Ab aage kya? Anya FF. *Part 6 updated on pg.8* - Page 7

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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
OMG...you write so well. I just got to read this FF today and I was so hooked I had to read all the parts at 1 go. I so can imagine AnYa doing all the scenes you have written.

I now can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62
wow..one more superb part for the FF.. The way you describe the scenes is really amazing.. i loved the AC scene a lot..it was verycute..You have great writing skill..write the next one quicker..I am eagerly waiitng ot read it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63
Fabulous update. The AC scene was so romantic...
Loved the friendly banter between the two.
A very beautiful gift, indeed, for his beloved, from Anant.
Please pen down the next one, soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#64
Very cute ya! 👏 I felt i could hear lalalalalalalala in the background the whole time😳

I like your use of emoticons : 😃 😡 😳 , your comments and your bracketed expressions ...

Thank you very much...please be back soon with more!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#65
Amazingly romantic!!
AC wala scene toh besht tha!!!

Maha Eye Locking☺️is the signature step of ANya towards each other and I love the sizzling chemistry that is being created between the two!!

AWESOME!!!!!❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#66

Strawberry..u r simply awesome...n guess what? when i saw the latest promo (ananth in black n navi in white...like a fairy) gosh...i thot the cvs stole the white dress wala idea from ur ff...n now the gift wrapped in blue...yeah...ananth actually is going to gift her somthing wrapped in blue...n when i saw part of ur ffs out of my mind n on screen, i wish now that the long drive n ac scene too comes true...part 5 n 6 of ur ffs have given me a lot of goosebumps, the way u have described ananth mesmerised by navi, their long drive n then the AC scene...i tell u...u deserve a big 👏👏👏👏 for creating such a beautiful scene...believe me, i was actually visualising navya in white after reading ur ff n when i saw thathe latest promo...my heart stopped beating...i wish the cvs gave u one episode to direct some really magical anya scenes as in ur ffs!!! n once the party is over on the show, i bet we r going to have a lot of torture to bear in the form of shitster manipulating ananth n navya back to tears...ive decided ill stick to ur ffs...if the cvs r not going to cut dn on shitsters!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: strawberry111

Hey guysss. sosososo sorry havent updated in so long. but its been a maha busy week - and then my internet stopped working for a couple days... but anyways here you go PART 6:



Anant (with a fake stern voice): Uff. Navya. surprise bhi koi cheez hoti hain na? Tum bas chup chap baiton aur dekho. Actually nahi nahi. Tumhe chup hone ke liye nahi kehna chahiye... nahi toh tum sacchi kuch nahi bologi.

Navya (starts laughing): Thik hain. ab main is baare main koi baat nahi karungi.

Anant: lekin baat toh karogi na?

Navya: 😆 Haan baba

Navya is feeling cold... She starts wrapping her dupatta around and trying to warm her arms... She goes to turn off the AC... And Anant notices, and reaches to do the same... As they both go for the AC button at the same time, their hands touch 😳 and of course a MAHA eye locking session 😃

Navya moves her hand first (of course). And Anant is just looking at her. He turns down the AC and then slowly reaches over and holds her hand :) More smiling and sharmaa-ing and blushing 😳

Anant: Navya tum sacchi mein chup ho gayi?

Navya: Nahi... woh... main... (thinks to herself: oh god. main kya bolu?)

Anant: accha koi baat nahi. main hi bol deta hoon - dono ke liye :)


i loved this portion specially...and you have an amazing talent of making the characters alive in writing...i could actually visualize AnYa word by word as you said...keep up the good work👍🏼

Edited by TheRoopsy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#68
superbb part!!! awesome dialouges... but it was small..plzzz continuee asap..with a big part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
hey i read all the parts...its totally awesome...👏👍🏼

loved the bro-sis bonding of nimisha and anant...😃😆

just loved it to the cores...😛

can't wait for anya romance in their dinner date...😳😍

please continue soon and add me to ur pm list...😉😊

regards,
arushi

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