ArHi FF: Tum Jo Aye: Ch6 Pg47 Nov9

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Hey peez. 🤗 Khushi here to share Arnav-Khushi FF. How I wish I was the same Khushi 😛 Any who, this is my first FF on this couple. I write tons of other FF's too. And I already juggle hard through them. But can't stop myself from sharing this piece of work as well. So, get ready to get bored 'Cuz I'm gonna torture you 😆

After a lot of thinking, I came up with a name.

So presenting:Tum Jo Aye!

Here it goes:

A daughter

Yearning for both parents' love.

Sets out on a journey

Filled with troubles and only troubles.

Will she be able to achieve her mission?

Will she get what she truly wants?


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(Teal = Arnav. Blue = Khushi)

You came in my life. That's destiny.

Everything turned out to be ok. But it wasn't enough.

You left me. I'm sorry!

I don't care. I still love you.

Do you? Don't I?

I'll always be there. I wish I can stay.

________________________________________________

It all happened when we met again.

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Please add .ArHi_Paradise. for pmz on updates.

So what do you think? Should I continue? Please do let me know! Already typing the first part. So depending on the feedback I receive, I'll decide on posting it on not 😳 Check the post below for Index.

Edited by ..first.rain.. - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I n d e x .

(Pages are hyper-linked)

Intro Page 1

Chapter 1 - Happy Birthday Mommy! Page 9

Chapter 2 - I want to go. Page 18

Chapter 3 - The Plan. Page 28

Chapter 4 - Fate plays the wand. Page 40

Chapter 5 - Eyes can be Tricky! Page 44

Chapter 6 - What a Meeting! Page 47

Chapter 7 -


Edited by ..first.rain.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i hate you. how dare you ask if u should continue?!?!! DO IT NOWW!!

ps i love the teal and blue!! im wearing those exactly colors 😉 Though I doubt that was a big surprise to you haah😆

Its really good dude! Continue it like asap!! And i Love the banner!! Animated and everything!! Now all you need is a VM 😉

Okay so I thought the lines were very well done and I really liked how it showed so much yet nothing 😃 Just like my sentence made no sense ahah 🤣

Anyway, I hope you do continue and get loads of comments 😉

And yes I know you write loads but this will be updated regularly 😉 Coming from the lazy writer regularly has a very diff meaning so don't worry 😛


Edited by AquaBluez17 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh new FF! (: You should definitely continue!

It sounds really interesting, and if you have a PM list could you add me to it? Thankss!

--Garima
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hmm, nice...sounds very promising!! 😊 Looking forward to reading your FF. Hope you update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm one more ff! funny how you write so many ffz and none of them are any where near finishing and you are adding one more!

well, cool all the best :) and congratulations on ur first arhi ff!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woah! I was expecting Mya and Monal to comment for sure. But this fast replies from others 😲 Don't worry. It's pleasant surprise. Will reply to everyone later and garima, I'm going to make a PM account depending on readers. So whatever the outcome, I'll def. add you :D

Monal - Thanks sis! Well, you know how it goes. Can't stop me from writing 😳

Mya- your reply will be long. So will do later 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i love it plz cont
and plz pm when u do:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking FORWARD :) 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Looking Forward to it...

Continue soon!!

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