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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART-8



Geet:iski itni himmat...geet ko geet handa bahar phenk diya...mein bhi kitni jalli thi chali aayi is sadu se sorry kehne...chaddo!!!!!

After few minutes,maan comes down relieved and had lunch along with his family...geet also was busy in throwing glares at maan while meera smiles at her...

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Maan is pacing in his room thinking about something..his thoughts were disturbed when savitri devi entered his room with a bowl in her hand...

Savitri devi:maan bete what's the matter?u didn't spoke properly with anyone even me...is every thing ok...

Maan gives her his usual plastic smile and and nods as no..

Savitri devi:ok fine'leave that and dekhiye hum aapke liye aapka favourite sweet banaya hai..gulab jaamun...

Maan makes yucky face as soon as he saw that sweet..

Maan:maa I'll have it after wards... I don't feel like eating now...

Savitri devi:no problem bete you can have it whenever you want...

She then turns to leave but turns back again..she instantly comes and hugs maan...she breaks the hug and then cups his face...maan could see her eyes filled with tears...

Savitri devi:bete promise me that u never leave me again..i suffered a lot these many years...aapke bina itne saal kese guzare humne ye sirf hum jaanthe hai bete..promise me that u never leave me..warna hum mar jaayenge bete...

Maan immediately stops her by keeping his palm on her mouth and nods not to say such words..

Savitri devi:then promise me bete that u never leave me...

Maan:ha maa I'll never you...

With that she hugs him again and kisses his hair..then she'll ask him to have the sweet which she brought and leaves the place...

Maan:ma mein ne aapse promise toh kardiya that I'll never leave you but I cant keep up this promise as I have to leave this place oneday or the other..kitne acche hai aap sab log..kitna pyar karthe hai mujse jab ki mein us pyar ka haqdaar nahi hoon..the one who really deserves ur love is...

Flashback:

Maan who jumped on the running train from the tallest scyscrapper enters the compartment in which a young man is sitting alone and reading some magazine..when he saw maan/karan he smiled to him and same did maan...

Man:come na take your seat..

Maan sat on the seat..now both are sitting opposite to each other near the window..

Thank god!finally aap aagaye...I was so bored sitting alone without anyone..btw iam maan..maan singh khurana...

karan just smiles at him but wont introduce himself...

Maan:kaha jaa rahe hai aap?

Karan looks here and there and finds a poster on the wall of train near the window in which it stated that a boy is missing/left the house 12 years back and his family is waiting for him...and address is given below that information...

Karan:hoshiarpur...hoshiarpur jaa raha hoon...

Maan:oh wow!toh u are accompanying me to my village..

Karan gives a questioning look to him...

Maan smiles and says..matlab iam also going to hoshiarpur..

Karan again looks at that poster casually and this is noticed by maan..

Maan:aap is poster ko dekh rahe hai..you know that add is for me..i mean to find me..iam the one who left my family when I was 12..i thought no one will search for me or think about me but when I saw this poster on the notice board of library which I visit..i came to know that how much my family loves me and understood that they need me...so iam back to meet my family..

Then maan continues telling each and evry thing about him and his family...not even realising that he is talking to a stranger who just met him few minutes back...this is because of his care free and jovial nature who mingles very easily and quickly with others...

Maan went on blabbering and karan became a listener to his never ending talks...

Meanwhile,a station arrived where train stopped for 5 minutes...

Maan who was busy with his blabbering hears a voice of a person who was selling coffee...

Maan:hey shall we have coffee bahuth mazaa aayega...

Karan:no thanx it's ok..

Maan:arey u just taste the coffee here..it'll be very tasty...

He then handovers a glass to karan and takes one for himself...

Maan:arey iske saath biscuits hothe toh mazaa aayega..wait let me take them out from my bag..

He then bends down to take the bag which is present under the seat on which karan is sitting...{flashback ends}

Mobile ring...

Maan/karan lifts the call immediately...

Before maan could say anything...iam so sorry I was busy in the meeting with superior doctor and mobile was in silent mode so I failed to attend ur call...

Maan:that's ok..u just tell me ab o kesi hai??she's ok na??

Ha karan she's ok..and don't worry I'll take care of her till you return..

maan:thank u so much...I think I cant come there for few days ...and police were busy in finding me...

Hmm..i knw and don't worry I'll give u information about bro..

Karan:thanx dear...I'll call u whenever I get a chance to talk to u...bye..

Bye...

Maan then looks at the bowl which was kept there by s.d.."gulab jaamun(makes yucky face) my favorite sweet...my foot"

But I have to...mein maan aur uski family ke liye itna toh kar saktha hoon na...

@mumbai:

Ram kapoor and arjun are in police vehicle driving towards the next place of their investigation...

Ram:arjun how much time it'll take to reach there??

Arjun:sir just 1 hour...

Ram:ok..

He then takes out the bracelet which he found in the building...and read the name engraved on it...VIKRAM!!!!!!!!!

Arjun is shocked to hear the name VIKRAM!! He gasped and said VIKRAM!!!

Ram:hmmm'you know him??

Arjun:ha sir he's a criminal...

Ram:oh...I want each and every information about that man as soon as we reach mumbai...

Arjun:ok sir...

Then after few minutes they reached their destination...

Precap:

Where did ram and arjun reach??and who is that talking on phone to karan oops!maan????

Any guesses???😉😉


sorry guys..i know it was boring update without maaneet 😭😭but i wanted to reveal maan's /karan's identity..so plz bear with me..and many of u had a doubt about maan...i think it's cleared now...

plz pressLIKE and do COMMENT..

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love u all...

-mona

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
but missed maaneet moments😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it so did he kill the real maan and take his place loved the update thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update love it thank you for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hav read third one...😆...Yaar yeh Maan /Karan...bahut dimaag lagna padda..to keep in mind who is who...but jst that flash back part.Geet poor girl but how Maan rejects Gulab Jamun 😡..giv it to me...waiting for Mumbai action packed scenes.

Lov


Jass
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Posted: 13 years ago


its still not clear that he killed real Maan or not...

this is very different story so far...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
missed maneet sooo geet jis se mile woh karan hai maan nai ohhh i m confuzeddd😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
SO WHAT HAPPENED TO THE REAL MAAN
DID KARAN DO SOMETHING TO HIM
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
what happen real maan
so karan took maan place
loved it

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