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updating...
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WANTED


PART-13



iam so so sorry for late update friends..iam badly held up with my college...😭😭😭



Maan came to one corner while tears rolled down continously.."kaash usdin mein aapko bacha pata..you would have with me.."he closed his eyes in pain…..after few minutes he came to his normal self n moved back to i.c.u to have a look at s.d…





He rushed inside the i.c.u n sat on stool beside the bed…..he caressed s.d's hair who eyes were closed whilst tears rolled down from maan's eyes…"maa…"maan said in choked voice…he was very much scared when he saw s.d in that condition…his past at once came infront of him…he was scared to loose her…he once failed to save but not now…he was determined not to loose shis mom n he suceeded to save her..









He is not their maan but he got attached with them to the extent that he could not tolerate if any thing happen to anyone. Not even a scratch…he don't want to let go anyone from his life now…only he knows how he was staying alone without anyone in his life… he remember how he suffered alone how he managed to become normal when he lost everyone in past…





Maan is caressing s.d's hair while looking at her with teary eyes…after few minutes she slowly opened her eyes..maan instantly hugged her still sitting on stool snaking his hand around her just like a small kid hugs his mom when he gets scared of something..he started crying like a kid saying "maa…I was scared of loosing u.."…s.d caressed his cheek calming him..after a minute s.d broke the hug n kissed his fore head…he helped her to sit when she tried to get up…"maa..i was so scared…achanak kya hogaya tha aapko.."said maan holding her hand in his…





"bete first tell me what u r doing??why u r hell bent on taking my breath.."



"maa…"maan said in confusion…




"I know everything…bauji told me everything…bete that bharadwaj is a devil..why u want to mess with that monster…I cant loose my son too.."said s.d n cried her heart out….maan hugged her n rubbed her back to calm her..he now understood that she suffered an attack when she came to know about this…she was shocked to know that her son who returned back to her after many years is now messing with that monster who made their life hell,who ruined everything in their life,who grabbed everything from them….she had a fear that he would harm her son too…





Maan broke the hug n wiped her tears.."maa…u trust me na.."

s.d nodded positively…"maa…plz believe me kisi ko kuch nahi hoga…muje kuch nahi hoga..mein sab kuch wapas loonga usse…he took away everything when I was not there..u people suffered a lot maa not any more now..i wont leave him…maa plz don't worry…muje kuch nahi hoga..plz trust ur son..sab teek kardunga…plz maa.."





s.d nodded with a smile..she now understood that her son is not anymore a kid whom she know….she saw an unknown confidence in his eyes which also gave her confidence that her son will definitely do what he said..he will bring back all the happiness which they lost..he is there for them now..he wont let anything go wrong now…




after 3 days s.d got discharged n maan was there with her those three days taking care of her….geet also stayed with him at the same time she kept informing him about the updates of bharadwaj informed to her by mishra..he said he will help them n as he said he did inform every move of bharadwaj….bharadwaj still don't know the face of maan singh khurana n he got busy in his life…business life making profits by cheating…






maan is now back to home along with s.d..in all these he totally forgot who he is actually..he got more n more attached with them now..surprising everyone especially geet he started smiling to them…geet at first shocked to see him smile later started admiring it ofcourse admiring maan at the same time..she is developing feelings for him now..maan also became close to her…..






maan is sitting in s.d's room beside her on bed..he is giving her medicines while geet who also sat on bed on other side is blaberring something as usual…."ofoo..geet stop it now..maa just came from hospital..do u want her to go back again..but this time a li'l change..she'll suffer from earache n head ache ."





geet glared at maan who giggled at her..s.d also giggled seeing her puppy face.."buwaji aap bhi mera mazak uda rahe hai na..."she pouted her lips..s.d called her near her.."hum apni sabse pyar bachii ka mazak kese uda sakthe hai.."..geet smiled n hugged her showing her tongue to maan n hugged her as if showing buwaji loves me more than u..maan couldn't say anything but just giggle at her cute antics…meanwhile maan's mobile rang showing caller id as mishra….maan got alert n left the room excusing himself…




maan:ha mr.mishra…what are the updates for today….



Mishra:maan sir finally the day for which you are waiting arrived ..ha sir..bharadwaj ke office mein board of directors ka meeting hai aaj..and even foreign delegates are attending it as he is going to take some big project..i think this is the best time to disclose his real face in front of whole world…




Maan smirked as he is already ready with the plan but just waiting for this golden chance.."ok.mr.mishra..u be ready there…and ha media should be hiding..otherwise he never admit it n our plan wont work on him..aur ha original will papers lana aapke saath"




"yes sir..as u say..i'll be there on time along with will papers"said mishra..




Maan smirked thinking about his plan.."bharadwaj…just an hour..iske baad tum kahi ka nahi rahoge..i promise u..u urself will admit now that u r not the owner of KC.."







After an hour maan reached khurana constructions where mishra is already ready with some media people but they are hiding in some place from where they could get clear view of conference room..maan casually enterd inside the office..mishra is already inside the office..no one doubted him as he is bharadwaj's advocate..mishra came to receive maan to avoid the questions from receptionist…maan signalled him to stay alert n moved forward..







Here inside the conference room some important presentation is going on..bharadwaj n board members sat there at the same time impressing their clients so that their company could get the biggest project…maan who enterd inside the room already, fumed with anger when he saw bharadwaj but later smirked as he knows that bhradwaj's chapter will end soon in few minutes…he phoned to someone n then moved forward..he came n stood in front of lcd screen with crossed arms..now everyone present there could see maan's face..






Bharadwaj n others looked at him perplexed.."hey who are u man??who allowed u inside without my permission??' bharadwaj almost shouted on him at the same time passing smile to delegates to please them..




"exactly who the hell are u to take hold on my property with out my permission??"maan said sternly…




"what??what the hell are u speaking??"bharadwaj said who already shocked listening this as he thought that he may be maan….



"oh u didn't understand…ok no problem..police will explain u clearly"said maan n looked towards the entrance where police entered n stood already when he phoned them…bharadwaj is shocked to hell now..everyone there is looking at him confused…"ye kya ho raha hai…mere office mein police kese…first of all tell me who the hell are u n why u are creating scene in my office??"he said while a confirmation hit in his mind that he is maan singh khurana but how can a cunning fellow like him stay silent…"see mr.maan singh khurana I think u don't know anything…ur dad transformed everything on my name as he thought no one in ur family is eligible to care of this huge firm.."





"oh wow great story"maan clapped while taking steps towards him.."wow mr.bharadwaj..u made a very good story but alas u failed…one cheater is blaming another wow.."said maan while crossing his arms…




Bhradwaj is more shocked now..his body is already covered with sweat..he is scared of his reputation infront of his clients n board members…it was difficult for him to bring share holders n now maan is trying to ruin his image…he is still trying to make up some story but what maan said just now left him confused..the one whom he thought to be msk is asking who is msk….what's going on..if he is not msk then who is he n how he knows about property??many questions shot in his mind...





"matlab..?"he mumbled in confusion…"matlab ye hai ki u n mr.khurana cheated on singhania's very wisely…first that khurana who worked with my dad cheats on him n takes hold on company n change it in to khurana constructions then other says this is mine..wah!!!n now u r acting as if u don't me,the sole owner of singhania industries…very good try to save u but sorry iam not convinced n I don't want to waste my timer any more on u…inspector arrest him…n file cheating case on him…"maan ordered the police..






"ye kya keh raha hai..who is this singhanaia now..oh god may be mr.khurana cheated on him..ye mein kaha fas gaya…"bharadwaj who is shivering thought..he is wiping his sweat on forehead…he is not able to understand what's happening with him..he is so much scared to be prisoned as his bachikuchi izzat will go in drain now in front of whole world…maan showed some papers which he brought with him to board members when they questioned him..it is clearly stated in those papers(fake papers)that the company belongs to raj singhania n now mr.karan singhania who stood in front of them is the owner of the company…it was also written that bharadwaj n mr.khurana are just share holders in the company at the same time works in the company…





Bharadwaj is trembling in fear now as his partners started to shot questions on him…some were already ready to leave the office n withdraw their shares..police is insisiting him to move with them..bhradwaj is thinking how to save himself from this…"no..no wait a minute..let me clear u…iam not the owner of khurana constructions..so I didn't cheat anyone..it was mr.khurana who cheated his dad"he screamed when police is about to handcuff him..everyone rooted to spot in shock except maan….maan smirked as his plan is about to reach point…he switched the camera which was fixed on his shirt button so that everyone could see his approval lively on tv…"I knew it mr.bharadwaj..even iam saying the same that u are not the owner of khurana constructions…but u are saying it as ur's…how can u?? u cheated on owners family n took everything for urself"said maan…




"ha…I cheated khurana's n took everything from them saying this company is on my name when it is not..….i..i don't know that…."he fumbled what to say…he didn't even notice what he spit out now..he said he cheated on them..wo..i was he fumbled for sentences to cover up his mistake but before he could do mishra along with media people entered the conference room n started clicking bharadwaj's pics…bharadwaj is shocked to the hell..





other side everyone is watching real face of bharadwaj on tv as it is live telecast…his clients were shocked to the core..they believed on cheater these many days..now what will happen with the projects they are handling…oh no!!everyone catched their heads….




"mr.bharadwaj so u urself admitted that u cheated khuranas n took away everything from them..why u did so??is there any reason??u stayed silent these many years n now u admitted everything..why???is it becoz the will is out now???"reporter shot questions on completely confused rather say shocked bharadwaj…




"will.."he mumbled…"ha will..in which mr.khurana stated that everything including khurana constructions goes to his son maan singh khurana…"mishra read the will infront of them..bharadwaj shot a glare to mishra which he ignored when maan assured him with the blink of his eyes…




"common mr.bharadwaj speak out??u r the top most tycoon now…but whatever u r enjoying is some others..how could u do this?u speak about principles everytime n now u urself is wrong..why u cheated them n why u r admitting it now infront of media??"another reporter asked..




"becoz mr.bharadwaj is repenting for his mistake now..am I right"maan said who moved forward with a smirk on his face…"what mr.khurana what u are saying??is he repenting for what he did??how u came to know about this??"reporter asked maan…




"hmm..yeah he cheated on our family but he is repenting now..isliye sab kuch wapas karna chahthe hai ab..he even admitted his mistake infront of media..our property is in his hands since years n he is giving back everything now infront of u people…hai na mr.bharadwaj"maan said smirking at him…






"ha..ha bilkul"mr.bharadwaj fumbled not finding anything to say…maan instantly handovered some papers to sign which he did without even looking at them..maan took back the file while smirking at him for which he glared…he didn't even notice what's written in papers…police asked him to move….he took few steps while glaring at maan who rueined everything in a minute…he made him admit everything in a minute by playing a trick on him…how he fooled him…bharadwaj grabbed gun from one of the cop n aimed it at maan…police were trying to stop him but he is shouting like mad"don't move..i said don't move…warna I'll shoot everyone…maan singh khurana..i wont leave you..u ruined everything…u ruined my reputation…I wont leave u alive"he slowly moved his finger near trigger n about to press it but maan with in a second signalled one of the cop(he is the one arranged by maan😉) he shot bharadwaj fatally….the bullet hit his forehead n he is dead at spot..





Maan smirked as he suceeded to do what he thought.."how can I leave u alive bharadwaj…tum jaise logo ko mauth bhi bahut choti saza hai…whatever u did with my family is not forgivable..u killed the only support for the family just for bloody money n position in society..this is only the punishment I give u to people like u…again past incidents came in his mind making his eyes turn blood red in anger..



"oh sorry sir…i…I thought to shoot on his arm but.."that cop who shot bhardwaj said.."no don't be…infact u did right..how dare he is to grab gun n shot a person that too infront of media..we should protect people n we did it to save mr.msk…"said another officer…soon everyone except police dispersed from there…




Maan then gave the file to mishra in which he took bharadwaj's signatures…he signed on papers in which it stated that his property which is on his name goes to trust….maan already expected that bharadwaj will do something or the other to save himself..so he is ready with his plan…even if he didn't do it maan thought to drag him on roads as he took all his property …but bharadwaj is dead now making maan's work so easy..mishra smiled at maan proudly n left the place giving him the willl papers….maan gave a smirk to bharadwaj's dead body n left the place…

Precap:

Ram:hello mr.maan singh khurana..iam ram ram kapoor from CBI


He gave his card to maan holding from corner..maan took it n saw it..ram smirked as he took it back again holding from very corner..he looked at the card which was brushed with powder n now he have maan's finger prints on it…

Ram(st):ab pata chal jayega ki whether mr.maan singh khurana is innocent or not…he thought to give them for test to compare with finger prints on gun which they found at murder spot..it's the same gun which maan forgot to bring back from the building when he escaped…


Ab kya hoga??how will maan escape now????😕



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silent readers atleast bother to press like it take not even a second...

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-mona😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
woww.woow.woww.. after awesome update...
precap is so scary.. am really worried now!
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the part a lot...
bharadwaj got wat he deserves...
loved maan's plan...cute maaneet moments was awesum..
precap s scary..
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow wow
awsmm updt
me lvd it..
precap 😕😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update.
about precep what will happen now ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow mona... update after a long time.
i am very happy kiddo darling...
wow kya update tha yaar... its awesome.. loved it so much...
wah wah maan ka kya plan tha yaar... he is really master mind..
aww hate to see maan crying... but thank god sd is fine... he really attached to them yaar... loved geet and her antics... hahaha... she has feelings for maan... wowww...
wow what a plan maan, that idiot cofessed that he cheated on khuranas infront of media and police arrested him... but he tried to act smart but he is dead now... acha hua he deserves that punishment...
hai rabba precap is so scary..

continue soon darling..
love u... tc dont stress urself ok...

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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW Maan fantastic plan
Uss villian ki toh band bajadi tumne
hmm...so Ram is here and he has taken Maan's fingerprints par I guess Maan bhi koi bevakuf nahi hai he will come out of the situation some how or the other

continue soon Mona dear

love u loads

-Piya

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