When Arnav let Khushi into his darkness..cmpleted

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Lily2011

@Lily2011

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

nice os. arnav's was too much.

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
First lalit mohan's status and now this!!!!! People, let me enjoy today's episode... I'm crying and crying and crying after reading this... Please continue soon... I'm loving the trust and the bond between our love birds...

Waiting for the next part... Thanks for the PM!

Thanks dear..will hopefully finish it tomorrow...enough of tragedy for today 😊

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honeypriya

@honeypriya

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+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Hey nice OS Priya. U know wat i have problems reading long hindi dialogues 😳 I'd enjoy more if it's in english but if it's too hard work i'm ok with it. Awesome work!!!

Thanks dear😊 its hard work to write in hindi too 😊 would prefer to keep in english...but just that it got into too much hindi in the flow...will try keep tht in mind!!!

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natashaa46

@natashaa46

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#44

lovely piece of writing 😊

plzzz continue ...n PM me

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maaloo

@maaloo

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#45

WOW 👏

Thats amazing .. W8ing for more

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#46

woah that's painful atleast he can finally tell someone!!!

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himabindu05

@himabindu05

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Thats so full of sadness...Its like U have seen inside his heart...the pain of losing a loved one...On such a joyous occasion...The scene is so sensitively written...beautiful...Priya!! I really want such a scene in the serial...Please do continue...

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amisuv

@amisuv

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Part 2- very interesting but logical & rational thinking...Priya, promise me that if this FF of urs makes in to the show in some way, u turn professional...Keep up the gud work 👍🏼