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Posted: 13 years ago
how abt kingdom of devil
and hey kiddo finished writing update kya
and sona jaldi se pick the tittle dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
oOo this one is good too😆😆😆

hey payal
how are you!😳
Am almost done guys
will post in 5 minutes😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

hi payal 🤗 🤗 🤗

hi dear and bye dear hey guys me going my pc time is up have to go sorry will update if i get my pc back otherwise tomorrow afternoon for sure sorry but i am only done with the 75% of the part other 25 % is still to write will write it and post it as soon as i can sorry 😊to disapoint u guys but can't help it sorry
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Posted: 13 years ago
so select na simi jaldi se aajj he tittle hojayega yaar
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
shetan ke saaya
his soul mate
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Posted: 13 years ago
Okay guys,

So I will go with MuraadlovesDD Idea..where Maan will be portrayed as a modern king..it will be another dark story with romance on the side as well...

So now all that remains is the title...😆😆
Give your suggestions/ideas for the title..so far its Kingdom of fear or evil, Shetan ke kaid mein angle, Shetan ki Angle, etc...anything that may sound evil 😆😆😆
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 77

Months passed away and now Geet was eight months pregnant...Maan made sure to fulfill Geet's every need and her every weird cravings that she would get...her parents would often visit them...Maan kept a pretty friendly relationship with her parents but still refrained from calling them mom and dad...it still pained him to even hear those words..he was happy for Geet that she got such loving parents..if only his life was like hers...maybe everything worked out for the best..

His own dad would come by to see Geet and to check up on and whenever he did...Maan never made any contact with him nor spoke with him..he still can't forgive him...what he did changed his whole life...Geet never brought it up with him about his father after that day like she promised but he knows that it has always been inside her head...she is like an open book he knows everything about her even her thoughts...

"Maan..what are you thinking about?"

Maan (looks at Geet who was lying against him caressing her belly) hmm nothing...just thinking about life

Geet (snuggles closer to him) like what?

Maan: like how much you have changed me and how you completed my life

Geet: Well you have yourself to thank for that because if you hadn't kidnapped me and married me then I wouldn't be here

Maan (looks at her) I had caused you a lot of pain hadn't I?

Geet: Yes but now you gave me double the happiness...you completed my life Maan (she kisses him on his lips...)

Maan: Same here...(he hugs her back) Geet what do you think of my father?

Geet: nothing...whatever makes you happy Maan..I am always with you

Maan: I know...but I don't know

Geet: what happened Maan

Maan: I don't know..do you think I am giving you a complete family?

Geet; what are you talking about? Of course you are...we both are happy and our baby is going to be happy to that she is getting two parents that will love her a lot...(Maan nodes..she puts her hand on top of his chest..) Maan just listen to your heart...do whatever you think its right...I will support you no matter what...

Maan: that is the thing Geet...I know you are always there for me...but I don't know anymore..I don't know what decision to make...I don't know what my heart wants

Geet: Then until you do don't worry about it..am sure you will find your answers soon...(Geet gasps...Maan looks at her worried..)

Maan: Geet what happened..the baby kicked?

Geet (nodes her head yes) she did but aahhh (she screams again in pain...) I think I am going into labor

Maan: now...you are not due for another month

Geet: I know...aahh..Maan...(she holds on to his collar...)

Maan: Nakul! (he yells...Nakul comes to the bedroom) get the car out...(he quickly nodes his head and leaves...Maan picks Geet up carefully she holds on to him) its okay Geet..

Geet: Maan it hurts..the baby...

Maan: nothing will happen to the baby...I won't let it...trust me...(he gently puts her in the back of the car and gets in...she puts her head on his lap...) hurry Nakul...(On the way Maan calls her parents to tell them to come to the hospital...he pats her head...as soon as the car stops in front of the hospital he carries her inside...) DOCTOR! (he yells from the top of his lungs not caring about anyone else...he puts her on the stretcher and grabs the first doctor he sees...) she is going into premature labor..do something...

"Okay lets bring her inside..." Maan moves in to go inside with Geet..."sorry you cannot go inside..you have to wait right here..."

Maan: she is my wife and she needs me...

"sorry you need to wait here and we will call you if anything..."

Maan: okay ohh and if anything happens to both of them then I won't spare you guys! Understand! (the doctor nodes his head yes...Maan paces back and fourth..an half hour had passed by and still there was no news of Geet...her parents had arrived long ago was also waiting for some news with worry...

Mohindar: Maan beta calm down..am sure she is fine

Maan: No I can't..not until I know both are fine...

Rano: Beta if you are like this then how will you able to calm Geet...god forbid if something happened

Maan: NOTHING WILL HAPPEN TO MY KID..(he looks at them with anger..Rano looks at Maan with fear...Maan walks away in anger..."nothing will happen to Geet and Pari...nothing..." He smacks the wall in frustration and not being able to get the answers..every minute was killing him...taking his breath away not knowing how Geet is...he wanted to see her...he turns around when someone puts a hand on his shoulder...he saw his father standing there...he holds Maan's hand giving him a reassurance...) Geet..

Rajvir: Nothing will happen to the baby...

Maan: how did you come here?

Rajvir: Geet's parents had called me here...here..(he hands him a thread...) I got this from temple..if you can tie this on her arm...it will protect them both...

Maan: why did you

Rajvir: You are my son and I am here for you no matter what even if you don't need me...I will not ask for your forgiveness and will wait for you to forgive me on your own

"Sir your wife is calling you..." A nurse came to inform Maan...he looks at Rajvir before leaving...Maan goes inside and saw Geet lying on the bed with eyes closed...he holds her hand...she looks at him with a smile...

Maan: its going to be okay

Geet: I know as long as you are with me...

Maan: looks like Pari wants to come out sooner (he smiles...)

Geet: Yeah

"Okay Mrs.Khruana are you ready to push now?" (she nodes her head...Geet pushes holding Maan's hand tightly...she lies down...) "keep going I need another push..."

Geet; i can't...

Maan: Come on Geet..yes you can...push...(she pushes again...)

"Okay almost there..two more pushes...I can see the head..."

Geet: No I can't...I am tired

Maan: Geet come on...(she closes her eyes...not responding..Maan becomes worried..) Geet...wake up...(she slowly opens her eyes with tears...)

Geet: the baby...I can't

"The mother is tired..if we don't get the baby out it could die inside the womb..."

Maan (looks shocked..he tried to wake up Geet but couldn't...) what do you suggest doctor...

"We can't do c-section since the baby is half way out...we need to put a vacuum suction to get the baby out..."

Maan: What?!

"we have no other option...we have five minutes to get the baby out or else it could suffocate" (he orders the nurses to get the materials...Maan holds Geet's hand..."Okay here we go..." (he applies a suction gently to the head...) "Okay the baby is coming out..." (Maan sighs in relief...the baby finally comes out...Geet sits up a little with happiness...) "Its a baby girl...Nurse the baby is not breathing...quick get the oxygen...)

Maan; what happened (he goes near the baby...) give me my baby...(he holds Pari in his hands...) Come on Pari get up

"Mr. Khruana put the baby on this table...) (Maan gently does so...the doctor applies little pressure with his two fingers on her heart to get it pumping...)

Geet (cries..) Maan baby...what happened..(Maan goes to her and holds her hand)

Maan: its okay nothing will happen to the baby...(he puts his hand in his pocket and sees a thread that his father gave to him...he goes to Pari and puts the thread around her neck...) come on Pari..we all waited for you..you are the angle we need...don't leave us (he whispers in her ear with tears...he goes and holds her hand as the doctor tries to get her breathing...)

Geet: I want my baby...Pari (The doctors stop after few minutes..Maan looks at the doctor shocked...)

Maan; what happened...

"Am sorry"

Maan: MOVE...(He holds Pari in his hand and brings it to Geet...) Pari get up..you have to come for your mom...for me...Pari...(he sits near Geet..she holds Pari's hand...) Please wake up..please...(his tears drop on her face...) I will never be a shetan again..I will always love you..please wake up

Pari kicks her leg...Maan and Geet looks at the baby with a smile...

Maan: doctor the baby kicked..doctor

The nurses came and grabbed Pari...

"i can't believe this..its a miracle...we will need to put her under observation..."

Geet: Will she be okay

"yes she will be..."

Maan hugs Geet..."I told you that she is our Pari and that nothing will happen to her...how are you feeling now?"

Geet: am tired...(maan kisses her on her lips)

Maan: Thanks for giving me another greatest present I could ask for...(he lies down next to her...the doctor gives them Pari and leaves the room..Geet holds Pari in her hands as Maan watches two of his ladies with joy and happiness...)

Okay so the vacuum idea was used in 3 idiots...
Epilogue will be up 2marow😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

shetan ke saaya
his soul mate

her soul mate
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Posted: 13 years ago
😊

awsome end dear...finally shetan got his pari back...😊

sad that this ff has come to an end...and glad that you are starting new one tooo...

will miss you my dear shetan😭
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem maan got pari vaccum idea used



Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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