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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

LOVE ALWAYS WINS..

PART-8
frnds i gave english translations this time for non hindi readers..plz press like and do comment...

nupur's phone rings...

nupur:are mayank tum?meri yaad aarahi thi kya?(she teases him)
(mayank u?wat happened?missing me?)

mayank:nupur plz ab shuru mat ho jao..mere paas bilkul time nahi hai..(nupur i dnt have time so plz dont start teasing me)

nupur gets annoyed..

nupur:mere paas bhi koi time nahi hai tumse baath karne ka..bye..(i too dont have any time to talk to u...bye)

mayank:are nupur suno tho..(nupur listen)

nupur:kya hai?(wat?)

mayank:are tum tho naraz ho gayi.pehle meri baath tho suno..(y u are taking it seriously..first listen to me.)

nupur:by god mayank pehle muje chidathe ho aur phir poochte ho ki mein naraz kyun hoon?.(first irritate me and then ask y iam getting furious)

sid and riddhima are smiling hearing their convo but as soon as nupur glares at them they will make serious face..

nupur:ab kaho kyun call kiya?(y did u called me)

mayank:mein ye batane ke liye call kiya tha ki tum shaam ko ghar mat jao sid ko lekar seede xyz restaurant aajao(i called to inform u that dnt go to home and come directly to restaurant)

nupur:par kyun?hum tho plan banane wale the na.(but y?)

mayank:ha par di ghar jarahi hai shaam ko..isliye humein bahar hi plan karna padega warna tumhe pata hai na di yuhi pehchan jaayegi hamare plan ko..(yes but di will be at home in the evening so we have to make our plan outside itself otherwise she'll easily catch us)

nupur:hayee...mere mayu tum tho bahuth smart ho..

mayank:ab muje jaana hoga..tum sid se ke saath pahunch jao.. teek hai..(ok then u reach there with sid)

nupur:ok bye..

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geet comes down and finds meera there...
she hugs meera..

meera:oye geet badi kush lag rahi ho..kya baath hai?
she notices maan coming down..

meera:o..tho isliye kyun ki tumhara wo ghar pe hai..

geet gives confused look..
meera signalls her with eyes showing maan who's coming down..
geet blushes..

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chup kar...ab chale..

both of them sit in living room..

meera:geet muje unse introduce nahi karwayegi kya?

geet:meera tum bhi na kya ek hi baath lekar baiti ho..ek baath bata tu mere liye aayi ho ya maan ke liye?

meera:(showing fake anger)tuje introduce nahi karwana hai to mat karo..aise baath ghumane ki zaroorat nahi hai..

geet:teek hai meri maa. ..ab shakal mat banao.mein introduce karwathi hoon..

meera smiles..

geet calls maan there..

geet:maan ye hai meri best friend meera.aur meera ye hai maan..nupur ka bhai..mayank ka best frnd..

meera:(whispers to geet)tumhara?

geet hits her with elbow..

meera:hai maan

maan:hello meera

meanwhile s.d comes down with file..

s.d:ye lijiye bete aapke file..

maan:thanx mom..

geet:mama ye meri frnd meera hai..

meera:namaste aunty

s.d:namaste bete..aap khadi kyun hai baitiye na

meera:ji

maan:mom mein jaakar apna kaam kartha hoon..

s.d:ji bete

maan again becomes busy in staring at geet and geet too..

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s.d:geet bete aap dono bate kijiye hum nakul se juice bijwathe hai

geet who is busy in staring maan wont respond..

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s.d:geet bete hum aapse baath kar rahe hai

still she wont respond..
meera instantly hits her with elbow..and bring geet back to senses..

geet:ji...ji mama

s.d:aap bhi na.. pata nahi kya hojatha hai aapko..
meera smiles silently.
s.d turns to go and finds maan there..

s.d:maan bete aap abhi tak gaye nahi?

maan:ha..ha mom..ja raha hoon..

he goes from there throwing glances at geet..

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geet:ab chale..

meera:chalo
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at hospital:
sid:kya kaha tumhare mayu...

nupur glares..

sid:sorry sorry..batao kya kaha jiju ne

nupur:bhai aapko pata hai na hum log geet ke bday party ke planning karne wale the..

sid:ha tho..

nupur:mayank ne kaha ki geet ghar ja rahi hai is liye unhone hame restaurant ko aane ko kaha..

sid:tho teek hai hum wahi jaayenge..
is baar geet keliye aisa plan banayenge ki wo humare surprise dekthe hi kush ho jaye..

nupur:ha bhai sahi kaha aapne..

sid:waise bro ko pata hai na..

nupur:kyun nahi hoga..muje tho lagtha hai o abhi tak plan kar chuke honge..aakhir o bhai ke liye itni spcl jo hai..

sid:ha..sirf bro ke liye nahi hum sab ke liye bhi special hai..

riddhima who is listening all this thinks..

riddhima(self thought) o god! ye log phir se shuru hogaye ab geet ka gun gana band hi nahi hoga.

she comes to her senses when sid calls her..

sid:pata hai ridz geet ne humesha meri badi behen ki tarah muje sambhala,chote bhai ki tarah pyar kiya..o bahuth acchi hai..

nupur:ha bhai o sach much bahuth acchi hai..

sid:ridz tum bhi aarahi ho na hamare saath..

riddhima:(self thought) mein agar inlogo ke saath gayi na waha bhi geet ke tareef karkarke mera dimaag khajayenge..)

o sid actually muje ek urgent case attend karni hai..tum log jao na mein bday pe zaroor aaungi..

sid:ok..

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at km:

geet:mama ab hum chalthe hain..hume bahuth saare padayi karni hai..

s.d:teek hai bete..bye..

she hugs geet and they both were about to leave..meanwhile geet gets a message..

ek baar terrace pe aao..

geet:meera tum chalo mein abhi aati hoon..

meera:teek hai jaldi aana..

geet goes to terrace and finds maan there...
she hugs him..

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she breaks the hug..
geet:apne muje yaha kyun bhulaya?

maan:jaane se pehle meri gift lene

geet:gift?

maan:ha..

saying thus he comes close to her..
but geet stops him by hitting him..

geet:maan ab muje jana hoga aur meera meri intezaar karrahi hogi..aap shararat mat kijiye

maan:mat jao na geet tumehe mujse door bhejne ka man nahi kar raha hai..

geet pulls maan's cheeck saying...

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geet:hayee kitne pyare pyare baatein karthe ho aap..

maan:geet..

geet:maan mein isdesh ko chod kar thodi ja rahi hoon jo aap aese baath kar rahe hai..mein kal aaungi na..

maan:
meanwhile;meera comes there..

meera:ab romance khatam ho gayi tho chale..

geet and maan quickly move a part..

geet:maan ab chalthi hoon bye..

she goes near door and turn around..she waves to maan

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maan also waves her..

precap:
interviews..

sorry for short update guys..iam in hurry now so gave short one...next update will be pakka long one...i swear.

plz press like and do comments...
and plz let me know ur opinons either positive or negative...
sorry for the mistakes and plz bear with my language as i have limited knowledge...

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love u all..

wating for ur comments...😉😉😉

-MONA

link to part9:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/2181062/maneet-ff-love-always-wins?pn=47

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#182

Nice update dear...

as usual the maaneet scenes were fantastic...
loved nupur mayank sid..
they really cares for geet a lot...
loved their bonding...
continue soon...
love u..

thank u for the update and pm
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Amrutha