abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD - Page 13

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awsome really nice plz pm me next time
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved it
continue soon and please add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesooome:) plz update sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heena...🤗 Awesome update, yaar...loved it.
So finally Abhay started melting...poor piya, hope Abhay falls in love with her soon. Loved Haseena too.. the perfect mom-in-law. And Jeh loves Piya...hope Abhay finds out...then he's gonna get possesive. 😍
Continue soon...really really waiting for ur nxt update.

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Posted: 13 years ago
guys thankuuu so much for ur amazing comments!!! it was so wonderful reading ur lovely words n ur these words encourage me alot to write more!!
sry won't b replying to everyone's comments individually!!
i knw u all r aving one question in common , dat is -wat abt jeh!!! bt widin nxt update u wl get ur answer!!
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Originally posted by: TISA07

Hey,whn will u update nxt?

today nly widin half an hour
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Abhay made her drink some water!! Finally pia started regaining her conscious, abhay was holding her securely frm one shoulder , he kept d glass of water on d table n took a piece of sweet frm d thali, pia who was silently looking at him, refused to av it n polietly said- let me do my puja first abhay!!!

Abhay didn't argue n helped her standing on her feet , pia took d thali in her hands n they both walked to d window n abhay kept her holding frm her shoulder during their small journey of merely 5 steps bt dis was their first journey together as a husbnad 'wife n they both gng through different emotions, it was nt abhay didn't hold her earlier or he didn't take care of her like this or may b more than this, bt today for d first time he was taking care of his wife nt his best frnd!! For abhay it was actually different, holding her so close nt like his frnd bt as his wife, was sumwhere breaking his own ice , which he made b/w him n her, he was feeling bad for her condition n sumwhere happy dat she was wid him n she was fasting for him, bt accpeting this was still far away frm his thoughts!!

Finally abhay stood infront of her n she did puja, she took seva n saw moon through it n then abhay n dat moment stopped there only, they kept looking at each for few minutes widout realising dat y they were standing there, finally they came out of their trance when abhay's cell started ringing n it was haseena on d other side, pia quickly turned her gaze n kept dat seva on d table, abhay replied to her mom's call n assured her dat pia was totally fine, they were together nw, pia was adjusting d dia in d thali , when abhay took some sweet n brought it close to her lips, pia slowly opened her mouth widout breaking d eye contact n hd it!!!

After dat abhay made his way towards d door, bt bf4 leaving he said- go n change, I m bringing dinner n he left !!

Pia couldn't believe on her ears, she couldn't stop her lips curving into a beautiful smile, she closed her eyes n thanked GOD for showing a ray of hope in her dark life!!!

Pia quickly changed in her night suite (a T n a lower) n came out n saw abhay was sitting on d chair n dinner was kept on d round table in their room!!

U start eating, i need to change- he said , while taking his clothes frm d wardrobe, when he came out of d washroom after getting fresh, he saw pia was waiting for him, she didn't even touch d food, abhay came n sat infront of her , they started aving their dinner in all silence , after finishing pia thought of taking plates down to d kitchen , bt bf4 dat, abhay took them n said- u go n sleep, I wl take them down, pia was actually surprised bt his action, it was nt dat abhay never helped someone one like this, bt it was ,he was offering it to her after son long time!! Bf4 he left d room, pia said- abhay!! He turned around n wid questioning eyes looked at her n she replied ' thanx!!!!

Abhay kept looking at her wid those plane expressions n said- I m sorry''.i m sorry dat I came late n he left d room, although his reply made her feel bad, bt she couldn't ask more then this in a day!!

When abhay entered his room, he found her sleeping on her usual place covering under d blanket!! Willingly or unwilling dunno, bt he took his steps towards her, for d first time he felt bad seeing her sleeping in couch or he always felt bad, bt today d differnce was, he accepted it , pia who heard his footsteps, tunred around n asked- abhay do u need something, her words marked full stop on his thoughts n he quickly changed his xpressions, simply replying no, he made his way to d bed, leaving her all confused behind!!

Bt there was no sleep in his eyes, all he could see pia's beautiful face everytime he closed his eyes to av some sleep, bt after struggling a lot finally he drifted to sleep!!

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Nxt week passed silently, nthing changed more b/w abhay n pia, pia felt dat happiness just for a day, coz abhay was all same again wid one xception, he tunred a bit soft towards her, he stopped replying rudely to her!!!

One day pia asked abhay abt arranging a surprise party for haseena-chand's marriage anniversary n to her surprise she gt a postive reply n also he offered his full help to her!! It was one day bf4 d party when pia called abhay n asked him to meet her at DLF shopping complex , as she wanted to buy gifts for her in laws!!!!! abhay reached on time n wating for pia in parking lot only, abhay himself was surprised of his behavior towards pia, bt then he thought , he was doing all dat just coz of his parents special day!! Soon pia arrived , she came there wid jeh, they both came out n jeh said hi to abhay to which he replied properly!! Sry abhay I gt late, actually my car broke down, thanx to jeh dat he dropped me- she said while smiling bck to jeh!!

Thanx jeh- abhay said (jeh was quite knwn to abhay coz he was pia's cls mate frm last two years )n they both walked away n jeh also left giving a small good bye hug to pia, bt d moment he hugged her, abhay felt something different, something which was nt gud, something which he never came across earlier'''.. soon they enetered d complex n pia started looking for a perfect gift, while during her shopping, abhay was all lost in his thoughts, he was trying to figure out wat happened in dat particular moment dat gave birth to those new feelings in his heart!!!

It was party night, haseena-chand gt reli surprised n both were so happy looking at d arrangements n their daughter's hard work for giving such a lavish party to them n making their day reli special!!

Pia-abhay came down, it was chand-haseena's day, bt most of d eyes were stuck to d most beautiful couple of d evening abhay-pia, they were looking so perfect n complementing each other!! They both came down n stood nxt to chand-haseena, haseena ' God bless u both, u too look simply perfect wide each other!!

Pia-abhay both gave a smile (which was somewhere a forced one, bt still today something natural was also there in their smile)to them n said thanx!!!

Aranb n madhu also came n congratulated them, they both were reli grateful to haseena-chand for accepting pia as their daughter-in-law or more as a daughter even after knwing d fact what their elder daughter hd done to their family n son!!

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After sometime cake cutting ceremony gt done n chand took haseena to d dance floor,

After d first dance, every couple was on d dance floor, xcept abhy-pia , pia was standing wid chand-haseena n abhay was wid his business clients , bt his gaze was fixed on pia, he was trying his best to concentrate on d talks of his clients bt her angelic beauty was nt allowing him dat specially after knwing dat somehw dat she belongs to him nly!!

D beautiful laugh which she was sharing wid his mother , her every small action , d way she her eyes were moving, d way she was tucking her curls behind her ears, d way every single bangle of her chura dancing wid her actions!! She was wearing an ivory work saree holding a pristine aura, aving fancy patch border enhanced with fancy thread work and intricate sequin embroidery. Lower half and second half of saree features detailed floral and leaf patterns, embellished with resham work, beads, fancy threadwork, faux pearl beads and sequins, wid very light make make-up, her beautiful curls falling down her back, wid few one playing on her innocent face!!

Beta y don't u go n dance wid abhay- haseena asked , pia was all quiet n looked at abhay for once who quickly turned his gaze as soon as their eyes met!! Haseena saw his son all busy wid his clients n said- ye ladka kabhi nahi sudhar sakta!!! Pia gavea sad smile!!

Abhay eyes again gt fixed to d same figure, bt soon he gt disturbed by someone's presence , for whom he gt some negative feels few time back only widout knwing d actual reason''..jeh came n greeted haseena-chand n took their blessings n gifted a beautiful bouquet to them, he said hi to pia n kept standing wid them nly, pia introduced him as her frnd n chand-haseena found him reli a very nice person!!after sometime jeh asked pia for a dance, pia found a bit strange n odd, she looked at jeh n then to her parents , haseena smiled n said- go pia!!! Pia didn't want to go bt couldn't say no after haseena's words n bf4 leaving wid jeh, she looked at abhay for once whose didn't turn his gaze this time n also showed a little anger!!

Jeh n pia started dancing, abhay was watching them silently, it was a simple dance, pia was smiling at jeh's random comments on d couples , soon jeh felt a strong hand on his shoulder, he turned n saw abhay there who was looking at pia, pia found something different in his eyes, which was nt anger bt still far away frm her understanding, abhay shifted his gaze to jeh n said wid full authority in his voice- would u mind if I dance wid my wife!!!

For once pia lost d track of her beats, she couldn't believe abhay called her his wife, was she dreaming, bt d very nxt moment she realized d reality of her dream, abhay hands slid down her waist possessively n he literally pulled her towards him, nt even leaving d space for air to pass out, pia was little confused ,bt nt afraid, rest she was nly trying to understand wat was gng on, she was happy dat for d first she heard d word wife frm his mouth, d moment abhay's hand touched her bare waist, a current ran down through her spine, she closed her eyes to control her heartbeats, this was something very new to her, till nw she was so lost in her own thoughts dt didn't realize d song started playing n dat was also one of her fav - "mere bina main rehna laga hun"

He entwined his fingers wid her , they both started flowing wid d song n widin few seconds they gt lost into each other ,forgetting d surroundings, they both hd danced earlier also, bt today it was different, pia never felt abhay so possessive on her n abhay didn't see pia like this ever bf4!!

abhay twirled her in all possible ways, letting her out of her breath n wid their last step, he made her go all round , taking her on his arm , he bent down n placed a soft kiss on her cheek, pia closed her eyes n moment gt freezed there only''''

bt soon d thundering of claps brought them back to reality, abhay made pia stand straight''.n both smiled nervously !!!

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At nite pia was lying in her couch n abhay on bed

Whatever happened today was something which left both shocked n surprised!!

Somewhere they both were enjoying this new feel!!

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Nxt day

abhay was sitting at a restaurant wid his delegates, he gt his new deal n quite happy after dat, he was abt to leave dat place, when his eyes fall on her, she was sitting wid jeh n there was a smile playing on her lips, smile which was used to b there on her lips, when they used to b together, bt today it was different, she was sitting wid another guy n dat another guy was none other jeh khurana , , he kept standing there only, he was trying hard to avoid dat feeling which came out of sudden n this time he knew dat he was getting jealous , n finally he couldn't control himself when he saw, jeh keeping his hand on pia's hand ...he went their n kept his hand on pia's shoulder, pia turned around n gt surprised cum shocked looking at him, she politely took his name- abhay(she was totally unaware of his jealousy thing, moreover she was happy seeing him there)!!!

abhay's eyes were still on their hands, jeh took away his hand frm pia's when he noticed abhay's xpressions!!

abhay-lets go home pia, he simply said it!!

pia gt confused, she was nt xpecting this, everything was away frm her understanding,

bt abhay v r still left wid our last class- pia replied!! r u coming wid me or nt-he asked wid a stern xpressions on his face!!

pia gt totally confused wid his behavior bt simply said yes, bt bf4 leaving she said goodbye to jeh n asked him to met her tomorrow, so dat they cn discuss their rest of d project work!!

abhay was getting reli furious, at her words, bt didn't react at dat time, he himself frustarted of his sudden feelings!!

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they left frm d restaurant, pia asked bf4 taking her seat in abhay's car, abhay my car is parked at clg, its better u drop me at clg!

this time abhay couldn't take it nymore n replied wid full annoyance-sit, i wl send driver, he wl bring ur car back!!

finally pia asked- wats wrong abhay, u seem, i mean !!!...

nthing is wrong wid me pia, nw sit, v av to go home, abhay opened d door of d car n took d driver seat , pia quietly took passenger seat, it was after ages, she was sitting nxt to him in his car!!

put d seat belt on pia, he said to her who was lost in her own thoughts, as soon as she heard him , she tried to put on her seat belt, bt it got hung somewhere, she was struggling when she found his hand on her, he noticed d sudden change in her positioning , she looked at her for once ,her closeness, her fragnance was affecting his senses, he quickly fixed d seat belt n started concentrating on driving!!

pia was little frustrated of his behavior this time, bt didn't say nything!!!

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Abhay was busy wid his packing, he was leaving for delhi 2morrow, when he heard pia was talking to jeh , he gt reli angry n clinched his fist in anger n closed his eyes to let his anger out, when he heard her voice, abhay-she said!!

he turned around holding back his anger!!

Ummm,its jeh's b'day party tomorrow n'''.bt bf4 she could av completed her sentence- nooo!! U won't b gng nywhere!!

Pia was hell shocked !!!

Bt y abhay- wats wrong wid u, he is my frnd !!

Abhay shouted- u r nt going nywhere n dats final, u gt it!!!

Dats it abhay, I dunno y r u doing all this, bt I don't av this much of patience in me, atleast give me d reason!!!- she said in equally strong tone this time!!

I don't think so, I need to give u ny reasons for my decision said abhay!!

U need abhay-pia literally shouted this time!!

Ya as if, u gave me d reason y ur sister left me on my marriage day, y she broke my heart, y v gt married, right- abhay simply shoot those words on her!!

Pia went all quiet n abhay left d room in huff!!

Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago
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first of all, me luvvsss juuu 🤗 thanks soo much for updating so early for me.. i was really waiting to read it 😳
and as your return gift...you will get till the end of time update as soon as possible.. okie? before beautiful stranger 😳
Coming to the update... as I said.. for the last line I want to smack his head... idiot 😆 without jealousy nothing works on Abhay ha 😆 i love how u portray the feeling and how abhya was distinguishing between hia frnd n wife... being more pocessive and protective towards her, she became his habit..seeing her everyday... i love reading it..👏👏
I love the saree...always said 😆 jealousy dance n ohh kiss on the cheek 😃 gari iske ag kab badegi? 😛 😆
Im eager for more 😉
I hope abhay takes her to delhi so tht she cant be with jeh and they can hav some time alone...Abhay bhi khush..piya bhi n hum bhi 😛
jaldi update karna ok? luvvv uuu 😳 🤗
Edited by princess_xeelan - 13 years ago
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di...m vry angry wd u...😈aapko mujh par daya nai aati????? do baar se mai khadi hu n m so tird bt no...u wont gv me a chnc to sit...so ds tme a sittng ovation to u...🤣 awsm wrk yet agn dear!!!!!!👏wndrful updt...⭐️d karwa chuth part ws so amazing...😳abhy s sad dt pia sleeps n couch???? to apne paas kyu nai sulata????😆d party part ws also amazng...abhiya dncd?????wow!!!!!😃d song ws dmn gud...n pia's dress ws fab...👏d way u dscribd d danc ws 2 gud...😛 n ye jeh pehli baar kch acha krta nazar aa ra h...😆abhay bng jeals s lyk wow...lvd d way u dscribd dr changng feelngs...😊last part ws fab...👏bechaara abhay...😭hes so heartbrokn...🥺hope pia cn bring hm around soon...😳wtng 4 ds jeh's party...kuch to dhamaaka hoga hai na??????😉d way pia fought bk ws a bt soothng 4 me odrwise i thoy hr to b d tyaagi queen...🤣cnt wait 4 abhiya romanc to stqrt!!!!!😍do cont asap...love u loadsss...🤗
Edited by purple_shadoz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow,jealousy game always works.jalao jalao aur jalao till he gives in.loved it.
Edited by TISA07 - 13 years ago

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