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WANTED


PART-15

Ram(st):ab pata chal jayega ki whether mr.maan singh khurana is innocent or not…he thought to give them for test to compare with finger prints on gun which they found at murder spot..it's the same gun which maan forgot to bring…





maan offered ram to sit on couch there in the teraace itself…maan settled in couch with his atitude..all the while ram is keenly observing every move of maan..he is trying to find if there is any cghange in his expressions finding a police officer there..generally a criminal panicks when police comes in front of him but maan is very confident in his place n there is not even a glimpse of fear or tension either in his face or hesitation in speaking……maan slightly smirked seeing ram's attempts..he sat in very opposite couch to ram..now both are facing each other n there is table between…


Ram:so mr.maan how are u??i mean u got ur property back n all…u must be happy...


Maan smirked while crossing his arms…"iam fine mr.ram…seems u are not fine…I mean very tensed for some case…


Ram instantly looked at him sternly n asked"how do u know that iam tensed for some case??"


Maan smiled slightly.."mr.ram as far as I remember I don't know u n u don't know me…and u r a C.B.I officer..so obvioulsy u are here for ur enquiry..right…


Ram also smiled…"hmmm u r right iam here for some enquiry…I think u know about recent murder of a politician…maan nodded..and ram explained how that murder escaped from them(ha ha ram maan ke bhaare mein maan ko hi bata raha hai..lol😆)


Ram:so we finally saw him in that train from where he escaped again…we got to know about ur reservation in the compartment..so u would be knowing about him I mean his face any signs of him…



Maan:no…as u said it took place in ****** station…I was not there in that compartment..yeah i reserved that compartment but when I stepped down for water bottle in previous station train left before I could catch it.. I came her by bus…so no idea…maan said shrugging his shoulders…




Ram:hmmm ok…but you would have seen some one roaming here n there doubt fully I mean some one who looked very scared,tensed..think think…



Maan pretended as if he is trying to recollect the incidents..he nodded n said"no..i don't remember any one doing like that…aapne suddenly pooch liya I cant recollect it properly…

Ram:no problem mr.maan you can call me if u remember anything and if u know any clue about him…

Maan:but I don't have ur number…..

Maan convinced ram in such a way that he is really trying to recollect something n he is getting something ... ram instantly took out the same card which have maan's finger prints n gave it to maan…"here is my number"..maan smirked while taking it…one of the cop who came with ram coughed that's when ram realised what he did.."oh no...he very intelligently took his finger prints n maan even more intelligently destroyed his clue…




Ram gave a weak smile to him n took leave…he came out adjusting his spects at the same time thinking how maan answered his every question.."I have say mr.maan singh khurana is too smart to handle….but I feel something is really fishy.."n left the place thinking about his next step to reach the culprit….



Maan smirked while twisting that card in his fist n he blowed air as if he know that it is brushed with powder…



Days went on n maan totally became family man now…he is giggling,smiling with them n rejoicing every moment with them…s.d became normal again n they shifted to KM..now they are living in khurana mansion..aadi also joined the business n geet too…geet being an M.B.A know about business so she too joined them…she at the same time working as maan's secretary….




Maan n geet's relation also blossoming day by day…they sometimes get lost in each other,sometimes hug each other when they come closer but still they didn't confess each other…they both know that they love each other but still didn't confess…




One day maan n geet are working on a project in conference room since morning..as always they lost in each other some times but straightened themselves n worked again..they finally completed the blue brints n thinking about some quotes…both are pacing in the room thinking about the quotes…both got some idea at the same time n turned to say that idea to other but bumped in to each other n fall on nearby couch with maan on top of geet…now maan is on top of geet n lost in each other…geet's lips were trembling as maan's hot breath fanning her lips…maan who is also lost in her eyes moved closer…next second maan's lips are on her tender lips nibbling them…he kissed her gently nibbling her lips n geet tooo reponded kissing him gently…..





They broke with a jerk when maan's mobile rang…maan left shocked with what he did just now…he felt ashamed of himself..not able to face her he rushed out of the room to his cabin…but geet blushed n she too didnt go to him becoz she's feeling shy to face him...




When he entered his cabin his mobile rang again n he received it without looking the id…"karan…" a voice came from other side…

Maan alarmed with the tone.."pari…."


Pari:karan where were you??i know u asked me not to call u but I cant stop myself from giving u this news..

Maan:pari sab teek hai na I mean is she fine???

Pari:karan not only fine…her condition improved a lot…iam sure kuch hi dino mein o bilkul teek hojayegi…I called u to give u this good news…

Maan felt very happy and a tear rolled down his cheek.."thank u soo much pari…I would have failed to save her if u are not with me..


Pari:ofoo karan don't be formal with ur friend..waise bhi ye sab meri family ki wajah se huwa…iam happy that I atleast helped u to save her ….her voice chocked….being a doctor it's my duty to save her...



And ha karan arjun came to know that u are alive..so be careful..o zarur kuch karega…u don't worry about her iam her to take care of her…



Man nodded n disconnected the call..he fumed with anger listening arjun's name..at once his past came again infront of his eyes….his eyes turned blood red…he recollected hw he turned in to a murderer n what circumstances made him to do…he then remember how he reached there…"oh no mein kya kar raha tha…geet ko…oh god how could I do this ??i don't deserve her…mein kesa kar saktha hoon aisa…nahi muje geet se door rehna hoga aur jald se jald sab ko ye sach batadunga ki mein maan nahi hoon…bus kuch aur din…I'll ensure whether everything is right n will leave this place..after all maan is dead becoz of me …atleast itna toh kar saktha hoon uski family ke liye….he again remmeber their kiss n how geet respond to him..he is very sure now that geet is in love with him…he thumped his wrist on table with frustation n anger on him…..



From next day maan tried to maintain distance from geet as much as he can…at home he is all the while engrossed in files locking himself in the room n at office he is intentionally asking aadi to provide him all the files he want…geet irked with his ignorance but thought he might be really busy with the project..she many times tried to talk to him but he ignored..on the presentation day he asked aadi to accompany him instaed of geet…geet now understood that he is doing it intentionally…she thought to question him after the presentation..maan as usual ignored her again with out answering her…




It is day of party held in a hotel for clients…geet is detemined to question him now as she cannot endure his ignorance..maan at the same time feeling very restless not having her beside him but he have no other option than to ignore her..he saw tears in geet's eyes many times when he spoke rudely to her to ignore her but it hurted him more than her…he left to party without taking her with him…aadi who already present in the party got busy with clients…..



Here geet is trying hard to talk to maan but he is no where to listen her…

"maan plz muje aap se baat karni hai"she asked him following him…"geet I said I have some work..dont waste my time..waise bhi I don't want to talk anything with u"he said with out even looking at her n moved forward…geet is irritated now n dragged him with her to one corner holding his collar….maan is shocked with this act of geet…"geet what's this??pagal hogayi ho..cant u behave ur self??what everyone'll think about us??they don't know that there is nothing betwn us but they'll flood us with nasty question if they find us..so plz don't create scene here.."



Geet again stopped him holding his wrist…"there's nothing between us????ha maan…"geet asked painfully…."she walked to face him n siad"why u r doing this maan??Why???why u r ignoring me??u know how much it hurts me??if I did anything wrong then u scold me but plz don't ignore me like this..i cant take this.."




Maan felt that some one pinched his heart…."geet..what are u talking???iam not understanding anything...and what is there between us ..yeah we are friends so there is nothing more than friend ship"



Geet:oh accha then what was that in conference room???oh bhi friendship tha…


Maan's heart winced in pain again….meanwhile, a girl came n invited maan for a dance n maan without thinking once accept her invitation as he want geet to hate him,to go away from him…he started dancing with that girl but his eyes were fixed on geet who stood there crying silently n looking at him painfullly….he could not take it n danced with that girl furiously taking her near to him to make geet more angry….




Geet who is observing this fumed with more anger..she looked here n there…she is very angry n wanted to do something which may hurt maan..she remember maan once saying her in one party that he hates to see women drinking…she took drink without any second thought n gulped it in one go..maan is shocked with this n came running to her when she held another glass…."geet ye kya pagal pan hai…and from since when u started drinking??what are u doing??" he stopped her dragged her with him far way from the men who are looking at her lustfully….



"leave me…I said leave me..u go n dance with that chudail..i'll do whatever i want..who are u to question me...leave me..."geet tried to free herself…"geet chup chap mere saath chalo…ek shabt nahi samji tum"maan said sternly n held her hand again…she glared at him n snapped away his hand..she then ran upstairs climbing the steps before maan could get hold of her..maan also followed her….

Precap:

geet talli..

Geet:maan u know what I love u soo much………😃

Geet kissed on his bare chest which sent shivers through his spine……😳

Maan trying to get hold of her but she is running around the room as if she is playing hide n seek….maan if fed up stood in middle of the room placing his hands on hips…"geet iam asking u for the last time..will u come here or else I leave u alone n go from here.."maan said..

Geet came running n hugged him from back...

Ram meets some one where he gets the clue about karan i.e our maan….😉


lz press like if u like it n comment plz..can u give more than awesome...iam ready to receive criticism..but plz write something more than awesome so that i can know whether my writing is good or bad...

silent readers atleast bother to press like it take not even a second...

love..

-mona😳



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Posted: 13 years ago
me first yipppeeweee...cumg to the update awsome updatw maan toh sooo clever bt maan doing wring wid geet whts her fault as he is treating her lyk dis..nd geet took a hard drink nd precap seems interesting nd who is she pari is talking abt...update soon
Edited by uteem - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely one...
SO maan tackled ram..that was superb..
atleast maan shud tell the whole truth to geet..
Geet talli!!it vl b fun...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow dear this is really awesme maan ignoring geet waiting for precap bechara ka kya haal hoga...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb... Our maan is more smater than u ram...
Omg they kissed... Their 1st kiss...
Bt now due to his truth his is pushing her away...
Lets c kya hoga...
Oh ho geet tali... Ab kya hoga...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is smart ..geet hurt wid maan's behaviour...

oh feet drunk n confessing her feelings..

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