Ab aage kya? Anya FF. *Part 6 updated on pg.8* - Page 5

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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry posted twice😳
Edited by navyaalex8 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi strawberry...SO glad that you've posted part 4, esp after the bekaar saas-bahu episode today🤢...very cute ...love your sidenotes and bracketed impressions ...looking forward to reading the next part...well done n thank u!😃

PS:How steamy is steamy going to be?😉😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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simply luvd part 4... 👏
waiting 4 part 5... 😍 😍
plzzz continue as soon as possi... ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome! your sensibility of expressing is really good...you pick up the correct dialogues which they might use in their conversation...bingo! you strike well...keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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😉 hey strawberry, reading ur ffs is much more romantic than AnYa's first date of the mahaepisode...loved the dialogues of appy-ritz, they r angels in the guise of friends...always there for navi, thru every emotion of hers...loved the way u penned their dialogues teasing ananth...wish the cvs wud do a fraction of such things...
n u really need to get on to the CVs team...uve got such lovely ideas...whereas the hilltop scene was not as mesmerising as the cvs cud have made it...hope they dont ruin navyas bday party with all the stretching they r doing...
anyways, do keep updating...after yesday, i feel that its better coming here directly rather than watching the crap the cvs r giving us offlate!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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First off, just want to thank you alll sooo much!!! I wasn't expecting this much love and praise and it really means a lot!! I'm glad you all are liking the fan fic :)

Here goes, Part 5:

Back at Navya's house, all sigh with relief.

Mom: Chalo accha hua. Is hi bahane bechari ka mann bhi lag jaayega aur humko tayaari karne ka mauka bhi mil jaayega.

Papa (frantically checking off a mental list): Haan, Jaldi karo! kitna kaam baaki hain. Harsh, tum Renuka ko phone kar ke dekho. Aur Meeta, tum aur Ma khana dekho... waqt zyaada nahi hain hamare paas. Aur main... main decorations lagana shuru karta hoon. Aur Navya ki gift aagayi kya...? Aur kuch...? Sab bilkul perfect hona chahiye aaj meri bacchi ke liye 😊

Mom: Haan baba. sab le aayi hoon. aap chinta mat karo. sab ho jaayega. Chal Harsh, jaldi haat chala.

Harsh: Waise papa, aap ne kitni baje bola hain Bandariya ko wapas aane?

Papa: Yahi, kuch 10:30 baje...

Harsh: KYA!? 😡 ohf ho. lekin hum toh 12 baje surprise kar rahe hain. usse pehle Navya aagayi, toh saara plan choppat ho jaayega! Sab dekhle gi woh!

Daadi: Yeh baat toh bilkul sahi kahi. Saare kiya karaya pe paani phir jaayega. Ab ka karenge hum?

All three sit down to think of a solution...

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Back in Anant's car...

Both Anant and Navya are sitting quietly. They're nervous and awkward, and don't know where to start 😛

Anant keeps turning and glancing at Navya (bechara road ko kam, Navya ko zyaada dekh raha hain 😆).

Navya looks up, and catches him staring at her... another intense eye lock 😳 😳 Until finally, hamari bechari Navya can't take it anymore... she looks down and starts blushing 😳

Anant (with a cute heartmelting smile): Navya ek baat kahun?

Navya: Haan?

Anant: Aaj tum sach mein bahut acchi lag rahi ho. 😉

Navya (blushes and looks down😳... then at Anant): Thanks... Tum bhi 😊

Anant (playfully): Jaanta hoon. 😆

This breaks the awkwardness and both of them start laughing. 😆😆

Anant: Pata hain? Mujhe toh thodi der ke liye laga ki tum aaogi hi nahin... Papa, Daadi, Ma, sabko kaise pata liya?

Navya (starts out softly): Woh... mujhe toh kuch samaj hi nahi aa raha tha. (begins to progressively lighten up) Lekin Ritz aur Appy...(now smiling + being her bubbly self) Ritz aur Appy ne Papa aur Ma se kaha ki hum teeno movie dekhne jaa rahe hain... Aur pata hain? Papa maan bhi gaye!! 😃 😃 😃 Mujhe toh abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hain! 😃

Navya stops as she notices Anant isn't responding... just staring at her...

Navya (softly asks): Kya?

Anant (sweetly smiles): Nahi kuch nahi... woh... (looks away and then back at her) woh... tum jab aise hasti ho toh aur bhi acchi lagti ho 😳

Lots of nazre chura-ing and smiling and sharmaa-ing all around 😉 😳 😊

Anant (clears his throat playfully to say something): Haan. lekin ek baat hain... jiskeliye mujhe tumhare Papa aur Daadi zaroor daantenge.

Navya 😲: Kya?

Anant (flirtily): Unki bholi si Navya ko itni badi jhoothi jo bana diya 😛 😆

Navya smiles and guiltily looks down and then at Anant again. They make eye contact and stare deeply into each other's eyes... haiii 😳 😳 😳

...When all of a sudden...

Navya (snaps back to reality and yells): ANANT!!! Dekho...!!

--------------------------End of Part 5 -----------
teehee cliff hanger ending ;) check back soon for updates!
Edited by strawberry111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
awesome yaar,update it soon waiting👏👏👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
Part 4 & 5 both were Awesome👏👏..Loved your scene😳s..Cant wait for the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
awesome update..but it was short..plzzz...next time..update a bigger parttt..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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VAH - re VAH!!!!
Wish you were the CV! 😊
Total fun - no Rama!!!! Way to GO... pl add me to your PM list

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