FF Completed: Hurdles and Hesitation (Index: Pg 1)

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Shari30

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: Mimoha
Sharmishtha will give a review later. For the moment🤗 for posting part 8 also today.

Mimoha I will take credit for that one... I nagged her😛

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: oaz30

Mimoha I will take credit for that one... I nagged her😛

She did. 😆 I will vouch for that. 😃

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ApoorvaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Sharmistha,

the story is building up very nicely. I should congratulate you for keeping the entire plot ready and going with right amount of pace and speed.

So Nidhi got into closure now... and it is natural for her. She has seen the social dynamics for the first time and got the taste of the tough world...

Ashu tried to put a step forward... That is good but because of his reserved nature he cannot and may not push her into serious situation

Now sudden accident for Ashu... His realization and also Nidhi also got her clarity of thought back...

Very good progress. I liked Anji and Armaan well. they both are giving matured and balanced support to Ashu and Nidhi.

It is good that now Ashu knows that there is a hurdle in the form of BABA and he is ready to face it along with Nidhi. From Ashu's side this is a very very big step. If this life and death situation does not come, he will not be bold enough to take such a step...

You have dealt the progress in relation very well... I liked both the chapters.

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: AMBIKA2561979
👏👏❤️...love you for your wonderful FF's

Thanks Ambika. 😊

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Mimoha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

Hi Sharmishtha. Thanks for the V Day gift. Both parts were brilliant.

This is what I made of A's & N's hide and seek.

Pre-accident - Both of them have feelings for each other but the deciding factor for taking the relationship forward or not is each other's happiness i.e. A realised after the wedding incident that N's happiness lies with him and tries to get over his hesitation. He wanted to be away from her initially for her happiness and then be with her for happiness. Similarly, N initially wanted A to give their relationship a shot because she felt that he might find happiness in it and then, after the wedding incident, wanted to step back again for his sake.

Post accident, both realise that their own happiness lies with other and, that becomes the deciding factor for taking the relationship further. Dont know whether I understood it correctly but this journey from 'I know I am your happiness' to 'You are my happiness' was beautiful.

Liked the accident twist. Found "Main kahan gayi thi?" so cute. If only they show something like this in the show, Kritika would say it so cutely. Could not help notice the handkerchief moment and 'wiping the tears' moment. You completed the scene that creatives ended abruptly.

When KTLK started, I was hoping that it would deviate from DK on Baba's acceptance. He was more eager for the match than Ahmer and Zoya themselves. KTLK did deviate but the way they are going about it makes me cringe. I am curious to read how you handle this deviation.

I hope we are getting an update today too.

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Mimoha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: oaz30

Mimoha I will take credit for that one... I nagged her😛

Well done Sharifa. You get the credit for it...I hope you are ensuring that we get an update today too.

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

Originally posted by: RRANAMIKA
yaar, ashu's state was unexpected.

chaliye, ise un dono ka pyar mazbooth ho jaye...
expecting...
amazingly written.
so in this story instead of rohan anji-arman are match makers??????????
continue soon.

Thanks dear 😊 The bond of love grows after surviving bad times!!

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vasanthi16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

Two chapters back to back...a big big 🤗to u and to sharifa who pestered u.

Biggest plus point in ur FF...LOGIC. The story is flowing so smoothly that i hate it when i can't read further. So now i am going to pester u to update soon !😆

Ashu realised that he can't live without Nidz and she alone is his happiness...aww...the way it came about...very nice and unique...there was no other stronger way as he could have been stubborn in not wanting to hurt her by pursuing this relation. So well written and portrayed !!

The absolute panic when Nidz felt when she saw him in that state and then the doctor in her taking over was apt...the breakdown afterwards too was correct after she realises that he is stable !!

Loved Anji and Armaan too...Anji is the friend she should have relied on from the beginning...this Anji gives the correct advice and does not pressurise her.

Baba's reaction again so correct...Ashu 's reaction to this also perfect...knowing that she has Ashu at her side will give Nidz confidence she needs to face Baba and convince him when the time comes.

👏👍🏼❤️...A very Happy Valentine's day to u Mish...thanks for the lovely gift !!!

Update soon...am gonna pester u now !!!

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sharmishtha02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Originally posted by: tinu.jindal
aaawww missshhh
i so love u for the double updates...
just amazingly written
ashu feeling for nids...missing her chirpiness. ...is thourghlly visible in part 7...ashu injured...nids caring for himm is just superb...
armaan is nice...anji. i actuaally loved her tooo... .

part 8 is superb too...Ashu accepting nids abt his feelings...nids anji convo...them talking to baba...lastly ashu nids together...ashu saying nids he wanted to see ger face b4 gettibg uncounsciouss...everythibg is just wow...
loved it to core mishhh
a big hug to u
love u
u r the best

Thanks a lot Tinu 🤗