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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

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Posted: 13 years ago

WANTED

character sketch:

karan/maan singh khurana:
will come to know the reason for two names as the story moves forward..

young arrogant man with full on attitude.he is assasinator(we can say professional shooter/killer) by profession.he is very kind hearted but never show out..

geet handa:

she is a bubbly girl and very talkative,fun loving but always dreams some thing different from others...

vikram:

he is karan's so called friend and his partner in profession but only plans escape while karan assasinates..he is jealous of karan and greedy for money..

aditya handa:

he is younger brother of geet and meera. he is very innocent and loves his sisters more than world...

lucky:

geet,meera and aad's best buddy.he is very very talkative and loves his friends..

meera handa:

geet and rahul's elder sister..she is innocent and loves her family especially geet..who is every thing to her..

pinky:

geet's best buddy...

more characters will be introduced as the story moves forward...

hope u guys like the character sketch..plz plz like and comment so that i can gather confidence to write further..waiting for ur response..😍

INDEX:

part1:page1

part2:page9

part3:page14

part4:page26

part5:page36

part6:page49

part7:page56

part8:page64

part9:page73

part10,11:page83

part12:page91

part13:page98

part14:page105

part15:page121

part16:page130

part17:page137

THREAD2

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MY MAANEET WORLD

Edited by MonaLovesMaan - 12 years ago

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neha

@salmankhanrulz

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Posted: 13 years ago

i really love action/spy thrillers n maan in it..is just awesome
plzzz continue soon n pm me

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART-1

karan and vikram are partners..vikram plans escape where karan assasinates...they charge nearly 2 crores for each operation..

@mumbai:

vikram speaks to some one on phone...

vikram:kab aur kese karna hai?

he says something...

vikram:teek hai mein apne partner se baat karke tumhe inform kar detha hoon...

he ends the call and comes to karan who is playing billiards and at the same time thinking about some thing deeply...

vikram:karan...ek deal aaya hai...

karan:kisko aur kab khatam karna hai?(he asks very casually)

vikram:khatam nahi karna hai just shoot karne ka natak karna hai..

karan:what nonsense...mein koi actor hoon kya natak karne ke liye..

vikram:are karan meri poori baat tho sunle yaar...

karan irritatingly...

kaho...

vikram:ek political leader xyz ke assistant ka phone tha...
he wants someone to attempt an assasination on him so that he can get more sympathy votes in the up coming elections..
usne kaha ki unlogo ko hum jaise professional hi chahiye.. tha ki us political leader ko galti se galat jagah par goli na lag jaye jiski wajah se o sach mein mar saktha hai.. aur ye bhi kaha hai ki jitna hum demand kare utna remuneration dene ke liye tayyar hai..

karan:bas***ds...sab ke sab aise hi hai...kabhi nahi sudrenge ye log..in jaise logo ki wajah se...(paused)
khair,muje apne kaam se matlab hai...tum muje uska number do mein khud baat kartha hoon deal ke bhare mein...

vikram:ok...
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@hoshiarpur:
one girl will be chasing a young boy with slipper in her hand...her friends were also trying hard to stop her but all their attempts go in vain...
after sometime they stop their attempt of stopping herr as they were conscious about their fatigue..

pinky:oye geet ruk jao yaar..aur kitna bhagegi...are geet suno tho..

but there will be no effect on geet as she is continiously trying to catch that guy..

meera:(panting)koi farak nahi padnewala hai pinky o aaj us ladke ko sabak sikhakar hi chodegi..

nano:ha di aap sahi keh rahi hai..hamari sherni ab kisi ki nahi sunegi...

pinky:bechara o tho gaya kaam se...

meera:pata hai uski zindagi ki sabse badi galti kya hai?hamari sherni se panga lena..

three of them smile...

nano:chalo ab geet ke peeche jane ka koi faida nahi hai tho yehi baitkar geet ka intezar karthe hai uska..

pinky:ha yaar..tu sahi keh rahi hai..muje tho bhag bhag kar bhook lag rahi hai...

meera and nano glares pinky as if they were asking her'waha kisi ki pitai ho rahi hai aur tumhe bhook ki padi hai'

meera:pinky tu kabhi nahi sudregi...
ab chalo waha jaakar bait the hai..

here geet is continuosly trying to catch that guy but he's trying his level best to escape from geet because he knew that geet is gonna kill him if he gets caught by her..
geet is continously running...
she is becoming more furious and in frustation she throws her chappal on to that guy...
here the guy is still running but finally geet succeds in catching him...

she helds him by collar..

geet:(panting)ullu ke patte..gade...kaminey...
tumhari itni himmat ki tum geet...geet handa ko(pointing finger towards her) love letter dogi...
kabhi ayine mein shakal dekhi apni...bilkul jangli bais ki tarah hai tumhari shakal...aur mein princess hoon...aise kese soch liya ki tum princess ko pata sakthe ho..
itni badi galti karke aur upar se mujse bachne ki koshish kar rahe the na...gada kahinka..

guy:(he is terrified with geet's sherni roop..he joins his hands in front of her and kneels down)
maaf kardo meri maa...galti hogayi mujse...plz muje chod do zindagi mein kabhi kisi ladki ko leave letter tak nahi likunga..ab tho muje chod do..

geet:accha bacchu(holds her waist with bith hands)
pehle galti karthe ho aur phir maafi maangthe ho...itni asani se nahi chodungi tuje?
mein bhuli nahi hoon us din tum meri di ko ched raha tha na...ab chedkar dikao muje...

guy:kaha na galti hogayi...mein ne nahi cheda tumhari di ko..mera dost ne cheda tha aur waise bhi tumhari di ko mein kyun chedunga?

geet:matlab??kisi aur dost ko kahogi use chedne ke liye..
hey babaji kya zamana aagaya ladkiyon ka koi respect hi nahi karthe...

meanwhile,he notices that geet is busy in her talks with babaji..so he takes the chance to escape from there and save his life from sherni...

geet:oye gadhe ruko..bag kyun rahe ho?

but he's running as fast as he can..

geet:(irritatingly)darpok kahinka..

precap:

karan:muje 1 crore advance mein chahiye...

so,this is the part-1 guys..short one..
hope u like it...
plz let me whether i should continue with this or not...
waiting for ur replies..

plz plz press LIKE and do comment COMMENT.
iam happy if they are negative because it helps me to improve...
lastly sorry for the mistake...

link to my another ff:LOVE ALWAYS WINS...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins

HAPPY NEW YEAR FRIENDS...
LOVE U ALL...

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-MONA

link to next part:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2651796/maaneet-ss-wanted-thread2-added?pn=9

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome first part
i thingits from a telugu movie "athadu"of mahesh babu but still wanna read it in maaneet style

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

heey nice concept...

love it...

continue soon

plz add me in & pm dear

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

wow... awesome update...

loved it...

love this movie very much...

continue soon...

want to see maneet in this...

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Shruti_Goyal

@Shruti_Goyal

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome start dear
luved the story line
plz continue soon

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renjini263

@renjini263

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome start Mona!!!! loved d 1st part... poor guy!!! ab se zindagi main kissi ko nahi chedega woh...😆 ohh pinky tum bhi na...tumhe kab bhuk nahi lagti??? lovd d update plzz cont soon w8ing 4 d nxt update