loudly at Simran ...

NA- What do you mean ! purai plan pe paani pek diya tumne ... kitni mushkil se maine Preeto ko Rajbeer se door kiya ...

Neelam aunty said what she shouldn't have said in anger ... Simran couldn't believe what she was hearing ... she was shocked ...

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Madhuban Sen

@madhubansen

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

can u post dis to cvs????

no yaar seriously...love ur version...dis NA ka EA is tooo much now...

but dear let me give u credit for simmi's characterisation...u brought out her reactions & emotions very aptly...👏 👏 👏

& ur story moves way faster dan cvs...😉

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sen_madhuban
can u post dis to cvs????

no yaar seriously...love ur version...dis NA ka EA is tooo much now...

but dear let me give u credit for simmi's characterisation...u brought out her reactions & emotions very aptly...👏 👏 👏

& ur story moves way faster dan cvs...😉

Haha can i ?? i don't know where can i post it :)
and thanx for the complements ... i think i can relate to simmi very well coz i have been in that position to :)

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Bobby1810

@Bobby1810

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Aqeelah is so beautiful. I like the way you are dealing with NA and SKA. Ii wish cvs would read this. You are doing a wonderful job. Keep it up.

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fehmida

@fehmida

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

it was very nice ...hope that cvs could read that !!

👏👏👏

please next part !!

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Saina

@--Saina--

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Aqeela - You finally did justice to Simaran's character..She was very sweet initially but once the triangle started , CV's made a mockery of her character

and NA ka tho band bajna baakhi hai aur wo tumhare next part mein aayega shayad because her plan is exposed today...Can't wait for that

Your story is very straight forward and exactly how the viewers wanted to see ...No body likes dragging as they are currently doing on the show...

Great job dear👏 ...Now NA ka band bajao aur ek poora episode with cute Rajpreet scenes..😍

What say - Deal ???

Edited by ankitaluv - 13 years ago

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ankitaluv
Aqeela - You finally did justice to Simaran's character..She was very sweet initially but once the triangle started , CV's made a mockery of her character
and NA ka tho band bajna baakhi hai aur wo tumhare next part mein aayega shayad because her plan is exposed today...Can't wait for that

Your story is very straight forward and exactly how the viewers wanted to see ...No body likes dragging as they are currently doing on the show...

Great job dear👏 ...Now NA ka band bajao aur ek poora episode with cute Rajpreet scenes..😍

What say - Deal ???

I will try my best to fulfill your wish 😊

i didn't want to drag it myself ... u guys have seen enuff of that :)

i will band bajao of the DAYAN!! give me a day :) sochna pare ga 😆

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Aqeelah

@xxAqeelahxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Bobby1810
Aqeelah is so beautiful. I like the way you are dealing with NA and SKA. Ii wish cvs would read this. You are doing a wonderful job. Keep it up.

Thank you bobby :) <3 I haven't dealt with NA properly... :) but i will try to do my best ...

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