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kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

wow yaar lovely, yeh kya twist aya alanta 🤗 vasant slapped kesu 😲 n yeh sab kya hoing yaar? i mean y gullu bimaar? kesu chor k gaya is liye? kesu gullu ko y chor gaya, uff so many questions, jaldi se update kar yar me desperate to read further 😃, loved the update dear n sorry itna late comment dene k liye 😳

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sauris

@sauris

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Knock.. Knock...Alanta kaha hai tu,jaldi se aaakee update kar😭

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kiran_trudecent

@kiran_trudecent

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

alanta yaar update where? 🤔

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

If Silence could ever speak climax part

Vasanth stood there with raging anger ..Kesar was shocked to see his usually calm and pleasing brother like this; who only ever eased his pain has now literally slapped him, which was completely out of his logics...but on a second thought, he felt ..it was all just what he truly deserved..he lowered his eyes with the heaviness of guilt which was killing him by each passing second..

Vasanth:(in a painful voice of being betrayed) Tho yeh waja thi, jis se tuje ab tak hum sab se dur rehna pada..(in a disappointed tone) meine sapne main bhi nahin socha tha ki..(left it incompleted)

Kesar: Vasanthbha...mera yakeen kijiye..kya aap ko lagtha hein ki aapka Kesuda kabhi aap ko koi dukh pahuncha saktha hein...(trying hard to supress his weep)..muje laga ki shaayad mera dur jaana hi sahi hoga...bas (lowered his head while trying to hide his tears)

[Gulaal was standing coldly at a corner, Vasanth glanced at her for a while and then turned to Kesar with a questioning glare]

Vasanth(in a mean voice): Tera yun hi dur jaane se kuch bhi nahin honewala..tu sach main chahtha hein ki sab kuch teek hojaye?? (Kesar raised his eyes a bit, while Vasanth continued)..tho aaje isi waqth (intending Gulaal) iski saamne mujse vaada kar ki Gulaal ki naam bhi hamesha hamesha ke liye apni yadon se mita dega..uski khayalon se hamesha hamesha dur rahega..vaada kar ki uski pyaar ko hamesha hamesha ke liye apni dil se hata dega..(his voice cracked while tears over flowed his eyes. ) Vaada kar Kesar??

(Kesar got a jolt in his mind )

Vasanth (with a smirk): Kyun?? nahin hoga tujse??..(and with a defeated expression, he stepped back..while Kesar tried to speak)

Kesar: Vasanthbha mein..

Vasanth(In a weak voice) Tu ne apne Vasanthbha ko hara hi diya Kesar..hara hi diya tune

Kesar:(biwildered): Vasanthbha

Vasanth:(holding his shoulders, being so hurt) Aisa kyun socha tu ne...ki...ki mein teri dulhan ko tujse cheen lunga?? kyun Kesuda??

(Kesar being not able to perceive what he has heard, he tried to read Vasanth's face in biwilderment, and looked at Gulaal whom was leaning to the table beside for support)

Vasanth:Woh thapad isliye tha thaki tuje hosh nahin tha ki tu kya kar raha tha..pichle teen salon se yeh bechari teri intzaar main rah raha tha..aur badle main tu ne kya diya ise ?? aur dard?? meine tuje isliye thapad maara thaki tuje uss dard ka thoda sa bhi mehsoos ho...Kyun kar raha tha yeh sab..?? apne Vasanthbha keliye?? Aise kaise soch liya tu ki agar apne apko aise maarke teri zindgi agar muje degi tho mein usse khushi khushi sweekar kar lenge?? jab ki tu achi tarah jaantha hein ki teri khushi hi mera sab kuch hein..(and looking at Gulaal) aur tu Gulaal?? tu yeh kya karne jaa raha tha?? agar Dushyanth sahi waqth par muje sab kuch na bathaya hotha tho??(in a bit scared tone)mein soch bhi nahin saktha tha ki kya hojatha...

[Vasanth was really confused hearing that Gulaal gave her consent to their wedding and that too the very next day of when Kesar told him about their love through the phone and Vasanth was really happy for them..and he tried many times to talk with her on the same, but never got a chance and it was during the sangeet night that Dushyanth informed him the truth and the further ceremonies were stopped by him and he promised Gulaal that he will find out Kesar any how and will unite them]

Vasanth(in a serious yet caring tone): Jo insaan apne pyaar ke liye Kurbaaniyan sehthe hein woh dusre se pyaar aur bharosa jeethe hein...lekin jo apni pyaar ko hi kurbaan karthe hein..woh apne aap ko dhoka dethe hein..(he patted Kesar's cheeks and turned to Gulaal and placed his hand over her head)

Vasanth(tears of joy brimming in his eyes): Meine tujse apna vaada nibhaaya hein..tera Kesar ko dhoondkar tere saamne khada kar diya hein..(Gulaal smiled at him gratefully he took a deep sigh and with a smile of satisfaction he looked at both of them) Kesar..jab se tu ne muje teri Gulaal ke barein main bathaya tha na,...tabse tum dono ko aise saath saath dekhne ko bahut chaaha tha meine..aur aaj mein bahut khush hun..bahut khush..and Kesar smiled widely at him through his tears(Vasanth wiped his tears and happily left the room)

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[Kesar hesitantly looked at Gulaal with his guilt ridden eyes, while Gulaal tried hard to look away to hide her pain,...Kesar pulled her towards him by her arms and made her look at him, while Gulaal tried hard to get out of his hold..but Kesar forcily hugged her, she tried to push him and hit on his shoulders, but he didnt move and finaly she gave up and cried bitterly in his arms, for all which Kesar just stood enclosing her in his arms and took all her pain and silent accusations]

Gulaal:(wept) Tu ne muje bahut dard diya hein ,mein tuje kabhi maaf nahin karungi Kesar,..kabhi maaf nahin karungi..

Kesar(in a pacifying tone) mat karna Gulaal, kabhi maaf mat karna(he tightened his hold over her while she clutched on to him)

...after some time, Gulaal has calmed down and her eyes were closed

Kesar: Gulaal..kya hum dost bane??

Gulaal:(nodded in disagreement)hh..hhum..(in a shattered voice)..Kyun kiya tu ne aisa??

Kesar:Because I love you...beyond my life and above all my happiness..I love you so much

Gulaal(escaped from her mouth): I love you too...(they stood there in each other's arms healing the wounds of the past 3 years)

And finally Gulsar united..but they never were seperated..

Because their souls never were parted.

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The only feeling that hurts and heals at the same time...

The only emotion that gets rejected and reciprocated in the mean while...

The only language of heart that could be spoken through silence...

If silence could ever speak the language of heart;

The language of love...

THE END😊

Edited by alanta - 13 years ago

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

THANK YOU🤗

Thank u all those who encouraged me in the form of likes and comments..your comments always means alot...I sincerely thank all of you and apologizes if it is a boring one...please do comment even if u didnt like it..so that let me know...please😊

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Aditi Mehta

@enchanted23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

reswa😊 yay me 1st!!!

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"Three years ago I walked along the familiar path with a hope in my heart and belief of my mind to search for a soul left behind all those year ago…and then I found the elixir of life only the cruel fate snatched it away before I could even marvel at my find, three years on the search seems to have ended as my soul finds me…circle of love begins and ends with you and me…. ..."

Beautiful chappi Alanta👏, you have brought about a fitting end to a very intriguing story and I for once never expected Dushy to paly the cupid for GK but I guess that was inevitable as Gulaal was hell bent on being Galool and Kesar had already taken a step to run away…..

I hope you can bring another one soon😍……You are amazingly talented Alanta🤗 whether it's VM or Photo Album or these short FFs they are all amazingly thought out with excellent creative and aesthetic presentation in terms of VMs and albums and stories are beautifully penned…so I really won't like to deprive myself from such talent and creativity, Please do bring on new one…..please…a big hugwa in anticipation🤗

Edited by enchanted23 - 13 years ago

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MR21

@MR21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

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Alanta...tum ne end kardiya ithni jaldi...

Thanks to dushy that he stopped vasant before getting married..warna kya ho jaatha...

Kesar needs that slap n gullu bhi vasant se shaadi karne waali thi na...usse kuch nahi kahaa vasant ne...

The last bit is very sweet n emotional...too good...

Alanta..this is too good yaar...ab jaldi se kuch nayaa waala hum sab ke liye laa...

Edited by MR21 - 13 years ago

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Piu Chatterjee

@Transference

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Res 😭OMG YE KHATAM😭

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: minizz
Alanta,finished reading but will comment later as I am going out now.Take care😃

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lovely chapter. I enjoyed it so much.the reunion was perfect- emotional and beautiful. bechara Kesar forgot everything else.The moment was just about him and his Gulaal before he realizes his so called "paap"😆Alanta,that was too funny I know I am being insensitive to Kesar and Gulaal's pain but when I came to that bit I just couldn't control my laughter.very clever of you to make Kesar say that.It felt so natural.Kesar,pehle jaan tho lo ki aakhir real story kya hai.tum tho bas aise hi Galool mode mein jaa rahe ho.loved the ending.eagerly waiting to know what happens next.please update soon.and Alanta bigger chapter next time please😭

hi Mini...Thank u so much for ur lovely comments dear..I updated the next too...waapas aake pad lena Take care

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alanta

@alanta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: enchanted23
Ahh! Love thy other name is trust and when that's broken by misinterpretation can cause devastations that's so difficult to mend'..

The first meeting in three years'same passion, care, longing and devotion restrained by the change in dynamics of their relationships'albeit in his eyes only'..She is still trying to fathom how and why of this changed equation and then the famous words "paap" aww Kesar'Can't blame him he truly believes that she is out of bound and the exile that he endured for three years was come to terms with her decision'one thing he forgot was that he was punishing all other innocents in this like his parents, sister and brother besides himself' ..but again this is Kesar na his word begins and ends with Gulaal'

So this time it's Vasant's turn to open his eyes to reality, he so deserves to see the other side of the coin, he has always looked at things from his side but it's time he understood and accepted the fact that running away from reality never did solve anything'.

Lovely update Alanta🤗'Please update next part soon'..😊

Aditi...thank u so much for ur comments and support..it always encourages me a lot..waiting for ur comments on the next...😊