~Ajnabi Kaun ho Tum~ Part 2 --5/2 see Modnote pg 6 - Page 2

aur agar hui bhi toh kya...!!! dekh lo...bhoot bhi raj se itne impress ho gaye ki...apni shaitani dimag chod kar raj ki khatirdari me lagg gaye...ise kehte hain charm...😛😆

aur rahi baat 2005 aur 2012 k mystery ki toh...yeh wo kuch points hain jinhe le kar main iss bhoot bani ladki ko le kar doubted hoon...

ab ajnabi ki bhi ek sweety chopra hai...jiss me cheeni ki jagah namak hai...warna raj itni tarif nahi karrta...😆

Originally posted by: Innocent_eyes

Hey puri...another FF...thts superb ...n m the first one to comment...--dats good 😃😆

that is mind blowing 👏👏👏 love u dear 🤗🤗🤗, n yes love the title "Ajnabi Kaun ho Tum" -- thanku 😳😳

clearly depicting the story... love both of them the strander n the girl she is sho cute n lovely-- 😃😃

oh the stranger was so angry k nothing is going in his favor today, the car is broken, even the phone isn't working in such weather also he had to drive all the way to Panchgani n above all its raining n he hates rain😆😆😆 becharai...--- when 1 thing goes wrong eventually other things go wrong also 😆😆😆 poor hero saari pareshani ek saath 😆😆😆

but koi nahi agai ap ki yeh evening achi hi guzrai gi 😆😆😆so finally he got a shelter wrna to sardi k marai halat buri ho jati...n shelter bhi kia it looks like a bhoot bangla😆😆...but their is a prncess inside this bhoot banglow who is very cute...--- 😆😆😆

the girl is very confident, tho she was alone in the house but she ask the stranger to come inside n wait here till the rain stops an also she gave him tea and dinner. --- in her place i cud have never done dat 😆😆😆

she is really matured like other girls of her age...like the way thy r talking strting from aking the phone call n yes tht was hillarious whn he said merai ghr main 6 naukar, 3 driver, 2 maali, 2 cook, 4 guards and 1 Butler hain 🤣🤣🤣...😆😆😆

So today is her birthday n she is missing her family, nice idea of celebration by the stranger...oh to stranger has a girl friend too, n when he say to her his GF name Mishti Chopra n said .Magar usmein Mithas jaisi koi baat nahin hai was really funny 😆 😆 😆 ...--- 😆😆😆 poor hero GF select karne se pehle sochna chaiye tha 😆😆😆

h to the little girl is talking sense to the Ajnabi that he'll realise what true love is wen the right person comes in his life 😍 😍 ...so finally the convo end n thy both drifted to sleep but subah jaisi hi wo larki uthti hai he was no where, usai to aik dream sa laga...--- ab itna dreamy ajnabi aaega 😍 toh every1 wud feel its a dream 😳😳😳😳

Cont soon

Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

Isme hasne ki kya baat thi 😡...it was so beautiful..⭐️😃😳...--thanku 😳😳😳

grossing..in the first part itself..and what a good time to send pm..when m free at home and missing my IF friends...😊...---dats good 😃😃
ab jaldi jaldi cont karna...aur dusri wali ff bhi..reply nhi karti to kya hua..padti to hu..😆😆--- 😆😆😆 updated dat too 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: suhana.dixit

Hi Puri-- hi 😃

Loved the concept of this new fiction.👏👏--- thanku 😳😳😳

Aisa ajnabhi ghar par aa jaaye to kya baat hai 😉😉 but Crime Petrol dekhne ke baad usko aisi raat mein enrty dene ki himmat kuchh hi log kar payenge😆😆😆--- & i dont fall into that category 😆😆😆😆 only if ajnabi happens to be same 😳😳😳

enough joking seriously update was very gud.👏-- thanku 😳😳

I cud imagine Rajeev's expressions while he was stuck in that lonely place..😳😳---😆😆😆

I think this story starts in the year 2005 when that "ajanbi" meets this sweet girl on her 18th birthday and then will move to 2012.(Its just my guess)--- smart guess lets see 😈

both will definetely remember this night and each other for sure😃-- 😆😆

That girl surely went out of her way to welcome Rajeev at her place.😊 he too showed genuine interest in her activities.--- 😳😳😳

How old is he if his niece and nephew r of the same age group as this girl??-- he is around 34-35 😳😆 though age is just a number 😆😆😆😆 & age difference plays important role here 😉😆

Pls continue soon--sure 😳

Bye

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

oye yaarrr ! ek aur fic !!!

me happy happy ! 😃--- good to know u happy else pehli line padhke i got scared ... "ek aur fic" 🤣

beautifully written..-- "thanku 😳

but puri, should i confess something?-- confess 😆😆 hero ki bimaari lag gayi I confess 😆😆😆

mujhe na last paragraph start hone tak yeh koi bhoot waali story lag rahi thi...😛 😆---- bhoot wali 😆😆😆

Kyun? toh sun...

ab tu hi soch...barsaat ki andheri raat...jungle ke beech gaadi kharab...

Kisi purane se makan mein hero jaata hai

waha ek young ladki darwaza kholti hai aur usse andar bhi leti hai...

phir uss ladki ka uski khatirdaari karna...phone ka dead hona...

Aur ladki ka baar baar andar kisi kamre mein jakar kuch na kuch lekar aana...

and

CHERRY ON THE TOP...2005 ka birthday card! i mean..i seriously thought ki ladki 2005 mein apne birthday waale din mar gayi...(since its 2012 now) 😆--- 🤣 Romantic story ko horror story bana diya 😆😆😆😆 waise i wonder kaunsa bhoot statistics padhta hai 😆😆😆😆 waise on second thots main bhoot kise banati 😆😆😆 hero ko toh banane se rahi 😆😆😆 & heroine ko banati toh bechara mera hero bina heroine ke rehta poori fic mein 😆😆😆😆

But thank god aisa kuch nahi hai...-- 😳😳😳

coz agar aisa hota, toh u'd have lost your one reader for sure...!

Main apni baat kar rahi hu yaar...kyunki mujhe bhooto se bahot darr lagta hai... 😆--- awww doctor hokar bhoot se dar lagta hai 😆😆😆😆

Update soon !

Originally posted by: Sumi_162710

Shocked to main hui hu sabse Zyada!! Puchho why?? ah well...chhoro...tum puchh bhi rahi hogi to mujhe kahan pata chalne wala hai...Chalo main aise hi bata deti hu...😆 Mujhe ek pal ke liye laga tha Kitni Ajeeb Hai Ye Zindagi is over...and was like..haww...isne itni jaldi 3/4 UDs me fic kaise khatam kar di?😆😆--- dat means u are still following dat FF 😆😆😆😆& dont worry its not ending soon maharani is too nakhrewali there 😆😆😆

But phew...aisa kuch nahi hai...its just a new fic..😃

Starting bahut unique hai I wud say...heroine kaun hai uski mujhe fikr nahi hai...I dont need a face for that...😆😆...Hero is allI care abt...😳--- 😳😳😳
...and thats why I wud like to knw..if he is gonna have a name...or do we have to call him Mr. Stranger?😳 I hope the title is not for us...😉😆--- now is he stranger to us 😳😳😳woh bhi uski angels ke liye 😆😆😆😆

Ladki bahut himmat wali hai waise...bas aise hi kisiko ghar me ane diya and kitni khatirdaari bhi kii...😆😆...not that I mind...😉...in fact am glad ki mere Hero ki achhi tarah se khyal rakha usne...not like Nandini jisse Raj ki fikr hoke bhi nahi hai..😆--- 😆😆😆 she also cares for hero u didn't read the part woh hero ko doctor ke bhi lekar gayi thi 😛😛😆

Wud like to see this story moving forward dear...this is a brilliant start..😃 But I still dont understand...why u were laughing on the PM...😕😆...clear that one pls!!😆😳 ---aise hi laughing 😆😆😆😆 coz i didn't knew how the first part turned out 😆😆😆😆
And thanks for the PM btw..😳😃