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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome continue soo

thanx😊
will try to update soon..

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

heey nice concept...

love it...

continue soon

plz add me in & pm dear

thanx tanu😊
enti e madya scraps kuda pampatledu?busy a?
any way thanx for ur comments...love u dear

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: jyothikrish
wow... awesome update...
loved it...
love this movie very much...
continue soon...
want to see maneet in this...

thanx jyothi dear😊
yes i took tthe story line but made some changes in it😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: NaGeSwArI
awesome

thanx nageshwari😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Shruti_Goyal
awesome start dear
luved the story line
plz continue soon

tahnx shruti😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: renjini263
Awesome start Mona!!!! loved d 1st part... poor guy!!! ab se zindagi main kissi ko nahi chedega woh...😆 ohh pinky tum bhi na...tumhe kab bhuk nahi lagti??? lovd d update plzz cont soon w8ing 4 d nxt update

thanx renjini😊😊
ha o kisi se panga nahi lega kyun ki hamari sherni acchi sabak sikahyi na use😉😉
will try to update soon...
love u dear😊

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1
awesome start

thanx😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

thanx for ur love and support guys...love u all..

sheetalvasa, nehavashi, zil143, nehakapoor7, kabslocks, preetianand21, MONIJA78, mayapari, etrika, cyaa, tania90, sree10, prathyusmiling, salmankhanrulz, -Manashi-, Dazlingdivya, cutemishti, valli22, renjini263, amalu123, VidyaAishSingh, Deepanwita, maaneetmaahi, simm28, Geetmaan1234, aanappin, backy, muraadlovesdd, zunaiba5, KINGKHANFAN, punam2712, srirad, jyothikrish, NANDY_BRU, maansi007, sakshi.ekansh, anupm04, Remya_Pillai, manesha76, monika1992, tanya_100, DDbiggestfan, geetsweet, Mehek25, anshra, shah10, mollycoddle, minnie_tweetie, Mariam94, spvd, NaGeSwArI, rajeev the best, swetha10, Shruti_Goyal, kahkashansakina, zahra15, zaara2212, -Nilam-, sindu555, abinash079, preethia,

keep supporting me guys...i need ur support badly...
-mona

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

                                          WANTED
          part-2
hey guys as many of u were asking about story line..i want to confirm u all that yes i took the story line of the movie(telugu)but made little changes in it..
friends i gave english translations this time..so plz comment and dont forget to like..

guys iam introducing another character now:
savitri khurana:

         maan's mom.she's geet's bua and more than bua she loves geet like her own mother.

              geet tries to catch that guy but her attempts go in vain as he runs as fast as he can to save his life...

geet:oye...ruk jaa...
         darpok...[hey stop there...u coward..]

meanwhile,nano,pinky and meera reaches the place where geet is standing with both her hands holding her waist and panting badly...

pinky:geet...aakhir bagadiya na use...sach kahu muje tho badi mazaa aaya tha...[hey geet finally u made him run away...and really i enjoyed the whole scene]

nano:ha yar...jab tum us ladke ka collar pakadke letter ke bhare mein pooch rahi thi..tab uski shakal dekne layak thi..[ha...u know that guy's facial expressions seemed very funny when u were enquiring him about the letter and all..]

four of them starts laughing by recollecting the whole incident that happened just before few minutes...

meera:bas bas...ye sab tho teek hai geet par agar koi tumhe yaha dekhliya tho...?[enough...if anyone finds u here in this place...then???]

geet:dekne do di...aakhir unhe bhi tho pata chale geet naam ka cheez kya hai aur usse panga lene ka natija kya hoti hai😉[let them see...then they'll come to know about the circumstances that they need to meet if they mess with geet handa]

meera:[smirks]agar kisi ne daarji ko jaakar batadiya tho? ...[if anyone informs this to daarji..then..?]

geet:[hits her head with her palm]o teri...
              muje tho daarji ko dawaai deni thi aur abhi tak mein yahi hoon...[makes baby face..]

[god!i have to give medicines to daarji and still iam here...]

meera:ab jaldi chalo warna hamari khair nahi...
[let's move now otherwise we gonna die]

geet:ha di...chalo..chalo[ha di let's go]

both start running as fast as they can...

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@mumbai:

karan:tum muje uska no do mein khud handle kar lunga..[u give me his number..i'll handle it]

viky:ok

meanwhile,karan's mobile rings...

karan:vikram tum jaakar apna planning shuru karo..i mean the same work u do for every operation...[vikram u can go knw and start planning..i mean the same work u do for every operation]

viky:(confusingly)okk...

karan:hello...
             ha mein kal aaraha hoon...
             ha...zaroor aaunga...
              [hello...iam coming there 2morrow and i'll be there for sure]

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@hoshiarpur:
meera and geet finally reaches their destination i.e their home...they were panting heavily as they were running continuosly..

meera:[panting]oye...geet ab ruk kyun gayi hai?andar chal...
            [wat are u waiting for?let's go inside..]

geet quickly starts running inside but suddenly bumps in to a strong body...

geet:ouchhh...[she rubs her arm near elbow]
          dekke nahi jaa sakthe the...anda hogaye kya??
        [can't u see?]

aadi:ohh...sor..sorry di

geet:[still rubbing her arm]
          sorry...??tumhe itni bade bade aankein diya hai babaji ne...uska istmal tho kiya karo...jab dekho kisi na kise se takra jaathe ho...aur phir bolthe ho sorry[imitates aadi]..buddu kahinka
[babaji has given u big big eyes and can't u make use of them while walking??u'll always bumps in to some one or the other and then asks for sorry??]

aadi:[makes innocent face] di mein ne kaha na sorry...phir bhi aap muje daat rahi hai...mein jaan bhooj kar thodi kiya hai..
         [i said sorry na!then y are cursing me?]

geet:[smirks] bada aaya sorry bolne wale...buddu kahinka
         [oh how great u are...u are asking for sorry]

aadi:di..aap phir se muje buddu kaha...[u called me buddu again..]

geet:ha..

aadi:teek hai..mein buddu hoon par aap tho samajdhar hai na...aapko dekkar chalna chahiye tha...
[it's ok iam buddu but u are smart na..then u would have been careful while walking]

geet:[makes o shaped mouth] ab tum mujse zuban lad rahe ho...apne di se...[points finger towards her]
[oh so u started giving back answers to me]

aadi:aap bhi tho muje buddu kaha na[innocently]
[u also called me buddu na]

geet:aadi tum...[you..]

meera:bas...ab bas karo tum dono...baccho ki tarah ladna band karo aur andar chalo warna maa naraaz hojayegi..
[now stop fighting like kids and let's go inside other wise mom will be become more angry]

aadi:nahi di andar mat jao...maa tho already bahuth naraaz hai aap dono se spcly geet di se...itni gusse mein hai ki agar tum log uske saamne jaayenge na tho o abhi ke abhi tum dono ko khaa jayegi..
[no...dn't go..mom is already fuming with anger and she is ready to eat u away with her anger if u go inside]

meera and geet together...kya????
both gulps..

meera:ab kya kare??[wat we'll do now?]

then geet notices medicines in aadi's hand...she instantly starts giving victorious smile...

meera:kya baat hai geet?tumhare dimag mein kuch chal raha hai kya?
[wat's the matter?is anything is going on in ur mind]

geet:ha...di[with huge smile]kamaal ka idea hai maa se bache ka...
[there is a brilliant idea to get saved from mom's anger]

she explains her plan to meera and aadi...

geet:aadi tum mera help karoge na?
[aadi u'll help me na?]

aadi:he...he...di ke liye kuch bhi..
[anything for u di]

geet:hayee...mera sweetu[she pulls his cheek]

meera:ab chal[let's move now]

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@mumbai:
karan enters public telephone booth...he calls to the number which vikram gave him to finalize the deal..a man lifts the call

[guys no offence here iam just using my own names of leaders...plz dnt take anything serious if the names are realted to any political leader]

karan:rajeev sharma se baat karni hai..
[i wanna talk to rajeev sharma]

man:ji aap koun?[may i know who are u?]

karan:tum apna sir ko phone do use khud pata chal jaayega ki mein koun hoon.
[u just handover the phone to ur sir and he himself recognizes me]

man:par sir...[but sir]

karan:lagtha hai tumhe jeene ki tamanna nahi hai isliye mujse panga lerahe ho...mein ne kaha na apna sir phone do...chup chap do warna...

[i think u dont love ur life..that's y u are trying to mess with me...now silently handover the phone to ur sir..otherwise..]

man:[gulps]nahi sir aisa mat kijiye..mein de raha hoon na..
[no..dnt do like that iam giving to him]

he handovers the phone to rajeev sharma but he asks his friend sujay singh to handle as he is busy with some meeting..

ss:hello...mein rajeevsharma ka dost bol raha hoon..sujay singh
[hello this sujay singh and iam the friend of rajeev sharma]

karan:rajeev sharma kaha hai.?muje use baat karni hai..

[where is he?i wanna talk to him]

ss:mujse baat karo ya usse koi farak nahi padega...hum dono ek hi hai...tum mujse kaho...waise bhi mein hi phone kiya tha tumhare liye..

[u can talk to me..and iam the one who called u for the deal]

karan:accha!tho tumhare dost ke jagah par tumhe mar saktha hoon..

[oh!so can i kill u in the place of ur friend?]

ss:[gulps]nahi...maarna nahi hai sirf acting karni hai..aur..
[no...u dont need to kill really but just act and..]

before he could complete...

karan:hamara remuneration hai 2 crores and 1crore advance mein chahiye... deal pakki hai?
[we charge 2 crores and take 1crore in advance...is the deal ok for u?]

ss:[flabbergasted] 2 crore???aur 1 crore in advance???

karan:tumhe baar baar shock khaane ki bimaari hai kya?har baath par shock ho jaathe ho..
ha...agar deal ok hai tho batado...waise bhi muje apna time waste karna pasand nahi hai..isliye jaldi batado..

[do u hav any disease of getting shock in every matter?
if u are ok with the deal they say yes otherwise don't waste my time in stammering..]

ss:koi discount milsakthi hai kya?
[can i get disscount in money]

karan:[with weird expression]
[self thought]oh!god wat is this man up to?
professional se discount maang raha hai..kanjoos kahinka...
        ha...mil sakthi hai...mein ek kaam kartha hoon..tumhare dost ko paisa lekar maarne ki acting kartha hoon aur free mein tumhe maardetha aur o bhi asli mein...hui na disscount...
[yes i can give u disscount...i'll do one thing i'll shoot ur friend by taking money and kill u in real that too free of cost...so how was thw disscount]

ss:[gulps again]
arey bhai tum tho naraz ho rahe ho...mein bus ye pooch raha tha ki kya mein ek baar tumse mil saktha hoon?

[don't be angry..i was just trying to ask whether i can meet u for once?]

karan:koi zaroorat nahi...tum bas paisa pahunchao sahi time par..
[no need of that...u just send the money to the place where i want them to]

he then informs him the place he have to send the money..

ss:par bina dekhe itne saare paise kese desaktha hoon?agar tum paise lekar bhag gaya tho?

[how can i give u that much money with out knowing u?wat if u run away after taking money?]

karan:[rolls his eyes]mein political leader nahi hoon dokha dene ke liye...jo bhi kehta hoon o karke dikatha hoon..

[iam not a political leader to deceive others..i'll do wat ever i say..]

ss:atleast apna naam tho batao..[atleast let me knw ur name]

karan:if u wish to see the gun then it's ok but if u wish to see or know from where the bullet is coming...then it is a free welcome to ur death by urself..
isliye muje dekne ya naam jaane ki koshish matkaro warna apna mouth ka zimmedar tum khud hoga
[so dont even wish to see me or know my name otherwise u'll be the one who is responsible for ur owndeath]

ss is sweating badly only with the power of karan's words...
his words are as powerful as the bullet which is producing trembling sensation in his body..

ss:ha...tee..teek hai..mein bhijwatha hoon na paise o bhi time par..

[ok ok i'll send the money in time]

as soon as ss spells those words karan wont wait for a second and disconnects the call..
ss wipes his sweat and goes inside to inform rajeev about the deal..

maan comes out from the booth with same attitude...he wont hav anyfear about anyone in his eyes even if he is roaming freely in public..that too being a professional assasinator..
he takes out his mobile from his pocket and calls vikram..

karan:deal final hai...[the deal is final]

viky:plan bhi ready hai..
[plan is also ready]

so guys...this is the update...may be u all are feeling it bore but i wrote this all to show karan's attitude..hope u all like it..

sorry for mistakes and bear with my language as iam not that fluent in them but tried my best to give best...plz comment and negative comments are mostly welcome...actually i want them so that i can improve myself...

plz pressLIKE and do COMMENT..

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waiting for ur comments...😉😉😉
love u all...
-mona

link to next part:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/2651796/maaneet-ss-wanted-thread2-added?pn=14

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago