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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww very sweet update romantic and cute update
Love how maan tease geet hehe
Are wah maan honeymoon ki planning bhi kar li ahem ahem
Itni bhi kya jaldi hai lol
Technology is the biggest enemy of lovers hahahaha
Love their sweet kiss and cute moments togther
Can't wait to read more sweety continue soon
And sweetu really very sorry for late comment
Love u mwahhh xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
MONA I HAVE JUST COME ACROSS THIS FF
SO LET ME READ IT BEFORE COMMENTS
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVED MAAN'S SAZAA FOR GEET
HE IS SO ROMANTIC
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome.
Loved Maans saza for geet.
But what is the connection between Maan's dad and Meera?
Pls continue soon.
Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 14.

Amazing update
Loved it.
Thanx for pm dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
woohhoo quiet romantic n sizzling dhamkedar update.. keep it up..add such little naughty chunks of maneet romance more n more .
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago


[banner credit goes to stutz and shivu]

PART-16

Recap:maan and geet had a romantic date and maan gifted geet a cottage..then they share some romantic moments..after that maan droped geet at her place and left to KM.

Geet entered the house just to find meera sitting in living room and lost in her thoughts..

Geet:meera tu abhi tak soyi nahi and it's quite late now..what happened?is everything ok?

Meera smiles at her innocent friend..ha ha iam ok..bus neend nahi aa rahi thi..so I thought to sit here…

Geet:accha teek hai..btw where is nupur..o so gayi kya?

Meera:no..she's in the kitchen..use bhi neend nahi aarahi thi..so went to prepare coffee for us…btw how was ur date?

Geet smiles and blushes remembering sweet moments with maan..

Meera:hayee……hayeee blushing ha??

Geet:chup kar…

Nupur:geet tu aagayi..

Geet:ha nupur..just now..

Nupur:I think u enjoyed ur date….

Geet:nupur tum bhi??

Nupur:why??what happened??if iam not wrong u went on date right!

Geet blushes…

Nupur:geet iam really happy to see u and bhai together..i hope bhai jaldi papa se baat kare..i cant believe that two people who used to fight every second now love each other…

Meera:what???maan and geet used to fight with each other?

Nupur:ha..dono mouka doonthe the ladne ka..i have to say that both were best enemies…

Meera:accha!nupur plz muje batao na..ye dono kese mile aur inki pyar ki kahani kese shuru hogayi?

Geet:meera tum bhi na..office nahi jana hai kya subah…chalo lets sleep na…

Meera:u go and sleep na..i want to listen…waise bhi I don't feel like sleeping now..nupur tu bata na..

Geet:nahi…muje bhi sunna hai kahi ye nupur mere bhare mein ulta seeda toh na kehde…after all maan is her bhai na..

Nupur:oye hello don't forget that I always support my friend…

Geet:I know baba just kidding…

Meera:now will u start nupur..

Nupur:ha..geet pehle delhi hostel mein rehthi thi isiliye uski mulaakat kabhi bhai se nahi huyi…when she completed her graduation she returned back mumbai..at the same time our wedding preparations were going on..it was the day of our engagement and geet was coming on the same day..mayank will be with me na so maan bhai went to the station to pick geet without even knowing her…

Flashback…

Maan in his car driving to the station…

Maan:it's ok mayank I'll manage…

Mayank:how maan..u didn't even have di's photo..

Maan:oops!i forgot…don't worry I'll manage..mein station aagaya hoon…I'll call u back bye..

Maan steps out of his car and looks here and there…

Maan:mayank se toh kehdiya ki I'll manage..but how…pata nahi ye geet koun hai?kese doondo..

Maan looks here and there to find some familiar face….he will check reservation list to find her compartment..he starts searching for her…then suddenly a girl(geet) who is passing from there with heavy luggage in her hands bumps in to maan..she's about to fall down but maan stops her from falling by holding her waist…maan is just mesmerized by her beauty,her innocent face and her eyes which were closed and she clutched maan's shirt tightly..geet slowly opens her eyes and is lost in his magic eyes..both lost in each other..they don't know why they are feeling like that but enjoying the moment…they don't even bother about their surrounding but just lost in each others eyes…





Just then a man in 40's steps down from the compartment where maaneet are in each others arms also lost in each other..he pats on maan's shoulder and says "agar aapko romance karna hai toh bahar jaa kar kijiye..par plz traffic jam mat kijiye"

Geet and maan came out of their trance with his words and soon seperated from each other..in this process geet steps on her suitcase which is on the ground and about to fall again and maan saves her again…

Geet:dekkar nahi jaa sakthe the..

Maan:what??

Geet:aapne muje dakka kyun diya??

maan:oye hello mein ne nahi tumne diya tha..ek baar yaad karlo…

she remembers and realises that she is the one who bumped in to maan…but geet is geet..how can she agree her mistake so easily….

Geet:accha!aap rasthe mein kambhe(pillar) ki tarah kyun kade the…how can I know that u'll be standing there..u should also observe who is coming and who is not…

Maan:are u out of ur mind…what u are talking??ye public place hai..i can stand whereever i wish...pagal toh nahi hogayi ho tum?

Geet:aapne muje pagal kaha?mein nahi aap aapki bhai ,aapki behen, aapke dost aapki biwi sab pagal hai…

Maan:kya kaha tumne…sach toh ye hai ki tum pagal ho isiliye bina wajah mujse lad rahi ho..ek toh galti ki..instead of asking sorry u are taunting me…

Geet:mein kyun sorry bolu..meri koi galti nahi thi…sorry toh aapko bolni chahiye..muje nahi… muje kuch nahi pata muje meri sorry chahiye aur o bhi do baar nahi nahi 3 baar..pehla wala muje dakka dene ke liye,aur do baar muje paagal kehne ke liye..ab jaldi se sorry boliye mein aapko maaf kardungi..

Maan:oh badi aayi maaf karne wali..sorry toh tumhe kehni chahiye..saath hi saath thanq bhi kyun ki mein ne tumhe do baar girne se bachaya…

Geet:mein kyun bolu..aapki wajah se mein girne waali thi isliye aapko hi bachana padega na..

Maan(st):ye ladki sach much pagal hai..muje geet ko doond na hai aur ye muje pagal kar rahi hai…[end of st]

Ab utjao mera haath duk raha hai..mein tumhe shaam tak aise hi carry nahi kar saktha hoon..upar se moti bhi ho…

Geet then realises that she is still in maan's arms…she is about to get up but stops again smirking at maan..

Geet:hah…mein moti hoon…aap bhi kuch kam nahi..apne dole shole toh dekhiye..aap na bilkul bull ki tarah ho..isiliye ek baar dakka diya aur mein gir gayi..chaddo!aap muje pehle sorry boliye iske baad mein utjaaungi..jitni jaldi aap sorry bolenge utni jaldi mein ut jaaungi aur aapka haat bhi nahi dhukega..chaliye chaliye sorry boliye…

Maan:bilkul bhi nahi…agar tum abhi nahi utogi na toh mein..

Geet:aapko jo karna hai kijiye..mein toh sorry sunkar ki utungi..

Maan:dekho aakri baar pooch raha hoon…

But geet wont bothers about his words..he then releases his hands which were encircled around geet's waist and holding her protectively….geet soon falls on ground..

Geet:ouch!!!ye aap ne kya kar diya…

Maan:wahi jo muje 5 minute pehle karna chahiye tha..

Geet looks at him annoyingly…

Maan smirks at her and starts his search for geet again…

Geet soon gets up and goes to maan…

Geet:rukhiye…aap aise nahi jaa sakthe..ab toh aapko 4 baar sorry bolni padegi..

Maan:dekho muje tang mat karo..muje kisi ko doondna hai..

Geet:mein bilkul tang karungi aapko…jab tak aap sorry nahi bolenge tab tak aapko tang karti rahungi..aap bas muje sorry boliye aur uske baad jo chahe kar sakthe hai…

Maan:oh tum muje black mail kar rahi ho aur upar se attitude dikha rahi ho..ab toh mein bilkul bhi nahi kahunga…

Geet:teek hai mein aapko bilkul tang karungi aur aapko jaane nahi doongi…

Maan glares at her geet smirks at him…




meanwhile,maan's mobile rings…

Maan:ha mein doond raha hoon…bas aa hi raha hoon..

He then disconnects the call..

Dekho meri behen ki engagement hai aur muje kisi ko lekar waha jaldi pahunchna hai isiliye mera raastha choodo..

Geet:wahi toh..mera bhi bhai ka engagement hai aur muje bhi kisi ko doond na hai jo muje pick karne wale hai..isliye sorry kahiye aur muje jaane dijiye…

Maan looks at her irritatingly and geet smirks again…….


precap:
nok jhok continues...will they reach engagement venue in time??will they come to know about each other...???

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mona

Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow mona awesome update dear...
loved it to the core... 😃
ohh geet came back n meera started teasing her n nupur is telling maneet's story.. wowww...
hahaha maan came for geet n vice versa... but started fighting...
yaar mona... geet kitni stubborn hain... cant believe that geet ne maan se jagda kiya wo bhi 1st meeting main... but ab dekho dono kitne pyaar karte hain... hayeee...
3 se 4 times sorrry kehna hain maan ko... aur geet ne maan ko thanku kehna hain... 😆 😆 i am laughing like crazy n mom is thinking i am gone mad... kya kar diya mona tumne tho...

ufff continue soon dear... plz plz plz... 😳
love u... hugs to u for such a mind blowing update...

Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago

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