abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD

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sonali

@--sonali--

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#841

llloooveeeddd it-fully rocked!

seriously u r awesome writer!

u write so naturally!

just loved it!

want to read more!

will u plz start any new ff ...plz of abhiya...will love to read!plz heena didooo!

love u for this ff...hugzz!

lov ur all ff's!

thank u so much for ur precious time for abhiya ff---u r awesome!
keep it up...coz of it...we r in contact na!

loved abhiya's honymoon!

sari pkyek ki adhuri kahani sab ff walo ne hi puri ki hai...ha ha ha!

love u--keep ur work up ...!
god bless every1!thank u so much for lovly ff!

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zara

@meerubzara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#842

outstanding ss beautiful ending...

heena u r such a fabulous writer👏

i love it.plz do continued ur writing...

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Rumki

@rumki34

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#843

awesome update
their honeymoon part was beautiful
later abhiya were expecting...u have ended it in beautiful way

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Stuti

@piya_abhay_love

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#844

ending was awesome... sorry i read it late was out of station...

tanx for pm

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abhiya7fan

@abhiya7fan

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#845

awesome update heena...and a brilliant ending...

abhiya going to have a baby..so cute...

their honeymoon was super romantic...

awesome...lovely!!

🤗

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sweety_crazed

@sweety_crazed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#846

Heena di🤗🤗...this tym m totally speechless!!..

i really don't have words 2 say how much i luvd this ss...n u have given a perfect ending!!..

u r a great story teller!!..n u make me deeply into yr story!!...

this was class!!...a perfect ending!!..i luvd it by all means!!..d thing in u is that u give a perfect family ending!!..a perfect feel of a novel!!...its amazing!!...

u expressed their POV as usual fabulously ...

abhay has become so naughty...gosh he is such a besharam!!..

d honey moon was really super hot!!...d very amazing thing abt yr writing is i never felt those romantic part a bit rude or wild!!...u have always given a very decent n loving part!!...i adore u 4 this!!...

sry 4 being late!!...i really missed many ff's coz of my revisions!!..so it took me tym 2 catch up with all..!!..d last update was also marvelous!!...abhay was soo caring!!..d way he thinks...seriously only he can think...

d way haseena n chand accepted kabir n alina was also great!!...its that all d track was finalized with an proper end!!!

u have done justice with their feeling n emotions!!..these 2 can never get enough of other!!...

d soup making part n d cupboard part where d servant enters were all very well portrayed!!...

piya here has been a show stealer as i always say!!...u made us travel with her on this journey of her 4rm a friend 2 wife n 2 a mother now!!..its like u brought her eternal feelings b4 us!!...

abhay has been a gem !!..d way he accepted her!!..felt her love!!..realised his love!!...its really a journey!!...n u made d path so perfectly!!..luv u 4 this!!

u brought d whole scenes in front of my eyes!!...i have become a great fan 4 yr writings!!..it will be really great if u tried of writing another ss...luv u loads n take care!!..🤗

Edited by madhuri16 - 13 years ago

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#847

Very nice and sweet ss. Concept was superb and Abhiya romance was mindblowing.

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#848

Guys thank u so much for ur super amazing comments. Journey to my this ff was actually d best one i hd. When i started it, i never thought , i wl b getting such a good response, bt nw i cn say u made it reli worth writing for me🤗

luv u all..😊

Edited by heena_mehta - 13 years ago