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Posted: 13 years ago
real maan is dead...n karan does not want to trouble them more with this news...

continue soon...

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may be Arjun has hand behind pm's murder?
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Originally posted by: idunno

may be Arjun has hand behind pm's murder?



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MAAN WANTED TO TELL THE TRUTH
BUT HEARING THEIR SAD STORY, HE KEPT QUITE
WILL HE HELP THEM NOW
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WANTED

CHAPTER-10



Maan n aadi reached home after their usual talk with aadi's friends…as maan said that he will give him money to clear his dues at college;maan gave him cheque n sent him to college immediately…maan is pacing in his room thinking about what aadi said…he recollected every word of aadi…




Maan:how can I reveal my identity now…they are already facing so many troubles and if they come know about maan(real maan's) death they break down completely…maa toh bardash nahi kar payegi…




He felt irritated as he cant either reveal his identity in the situation he is in now or deceive them saying he is maan…he felt very guilty…



Maan:I know kisi ko khone ka dard kya hota hai mujse behtar koun jaantha hai…aur jab o hamare apne hai toh…he closed his eyes in pain as he remembered his past….he opened his eyes in anger….i wont leave him….mr.bharadwaj get ready to face karan singhania….




Maan iam sorry I know iam cheating ur family members and I also know that I don't deserve their love…but maan I promise u I wont let anything happen to ur family…I already lost everything…but I wont let anything happen to ur family which became mine now…but for sometime…I promise u I'll tell every thing once I sort out all their problems…muje himmat toh nahi hai unlogo ko sach batane ka aur un logo ko toothe huye dekne ka…but I have to do it…maan promised to himself...


Chalo karan now start ur mission…mr.bharadwaj get ready now…I have to check khurana constructions details first…I guess koi toh file hoga…aadi se poochtha hoon…



He picked his mobile n called aadi…he asked him about files…first he was reluctant to tell anything about it maan as it is related to bharadwaj,his dad's business partner who killed him brutally in the name of accident n grabbed eveything from them…he warned maan to stay away from this matter as he don't want anything to happen to him..but maan is maan how can he stay silent when he decided to do something…he insisted aadi to tell about kc n where he can find information about it..he informs that each n every piece of information is with geet as she hid ecerything so that s.d could not see it n feel pain…maan disconnected the call n made his way out to search for geet…he found her in living room doing something…

Maan:geet…


Geet looked at him shocked as if she saw some bhoot….she felt very embarassed remembering morning's kiss…."muje tumse kuch…before maan could complete his sentence geet ran away from there as if some one is chasing her to murder her…maan looked at her amused…"ajeeb ladki hai…kabhi chillathi hai mujpar aur ab bhaag jaathi hai" he went behind her to call her…geet ran in to the kitchen where rano is working..he is about to call her but stopped seeing her..rano smiled at him and asked"maan beta u are here…do u need some thing??"..maan nodded in no but instantly said.."ha i..i want water"…she smiled n gave water to him to drink…geet looked at him from corner of her eyes but instantly turned her gaze whenever maan glared at her for showing nakhre…he left the place having no option..after few minutes geet came out relaxed n again got shocked seeing maan there…then again she ran from there as if she is a theif n maan would catch her…maan is irked with her behaviour now but again went to talk to her…she hid herself behind a wall so that maan could not find her..she checked her surrounding n took a sigh of releif not finding maan there…she turned just to find maan there standing with crossed arms glaring at her…she gulped her saliva n about to run again but maan is very quick to hold her hand by wrist n pulled her towards him which made her land on his chest…she is lost in his eyes for a while and so maan but soon he came to his angry mode again..he held her arms and pinned her to the wall so that she could not run again….he held her so tight that it hurted her…"ahhh…maan u r hurting me"she winced..maan immediately left her hand n looked at her in concern…"where??iam..iam sorry geet…tum meri baat sun nahi rahi thi toh.."




"toh u'll hurt me"she said rubbing her arm where she got small scratch…."sorry geet"he again said n politely this time…"muje nahi chahiye aapki sorry"she said in anger n moved from there…."geet suno..plz I want to talk to u"he said but now in commanding tone…this irked her more…"ek toh sorry teek se nahi keh rahe hai upar se muj par hukum chala raha hai.."she thought n said"nahi sunna hai muje aapki koi baat…kyun sunu jab dekho goorthe rethe ho ya chillathe rethe ho mujpar….muje nahi pata tha ki aap bade hone ke baad itna bada dust danav banjayenge..rukhiye mein na jaakar buwaji aur daadaji se aapki complaint karthi hoon"she said like a primary school kid n turned to go…but maan held her arm n pulled her back.."dekho I didn't do it intentionally and u provoke me to shout on u always samji….and ha if u have anything tell infront me directly..maa ya daadaji ko beech mein laane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai samji"



"accha!!aap muje damki de rahe hai…now I'll complain for sure…dekthi hoon aap muje kese rokthe hai??"geet answered him back n took few steps forward towards the entrance of the room…maan again grabbed her and pinned her to the wall…he didn't held her but blocked her way keeping his hands on wall on either sides…





geet stood there glaring at him.."mera raastha chodiye"she tried to push him but his well built body didn't move an inch.."geet suno don't make a scene now..i was not at all wrong but still iam sorry..ab toh meri baat suno"he said politely which is not all his style..




"nahi nahi nahi…muje nahi chahiye aapki sorry"geet said still trying to make herself free from his trap…"geet I said na iam sorry suno ab.."maan again said…




"muje nahi chahiye"she said closing both her ears with her fingers clearing indicating that she don't want to hear him…


"geet suno"maan said leaning little closer…"nahi chahiye muje aapki sorry"she said still closing her ears and turned her face…"geet plz suno toh"maan said leaning more closer..now geet's cheek is facing him who turned her face away n continuosly denying to accept his sorry…maan still struggling with her n she is showing her nakhre…maan is very close to her now saying"geet iam sorry"she suddenly turned n their lips brushed slightly with his leaving them in shock…geet's mouth widened in shock while maan embarassingly moved back n left the room…


In maan's room:

He is pacing here n there in tension…

"what's happening??whenever I go infront of her kuch na kuch gadbad kar detha hoon..kya zaroorat thi uski kareeb jaane ki…karan ye kya kar raha hai tu…."

"but I have to go again to her becoz it's important now…karan just concentrate on ur mission now..dont think about all these silly things…u have to protect maan's family n it's imp now..ok fir se jaatha hoon uske paas…I hope she wont create the scene again"


He took a sigh n left his room ….he reached geet's room n is about to knock the door but stopped by aadi's voice who came there running..he came to maan and hugged him.."maan thank u soo much"he said…maan broke the hug n asked kisliye??






"maan iam gonna complete my studies just becoz of u…dekho I cleared all the dues n they'll allow me to write my exams"aadi said in tears..he was overwhelmed as he is gonna complete his studies which he thought he could never..now he can support his family along with his sisters and maan helped him to fullfil his dream…maan smiled and placed his hand on aadi's shoulder…geet who heard their convo came out with tears..aadi saw her n hugged her…he was very excited n happy…geet smiled in tears seeing her bro happy..he ran inside to inform others…maan smiled at aadi who ran from there with utmost happiness n excitement…"thanku maan"geet said in tears..maan looked at her confused n surprised…



Is she the same girl who fought with him??is she the same girl who irritates him??is she the same girl who shouts on him for each n every thing??he is surprised to see her in tears n saying thanku…..he gave her but why look…"maan u don't know how aadi felt when he stopped going to college…he broke down inside but never complained…u know maan he loves studying but kept smiling even when he stopped going to college becoz he don't want us to know his pain…and today he is very happy and that is becoz of u..thank u soo much maan"she said still in tears….



Maan felt her pain n understood how was they living their life even after so many troubles..he never thought that their life was complicated..they are surrounded with troubles but still they showed everyone that they are happy even he thought the same when he came there…unknowingly his hands reached her cheeks and he wiped her tears…geet looked at him lovingly and so maan…but again maan is the one who has taken back"hmm….wo I want to talk to u"maan said turning his face away to hide his feelings…"ha boliye na"geet replied…



Maan is again surprised with her behaviour..few minutes back she was acting all childish and shouting on him and now she is very polite…he then thought that she is something special and not exactly the one how she looks from outside..she is naughty,childish but at the same time very emotional by heart and strong too…maan is busy in estimating her while geet asked him again to speak when she didn't get any reply…



Maan:ha..i want to check khurana constructions files..aadi said that they are with u..


Geet is shocked to the hell.."khurana constructions files"she repeated…


"ha"he replied looking at her perplexed thinking why she is reacting like that..


Geet:no!!no way maan..i don't give u any file…no need to check anything…I know why u are asking but maan u don't know how dangerous he is…shaitaan hai wo…he killed our papaji n can do anything with u..i wont maan….said while her eyes were filled..


Maan:geet kuch nahi hoga…why u people are so scared of him…..he deceived ur papaji an took everything..how can u stay silent??he killed ur dad geet…chod denge use…no geet I wont leave him…use andaza bhi nahi hoga ki uske saath kya hone wala hai..use kara(he slipped his tongue but stopped)….i mean maan singh khurana ke family ke trouble kiya..i wont leave him…


Geet:nahi nahi nahi..i wont give u…do whatever u want…


Maan is irritated with her behaviour..he know that she is concerned about his life but he even dont know the spelling of dar..there is no word called scaring or afraid in his dictionary..he always faced everything bravely n will do the same in future…"what the hell??how can u leave him like that…u might have forgot everything that someone killed ur dad for their wish n grabbed everything from u…but I wont leave him..he have to pay back for his deeds and I'll get back everything from him"he shouted holding her arms tight…when he saw her fearful eyes he tried to calm himself..he closed his eyes n took a sigh.."geet dekho he grabbed everything from this family including happiness..he took advantage becoz u people didn't say anything n bent in front of him…u showed him that u people are weak in front of him n he took the advantage..we cant stay like this…we should fight against him…darne se kuch haasil nahi hoga geet..we should face everything n everyone bravely..ek baat yaad rakho tum mushkilo se darkar bhagthi rahogi toh o mushkil kabhi tumhara peecha nahi chodega…ek baar mod kar uska saamna karo fir dekho o mushkil tumhare aas paas nahi rahegi…plz geet trust me..mein sab teek kardunga and I want ur help..mera saath dogi na"



When she listened him an unknown confidence is filled in her eyes…she nodded instantly…she took maan's hand in her's.."ha maan I'll be with u…muje ab samaj mein aaya mein kyun dar rahi thi itne dino tak kyun ki mere saath aap nahi the..maan aapko dekkar hum sab ko himmat milgayi…aur aaj muje kisi cheez ka dar nahi kyun ki aap hai hamare saath…hai na"…maan reluctantly nodded as he felt guilty again…"how will they react when they come to know that their maan is no more in this world??"he thought n followed her…


She then took out some files which she hid on lattice so that no one could see them especially her buwaji..she don't want her to remember the past incidents n cry..so she hid everything related to kc…maan n geet together checked every file..they are some important files which related to some important deals n contracts kc dealt with…he then checked some other papers and he saw rajeev singh khurana's signature in every file n every important paper…


Maan:geet... Dekho there is only rajeev singh khurana's I mean papa's signature in every important paper..aadi said that mr.bharadwaj was papa's business partner n shareholder…if so then why there is no signature of him…not even his name is mentioned anywhere……


Geet:ha maan even iam confused I didn't even check these files till now or atleast touched it…she showed some papers which were signed by her dad..

Mamaji ke baad dad took hold of company and he dealt with every project…but here also there is no signature of him…


Maan:tumhare papa ne tumse ya kisi se kaha ki mr.bharadwaj unka business partner the…


Geet nodded in no..no maan he never said that he is his partner but we just know that he worked in kc..


Maan thought for a while n then nodded.."accha ye batao ki papa ne koi will banaya kya ye kehthe hue ki uski property kisko jaatha hai…


Geet:maan I don't know much about that…


"ok then….everyone will have their family lawyer especially when they have property and iam sure papa must have appointed personal solicitor for him…he might be knowing about his will..do u know who was his solicitor??


Geet:no maan but ha dadaji knows everything about it but he never says to anyone…I know a little becoz I listened it secretely when he was talking with someone…


"hmmm…ok"he said…"geet be ready we are going somewhere..u have to accompany me..i need ur help..i'll be back in few minutes..dadaaji se baat karke aatha hoon…saying so he left the room thinking something...


next part is coming in a while...tab tak enjoy this😉

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-mona😳


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WANTED
PART-11


@mumbai

Ram kapoor n his officers returned back to mumbai and he asked one of the cop to bring all the details about the passenger in the train from the railway department…all the while,he is thinking about the case…there are many pieces of broken threads which he have to join but not able to understand where to start n what to take in to consideration…he then took out the bracelet from his pocket n examined it.."vikram"he took out his name…




"mr.arjun u said that u have his details..i want to check them now..go straight to police station"ram kapoor ordered arjun..


Arjun:yes..yes sir…he said little reluctant…ram kapoor sensed his uncomfortable ness…


Ram:what happened mr.arjun??koi problem..

Arjun:no..not at all sir..just thinking about the case…

He nodded with a smirk for which arjun gave a weak smile…

@hoshiarpur:

Maan reached dadaji's room n knocked it reluctantly…he is little hesitant to talk to him as his first encounter was not that good with him..also he assumed that daadaji is angry on maan..but he have to go n talk to him as it is necessary now..he knocked twice n heard his voice saying "andar ajaao maan"..maan is surprised..how he recognised me without even looking at me..how he know that it is me??he entered the room with confusion n saw him leaning on bed…"wo dadaaji I want to know something from u"


"abhi bhi nahi poochoge ki daadaji kese hai aap??why you were angry on me?ha maan..itna paraya hogaya hoon mein??"he asked him with painful voice for which maan nodded in no..but not able to speak…"ha I talked with u rudely but don't u see my love in those words??dont u see how I craved to have a glimpse of my grandson before my death??bus chala gaya yaha se…ek baar bhi gale nahi laga mujse"he continued and tear rolled down his cheek…


Maan felt his pain n his words peirced his heart…he never thought how he hurted this old man who loved his grandson..he was in his world n not even cared about him…how wrong he was??how selfish he was??actually how cruel he was to leave him inpain..maan thought and a tear escaped unknowingly from his eye..his legs started approaching him n he stood beside him…"sorry daadaji..i didn't mean to hurt u but I thought.."


"u thought that I was angry on u…nahi puttar…nahi…puttar I along with our family suffered a lot..pehle rajveer chala gaya and then geet's papa..we became helpless…we don't had anyone to stand for us…puttar tum hum sab ki takath ho…toh kese narazgi??i was craving to have glimpse of u…I acted that I was angry on u but nahi beta I was dying to see my grand son before my death..now iam happy..i can die peacefully becoz u are there to care of this family"he said in tears…maan could not take it and hugged him…


After a while he broke the hug and wiped his tears…"puttar mujse wada karo ki u don't leave us again…isbaar humse nahi hoga…wada karo ki humko chod kar kahi nahi jaaoge"he asked maan caressing his hair…"ha daadaji I wont"maan promised him unknowingly..he don't know what's happening with him..he very well know that he is not the one who deserves this love,this care,blessings but he cant do anything now..he cant even see them in pain..his stone hearted heart which stopped responding to emotions long back started reacting again..they woke his sleeping heart which was ignoring everyone's emotions..he now started to care for them,cant see them in pain…he stood there thinking what's happening with him..why he is not able to control his emotions..why he hugged daadaji,why he cant see him in pain,why he cant see s.d,aadi,rano,geet's tears..why???



"puttar poocho kya poochna hai??"finally daadaji broke silence…"ha..wo"maan fumbles as he totally went in different world n forgot wat to say…

"u said u want to know something from me"he reminded him…

Maan:ha..ha wo…dadaaji I want to know who was the solicitor to papa..he must have appointed someone to take care of all legal things??and mr.bharadwaj…kya wo papa ka partner tha??


Dadaaji is shocked…how he know everything??he didn't even said anything to him n maan left the home after geet's dad's death..then how come he know all this and why he is asking all these??is he trying to reopen all the happenings which were buried some where??"maan…tuje ye sab"


Maan:dadaaji I know everything..plz don't stop me now..i promise u that I wont let anything happen to anyone…

"tuje kuch hojaatha toh??"

Maan is touched with his sentence..how caring they are…now a days no one will care even for his family but only think of one self..but they are thinking about his life,his safety..they are ready to loose everything but not their dear ones..shayad ise pyar kehthe hai..parivaar kehthe hai…he thought..


"muje kuch nahi hoga…dadaaji I'll take care of myself and ha I'll teach him a lesson in his own way..i promise o kisi aur ke saath ye sab karne ka layak nahi rahega…infact kuch bhi karne ya sochne ka layak nahi rahega..aap plz muje sab kuch batayiye.."


He smiled n nodded.."I know my son…u are a lion like rajveer..u are same like him…he used to face everything bravely…and I can see rajveer in u..i have faith on u beta that u'll be sucessful in everything u do.."


"jaha tak mein jaatha hoon rajveer didn't write any will…but the one who can tell everything is lawyer mishra…he was ur papa's solicitor n he knows everything…after parmeet(geet's dad) death I went to meet him,I begged him to help us but he already was dancing according to bharadwaj's words…pese ke lalaj mein ye bhool gaya ki rajveer uske liye kya kya kiya hai ye pariwar kya kiya hai….he is lawyer today becoz of rajveer but he decieved him"dadaaji had tears while saying…


Maan:dadaaji I promise u..everything will come back to us now…trust me..


He nodded in smile…maan asked him to rest for sometime n left the room…


"mr.mishra n bharadwaj,be ready to face me."maan smirked n moved towards geet's room..

@mumbai:

Ram kapoor reached the police station along with arjun..arjun handovers vikram's details to ram.."sir..vikram was a criminal..there were 3 murder cases on him,he used to supply drugs n even do business i.e supplying girls to prostitute homes…but sir there is no case on him since a year…he is no where to be seen..i think he left the city"


Ram just nodded n examined his details,,,vikram..he spelled his name looking at bracelet and many thoughts were roaming in his mind…he then asked for his pic which arjun handovers to him…"oh so this is that bas***d vikram"he said…


He remembered the whole scene at building where that political leader's murder took place…and then railway station..he picked his mobile n informed the cop to whom he assigend the duty to collect details from railway station..he asked him to meet him in the ******* hospital along with details…


"hmm..mr arjun follow me"said ram n rushed out..he reached the place where murder took place..when he was looking out of the window where he got the bracelet he remembered that an accident took place on the same day n same time..he saw that the car n tanker is in same position which they left..he rushed there n examined the area..he enquired people around to know what actually happened that day n what they saw…


"hmmm this is accident intentional"ram kapoor said which shocked everyone..


"sir what are u saying??koi kyun jaan bhuj kar accident karwayega??"


Ram:hmm kyun nahi…may be it's part of their plan..u see mr.arjun this tanker is parked here and it is not at all in the midde of the road..car us taraf se aayi hai..it is came from there (he showed the building)and hit the tanker which was placed a side…that too in middle portion..if it would be an accident then it might have hit front side which is the possibility from this side…may be he is partner to that murderer..he wants to divert people's mind in this accident so that no one could pay attention to murder there n what happened n who shot him..


Arjun gulped his saliva seeing his intelligence.."and ha mr.arjun did u get any dead here??"..he nodded in no..


"perfect!!!"he said with a smirk n thumped his hand on car with excitement...and roamed around the place examining the car..his gaze caught something suddenly…he went back side the car and saw….

[so guys guess why ram said perfect n what he saw?😉😉]

Precap:

What do u think ram saw there???

He visits hospital n sees dead body of the person who died in train..will he find out he is maan singh khurana???

Maan's visit to mr.mishra..what will he come to know there???

keep guessing guys..😉😉

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