Ab aage kya? Anya FF. *Part 6 updated on pg.8* - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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😳 Okay...Part 3
Before I begin: Thank you sososooso much for all your love and positivity!! Makes me that much more excited to continue :)

Okay, ab Part 3... sach mein... =p
(ps. sorry will have to wait till monday - jam packed weekend - for Anya scenes... I want them to be superrr cute... aur thoda suspense tho banta hai na? =p)

buttt fikar not, in store for today is a good replacement: cute Ritz+Appy+Navya interaction... and of course our fav: Anant + Nimisha nok-jhok... Enjoy!

(Scene starts in Anant's house... He's in his room, getting ready, being nervous, making sure he looks okay, you know... typical 😆)

Enter Nimisha

Nimisha: Wah bhai. Kya baat hain? aaj bare handsome dikh rahe ho 😉(gives Anant a look)

Anant (his eyes light up 😃😳): Sach!!!? (then Anant realizes, and tones it down... ) uhh... mera matlab... sach? Main toh roz hi aisa lagta hoon. Teri aankhein toh thik hai? Chachiji ko keh ke check karaou?

Nimmi: Haan, haan, bhai. aap kuch bhi bolo. Main jaanti hoon... (walks over to Anant to playfully pinch his cheek as she says...) aaj is Chand se chehre pe, todhi zyaada hi roshni hain. 😛 😆 😉

(Anant shoos her off)

Nimmi (teasingly): Waise bhai, aap jaa kaha rahe ho? Kuch khaas hain kya?

Anant (stuttering, and quite embarrased 😳): Na..nahin toh. Main to bas... main to bas aise hi... kuch doston se milne...

Nimmi: Doston se? (raises eyebrow) ... ya aapki "special" dost se? 😆😉

(no response from Anant... so Nimmi continues)

Nimmi: Accha bhai. itni raat ko!? Permission mil gayi?

Anant: Permission? (shakes his head no) nahi toh. akhir, tum kab kaam aaogi? Yahan pe sab sambhaal le na. thik?

Nimmi: Haan bhai bilkul. 👍🏼 (sly smile and "special" emphasis on the word "special" =p) aap to bas apni "special" night enjoy kariye... apni "special" dost ke saath 😛

Anant: Sun, mujhe ab zyaada tang mat kar. (Anant pushes her towards the door) Tu jaa. Mujhe tayaar hone de.

Nimmi: Bhai. aur kitna sajjo ge? Koi dulhan thodi ho? 😛

Anant (playful anger😡): Nimmi! tu jaati hain ya...

Nimmi: Jaa rahi hoon, jaa rahi hoon. Aap ko toh baad main dekhloungi.

(Nimmi leaves than pops her head back into the room to say something)

Uh, Bhai, bas ek aur baat... aap Navya ko meri taraf se "Hi" zaroor bol dena.

(Nimmi winks 😉 then leaves and Anant is left smiling to himself 😃 😃.)

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(Back in the Mishra household, Ritz and Appy are celebrating their success and trying (keyword, trying) to get Navya ready)

Appy: Chal Navya, ab tayaar ho. Aaj toh bilkul Ash ke jaise dikh na hain. Hai, kaash mera bhi koi Abhishek hota... (Appy gazes off dreamily)

Ritz: Appy, tu phir shuru gayi! Navya, aa na.

Navya: Ritz, Appy, main nahi jaa sakti.

Ritz + Appy (thinking kya karenge is ladki ke saath 😡): Navya!?! phir se? ab toh permission bhi mil gayi!

Navya: Haan par... woh...

Ritz: woh kya Navya? ab kya problem hain?

Navya (sits on her bed and looks down): Main kya pehenungi? Mere paas toh koi special dress bhi nahin hain. 😔

Appy: KYA!? Itne saare kapre toh hain!! Chal Ritz kuch dhoondhte hain...

(Appy takes out a cute, simple pink suit)

Ritz (shoots Appy a look, and quietly mouths): White!

(Navya sees)

Navya: Kya kahan tumne?

(Ritz and Appy guiltily look at one another again 😳 and then at Navya and all three start giggling)

Navya: Is Anant ko toh dekhloungi main. 😆

(Ritz goes over and pulls out another salwaar suit)
Ritz: yeh? Yeh accha hain!

Navya: Nahi. bahut purana hain.

Ritz: Purana? par Navya tu ne isse toh ek baar bhi nahi pehna...

(Navya shakes her head "no")

Appy: Accha toh yeh? (showing Navya another Churidaar)

Navya: Iska rang kitna feeka hain! Aur kaam dekho... kitna simple hain.

Ritz: Thik hain... yeh? (yet another outfit...)

Navya: Ritz... isme main Navya kam, marshmallow zyaada lagungi.

And so it continues, dress after dress... humari Navya ko kuch pasand aa hi nahi raha hain...

(Navya sits on the bed dejectedly - next to all her clothes, that are now on the bed too😆)

Navya: Chodo na. Mere paas kuch bhi accha nahi hain...

Appy (sits next to her and teases her): kya baat hain Navya? Pehle kabhi itne nakhre nahi dekhe tumhare? Koi naye rang nikal aaye hain kya? 😉

Navya: Nahi woh bas... Anant kya soche ga... aur usne toh "white" bhi kahan tha na. aur white main...

(Oops! Navya realizes what she said, and clamps her mouth shut. 😛)

Appy: Aii haii, Navya ji. Itna sharmana. 😉 😳

Navya: Appy chup! Kuch bhi bolti hain. Aisa kuch nahi hain. Mujhe koi farak nahi parta, kuch bhi pehn lungi.

Ritz: ohf ho. tum dono bhi...

(Then something catches Ritz's eye...)

Ritz: Navya... yeh... (she pulls out a stunning white net and sequin churidaar) yeh kitna sundar dress hain...

(Navya is dazing off, not paying attention.)

Appy (shakes Navya): Navya! Dekh toh!

(Navya finally looks up and sees the suit... and her whole face lights up in a hugeee smile 😃 😃 😃 She runs up and hugs Ritz and Appy)

Navya: Haan! Yeh Perfect hain. Bilkul perfect. :)

--------------------------------End of Part 3-------------------------------------------

Hope you all enjoyed!! And UP NEXT: Finally!! Anya's "date" =p hehehe

(also, I know ki Ritz, Appy, Nimisha already know about Anant-Navya... but still wanted to show the playfulness and the sharmana, especially since this will be their first time alone... at night... together... ;))


Edited by strawberry111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Awesome but still disappointed no ANYA Scenes ok waiting for the update ,PM me when u update,thanks for the immediate update of part 3
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg!!!!!!! tooo good...hats off to your creativity👏...it is just awesome...hope aisa hi kuch ho serial mein bhi...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Awesome ff. Eagerly awaiting for the next updates. Hope they come our way very soon. Please pm me when you update.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Wow the 1st 2 parts are mind blowing and sooo cuteee. You have given CVs enough fodder for 2 episodes 👏👍🏼.Just hope that they see this forum and take clues from you 😉. It would be a treat to watch these scenes. Congrats dear for such creativity. Eagerly waiting for Part 3. Do add me in ur PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
both part 2 n part 3 were awesome...but no anya scenes??? plzz..update soon...n next time...more anya scenes...with a long n big update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
very good imagination, nice script, waiting for part 2
kash cv's aisa he karte
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
hi strawberry, just loved the self talk of navya that u made in start of part2...i always love her self talk...n the three friends, just loved what u penned down...
nimisha n ananth's convo was superb...just took me back to her engagement day convo of theirs...when he was getting dressed...just loved this line of urs...aaj is Chand se chehre pe, todhi zyaada hi roshni hain...
as abt navya getting dressed, wud the cvs so that much detail?? shes so very simple, so it wud be a treat to see her getting dressed for him specially...and really waiting for part 4...their meeting...when he first sets his eyes on her...am going back to see the road-crossing scene...just waiting to see them together...relaxed n happy.after the mahaepisode...after getting shitsters off their minds n our screens!!!...
do pm me when u post part4!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
just too good ya...awesome creativity...love the way ritz and appy always come to rescue navya in part 2 and annat-nimisha convo in part 3 " aaj is Chand se chehre pe, todhi zyaada hi roshni hain. 😛 😆 😉" yeh toh best tha...waiting eagerly for "the big date"...keep up the good work!
Edited by TheRoopsy - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Oved the part. Nimishas and Anants bondint is really gute and nice

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