Ab aage kya? Anya FF. *Part 6 updated on pg.8* - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
OMG!!!
Very nice!!

Lekin yeh kya??!!

Anant dekho??!!

Koi accident karwaaane ka iraadi to nahin hai na??!!😕

I hope not!!

Otherwise, its absolutely fantastic!!👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Nice!😃

Like the dialogues, they must be difficult to write but you make it look effortless...Surely there's more seeing as they now have to be out till raat ko baarah baje😳...sigh

PS- Yes, it's steamy enuff heheehee and looks like there's scope for more😛...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
what happen next update.,pls do it soon eagerly waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
Superb... ur FFs r gr8... but wat is 'anant dekho"... hopefully not an accident... 😕 the best thing is no rama... Keep writing.. w8ing for the rest..!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
hey hersheys! (have i said it right?)
i only just got round to reading parts 3, 4 & 5 and loved them all to the core!
you seriously write so well! i could picturise anant & navya n the rest acting out all the scenes just like you've written them...loving Anya's chemistry and all the cute moments 😊 eagerly waiting for part 6 now...hope there's no accident involved though!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
awesum imagination . I really Like ANYA chemistry...

Spl deirs Vamp in yours episode/part

Eagerly waiting 4 next part
Hope you write soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57

Fabulous👏❤️...

You seem to breathe life, into the characters... Could really visualise the scenes, vividly...
Hope to read the next update, very soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58
Hey guysss. sosososo sorry havent updated in so long. but its been a maha busy week - and then my internet stopped working for a couple days... but anyways here you go PART 6:

(ps. before i start, just have to say - omgsh... finally Navi says it!! ahh so proud of her. gosh, the serial finally stopped dragging... am very excited)

.. okay enough of my rant about the show... now Part 6!

Navya (snaps back to reality and yells): ANANT!!! Dekho...!!

Anant (shocked): Kya!? Kya hua Navya? (he comes to his senses, looks at the road and just swerves in time to avoid hitting the curb)

Navya: Anant tum road pe dhyaan do! Kya kar rahe ho?

Anant: Navya... chill yaar. (Navya gives him a gussa wala look 😡) Accha accha, thik hai baba aaj ma'am ko gussa nahi karenge...

Anant keeps on driving... after a couple seconds of silence...

Anant: Waise galti tumhari hi hain.

Navya: Kya? 😲 Meri galti? Kaise?

Anant: Kis ne kahan tha tumhe itni acchi lagne ko? 😳 mera dhyaan hi nahi tik raha hain.

(Navya blushes and smiles to herself)

Navya: (breaking the silence now) uhh... accha Anant hum kahan jaa rahe hain?

Anant (with a fake stern voice): Uff. Navya. surprise bhi koi cheez hoti hain na? Tum bas chup chap baiton aur dekho. Actually nahi nahi. Tumhe chup hone ke liye nahi kehna chahiye... nahi toh tum sacchi kuch nahi bologi.

Navya (starts laughing): Thik hain. ab main is baare main koi baat nahi karungi.

Anant: lekin baat toh karogi na?

Navya: 😆 Haan baba

Navya is feeling cold... She starts wrapping her dupatta around and trying to warm her arms... She goes to turn off the AC... And Anant notices, and reaches to do the same... As they both go for the AC button at the same time, their hands touch 😳 and of course a MAHA eye locking session 😃

Navya moves her hand first (of course). And Anant is just looking at her. He turns down the AC and then slowly reaches over and holds her hand :) More smiling and sharmaa-ing and blushing 😳

Anant: Navya tum sacchi mein chup ho gayi?

Navya: Nahi... woh... main... (thinks to herself: oh god. main kya bolu?)

Anant: accha koi baat nahi. main hi bol deta hoon - dono ke liye :)

Anant breaks the ice and Anant and Navya start talking/ flirting/ laughing and having lotss of fun

Navya: Waise yahi mere liye kaafi bada surprise hain Anant. Yahi, ki tum aa gaye aur Papa ne bhi permission de di.

Anant: Arre abhi toh surprises shuru bhi nahi hue hain. Waise surprises ke naam se yaad aaya... Peeche dekhna woh mere kuch papers rakhe honge... woh dena mujhe.

Navya: (Turns to look) Nahin Anant... Yahan kuch bhi nahin hain.

Anant: Tume tikh se nahin dekh rahi ho. dono aankh khol ke dekho...

Navya: Lekin Anant, main keh rahi hoon na... yahan koi papers nahi hain.

Anant: Navya 😡 phir se dekho.

Navya looks again. and sees no papers. She's getting gussa now and thinks, oh ho kya zidh pakar liya hain isne. And then just as she is going to turn back around, she sees a tiny box wrapped in Blue paper... with her name on it.

Navya: Anant yeh kya? Anant smiles as she pulls out a sterling silver necklace with an "N" on it.

Anant: Happy Birthday Navya 😳

--------------------------------------------------END of Part 6------------------------------
Hope y'all enjoyed :)


Edited by strawberry111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: strawberry111



Navya is feeling cold... She starts wrapping her dupatta around and trying to warm her arms... She goes to turn off the AC... And Anant notices, and reaches to do the same... As they both go for the AC button at the same time, their hands touch 😳 and of course a MAHA eye locking session 😃

Navya moves her hand first (of course). And Anant is just looking at her. He turns down the AC and then slowly reaches over and holds her hand :) More smiling and sharmaa-ing and blushing 😳
firstly, i dunno about anyone else but just reading this particular scene gave me goosebumps 😳 LOL 😆


heyy! yet again another brilliantly written scene 😃 you never fail to keep me hooked and curious to know what's going to happen next...i'm loving anya's chemistry & this FF to the core, well done once again and lemme just point out - i'm SO relieved there was no accident involved! lol 😆
Edited by Ruxana91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
superb ya ,awesome written,waiting for next part how navya react in seeing the gift.super creativity, keep going and going

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