~Ajnabi Kaun ho Tum~ Part 2 --5/2 see Modnote pg 6

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@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

she recognised him instantly..but didnt he recognise her..what made him so cold in those 7 yrs that he didnt even recognise her..😕...or may be..he never remembered her like she did......for him it was jus his passing time..😕...anyways..entry to dashing thi...specs and gel black hai...kya baat hai..😳😳...wud luv to see more of the dashing hero..go on puri...👏😳..

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shreya

@XoxowpdXoxo

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

nice part di😊

iska matlab ye koi bhootiya story nahi asli ki hai thank god...phew😆😆😆 lekin ye to bohot chhota part tha na😳😊

purvi ko to pata bhi nahi chala ki wo kab waapis chala gaya uske liye letter aur gift chhod ke thoda sad to hui lekin uski behen ne zaada der rehne nahi diya hoga apni badabad se😉😆

but itni kam age me apni mumma ki death news sunna upar se uske dad dipression me plus uski behen kitna painful hua hoga uske liye sabkuch manage karna😭😔

aur baad me usne apne ajnabee ko to pehchaan liya lekin aise bilkul changed way me i hope wo ajnabee bhi use pehchaan le i mean jeet but ye samajh me nahi aaya ki purvi ke papa jeet ko kaise jaante the jo unhone jeet ke paas jane ko kaha😕😕

very eagerly waiting for the next part di😊😉

continue soon😊

shreya😊

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

part 2
oh nice names...
waise Purvi, have u used ur shortened name for that?
poor Purvi...
and Jeet seems to have forgotten her...
cont soon dear...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow...sachhi maza aa gaya padh ke...😃

n finally pata bhi chal gaya ke yeh bhutiya fic nahi hai...mera toh dil hi tod diya tumne...😆

jokes apart...

n second WOW...for kya gift mila hai Purvi ko...n wo sweet sa letter bhi...😃

see...dono hi ek dushre pe kafi impressed the...dono hi ek dushre ke liye uss spl birthday night me ek dushre ke dil me bhi ek spl jagah bhi bana li thi...!!! zahir karrta hai wo letter...😃😳

par uss ke baad kafi kuch bura ho gaya purvi ke sath...

toh sadde hero da naam JEET hai...😃

par uss ne toh purvi ko pehchana hi nahi...par purvi ne jhat se pehchan liya...ab dekhna hai ke kab Jeet pehchan pata hai Purvi ko...😃

chalo abhi next part jaldi cont karo...😃

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lallulal2010

@lallulal2010

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

lovely story. the family backgrounds of both jeet and purvi remind me alot of kasam se. update soon, and hope jeet realises who purvi is soon... :)

waise mujhe to 1st part se hi kuch bhutiya nahi laga😕...lekin kaash isme do-chaar bhoot-pret aur bhatakti aatmae hoti😆...tab na story thori-thori haunted 3-d jaisi ho jaati; aaj kal ke bhoot bhi na, kaisi kaisi harkate kar lete hain😆😉...the part was very chotu..bada wala part is required sooon...

vidushi.

PS:- jeet sadda rajeev hi hai na; nahi bhi hai to main use imagine kar loongi😆

Edited by lallulal2010 - 13 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Okay...so we get a 7 years leap..and more than that...we get the names!!😆😆 Its Jeet kapoor 😳😳😳 & Purvi..Verma I guess!!😕😆 Doesnt matter though...uske surname se mujhe kya!! Shaadi ke baad waise bhi change ho jata hai..😆😆

Coming to the point...Jeet has becum totally stone-cold..😕...wonder wat happened with him in these 7 years!! And much bigger question is...why Purvi's father sent them to Kapoor mansion..😕 anyways..Purvi achhi ladki hai..hero ko kya dekha...bhul hi nahi payi...😉...jhat se pehchaan liya!! Hope she stays like this..and doesnt show nakhra like Nandini...😆😆

Thanks for the PM btw...hope to read Kitni Ajeeb hai...soon!! 😊

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Meli/Melz/Aahanaa

@Aahaana

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Hey,

This FF is not your own work, you have plaglarized someone elses work and here is the link for the original FF:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kasamh-se/345990/ajnabi-completed-finally

Kindly refrain from copying others work and pass it as your own work as its ethically and morally wrong.

Regards,
FF Dev Team

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