Ab aage kya? Anya FF. *Part 6 updated on pg.8*

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi all... so this is a cute scenario of what follows navya's question. (as seen in the maha epi promo) you could call it a fanfic i guess, but more so dialoge. Enjoy :)

ps. it's my first, so sorry in advance for any mistakes... hope you like!

pps. the italics are for actions and thoughts of the characters... (its a bit harder to portray that without video, but will try my best!)

**disclaimer: obvs. none of the characters are mine, none of the songs, scenery... etcetc.**

N (Navya): ab aage kya?

A (Anant): (pauses for a while after seeing the fear and worry on Navya's face) aage... uhh... aage tum bas dekhti jao

Navya looks at Anant with a confused expression... Anant continues:

accha, Navya mere liye ek chota sa kaam karogi.

N: Kya?

A: pehle promise karo... ki tum karogi.
N: Anant, yeh kya bachpanna hain... kya karna hain?

A (in Anant's typical ziddhi voice): nahi, pehle promise Navya! Mujh pe bharosa hain na

N: haan hain. accha teek hai, promise kiya. ab bolo kya?

A: (smiles his million dollar smile ๐Ÿ˜ƒ) aaj sham, teek 8 baje... mujhe apni building ke neeche milna.
Aur haan, white pehen na. tum pe bahut accha lagta hain.

N: (blushes, then snaps back to her senses) Anant, yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Pagal ho gaye ho?

A: (in a very flirty voice ๐Ÿ˜‰) Haan ji, pagal hi hoon. aapke pyaar -

N: (cuts him off) Anant, main mazak nahi kar rahi hoon. Shaam ko?!? Tumse milna?!? Woh bhi mere building ke neeche?! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ Papa ya daadi ne dekhliya toh ho gayi chutthi. nahi, main nahi mil sakti.

A (๐Ÿ˜ก): Navya! Tumne promise kiya. ab kuch nahi sun na hain mujhe.

N: (Her typical super scared expression ๐Ÿ˜ฒ) Lekin Anant... main... kaise...

A: (puts his hands in his ears and starts saying loudly...) Nahi. Nahi. Nahi. Mujhe kuch nahi pata. Main 8 baje tumhare building ke neeche pahunch jaonga. tumhe lene. tum aaja na. varna... varna mujhe hi uppar aana parega.

N: (thinks OMGSH. Oh no!! ๐Ÿ˜•) Anant... Anant, tum aisa kuch bhi nahi karoge.

A (laughing): Navya, sach? yeh tum keh rahi ho? abhi tak nahi jaani mujhe? ๐Ÿ˜† Tumhi batao, aaj tak kitne chakkar laga liye maine tumhari "padosi" ke ghar ke?

Main aisa bilkul karunga.

par haan. iis baar uppar aa gaya toh seedha ghar main ghus jaonga, soch lo ๐Ÿ˜‰
(gets up to leave)

N (calls out after him): Lekin anant...

A (turns back): Lekin, vekin kuch nahi. 8'oclock sharp. aur white - bhoolna nahi.


---- that's all for now :) Part 2 coming soon!! do tell me what you think... all critiques and comments are welcome! :)

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unknown2341 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very cute lines and romantic also,awesome creativity,please continue part 2
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ๐Ÿ˜Š i'm ruxana, what can i call you?
that was a a very well written post ๐Ÿ‘ enjoyed reading it and i can't wait for when both Anant & Navya will, like in your FF, really start acting like a typical couple...teasing each other, and all the rootna-manana ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

well done again and looking forward to reading part 2 ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superb post. Hum aise scenes hi toh chahte hai. Gud going...next part plz.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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super...wonderful post...and plz part 2 fast...๐Ÿ˜Š
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waiting for the part 2 please post it yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome.. njoyed reading it... cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey thats superbbb...plzzz continueee sooon..n pm me... wanna reeaddd more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey superb... waiting for the next...v gud...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey such a lovely scene...was actually picturising the same...navya in white...hair open...n at night!!! this scene cud be on one of their birthdays?? .wish the cvs get some romantic ideas for AnYa...n hope shitster no 2 is packed off to banaras forever this sunday!!!
n hey, loved this line of urs...Tumhi batao, aaj tak kitne chakkar laga liye maine tumhari "padosi" ke ghar ke? so true...ananth has seen more of navyas neighbours' homes n not even a peek inside her house after all the chakkars he has done up n dn her stairs...

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