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Posted: 13 years ago
LIKE TAB NOT WORKING
AWESOME UPDATE
HE SHOULD HAVE ANSWERED HER QUESTION
HE LET GO OF THE OPPORTUNITY
DADI IS TOO CLEVER
SHE WILL MAKE THEM CONFESS
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 60

Things were quite amusing for her, she found him lately being more possessive and bossy, though he was his same goody goody self one but still she felt something different, she many a times found him looking at her with a twinkle in his eyes which resembled to the twinkle in Angel's eyes when she held her most loved toy, was he thinking her as his possessed toy, no he certainly did not think that she was some life less doll, she shrugged and scolded herself for thinking too much.

Days were passing and as days went into weeks she had also developed a special bond with Sameera, yes she talked to her almost every day, she also has started calling her Di, initially DM was reluctant but now she was ok with it, moreover Di was good but had different views about life that was all, the best thing was Di knew so much about Maan and this fascinated her.

She was hurrying as she was getting late for her college, and she ran out almost missing her breakfast but then: GEET

G: yes (she halted and turned to face Maan)

M: breakfast

G: am getting late

M: lame excuse, sit down

G: but

M: eat and then go you can make it on time if you stop arguing

DM smiled as Geet sheepishly sat and ate

M: eat properly

G: I can't when I am in a hurry

M: ok then take cornflakes, Nakul cut some fruits and add to the cornflakes

She sighed and ate looking now and then at her watch

M: time won't stop with your stares

G: um

She finished quickly and rushed

M: this girl, ok DM I shall also leave

DM: bye Beta, Bye Geet

G: Bye DM

She came out and rushed to her car and kept the things in it and called Ram Babu, Maan walked near her and pulled her and placed a helmet on her head

G: Maan what is this

M: I'll drop you Ram Babu will bring your things

G: Bike???

M: yes, it will be faster, just take few things

G: will it be ok

M: definitely

He wore a steel grey helmet and sat on the bike she was amused and sat behind him

M: Geet cross legs

G: pardon

M: sit with legs on either side, girl this is a bike you will fall otherwise

G: but

M: u are getting late

G: ok

M: hold me

She kept her hands on his either shoulders

He shrugged and pulled her hands and made her hold his waist, she gasped but before she could protests he started the bike and she clung on him.

Prithvi and Iqbal followed him on their bikes

She was thrilled to ride on a bike, it was amazing, it felt so good to hold him like she was his second skin, and she blushed as the thought her mind, just then he applied brakes and she was pushed more on his back, she looked around it was a traffic signal he stopped and pulled off his helmet and winked at her, she could feel her cheeks burning, she dared not to meet his gaze, he smiled straightened his hair with his fingers and wore the helmet.

She prayed to her Babajee to let her reach college fast before she faints with desire caused by his fascinating aroma, she noticed that now he was applying brakes more than necessary, she got it, he was liking the way she held him like second skin, she would die soon if she did not get off the bike.

Her prayers were answered, he stopped the bike and squeezed her hand, she opened her eyes oh her college, though she was praying for the college to come but now felt reluctant to leave him, she with a ting of annoyance left his waist and got off the bike, as she pulled her helmet and he took his off, she noticed a smirk on his face, she was about to say something but

M: are you ok?

G: ye.. yes

M: (placed his palm on her cheek) they are burning, you are flushed

G: n' no' its just

M: you are stammering (he smirked)

G: it's just that' I am not used to sitting on a bike

M: oh only that I thought

G: you thought (her eyes widened)

M: forget it, now I shall leave, bye

G: bye


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part 61 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53423525

Edited by smj1977.shruti - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
great update
both of them enjoying the bike ride
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update!!
never thought that a bike ride can be sooo hot!!
continue soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeah maan bhi na
it was really nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice update👏
i like ur ff but y u r not updating frequently😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update..
awww the bike ride was surprising..
gud to c them enjoying it..
luved it..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
bike ride was amazing...
but geet hay weird thoughts showing me signals 4 future storm...
cont
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
plzzz update next asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing one..
I loved the ride bike...
Omg!i m luving maan's smirk..!

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