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Posted: 13 years ago
mulakat
part 13

All young crowd decide to go to Mumbai for shopping. But first they all want to go to shirdi. They all make such fuss that elders have to agree. They called annie also. Dadi also agree for annie to go with them.

At last they inform geet about this. Geet is hell angry on them, as they didn't involve her in planning. But she has no choice other than going with them. She is happy that annie is coming. She called annie and talk to her regarding time and other things. She also assure dadi that annie will be comfortable with them. Every one forced geet to call maan and asked him to come with them, as it is only two day trip.

Geet is in middle while others make circle around her. She called maan. He pick up the call in one ring

Haan geet bolo

Everyone clear throat so eager to talk

Aap busy hai kya?

Kyun kya baat hai?

Aap se jaroori baat karni thi

To bolo

Ji hum sab cousins Mumbai ja rahe hai do din ke liye. Kuch shopping karni hai. Annie bhi hamare saath aanewaali hai. Dadima ne permission de di hai.

To mujhe inform kar n eke liye phone kiya hai kya

Nahi. Wo sab log chahte hai ki aap bhi chale. Aaj shyam ki flight hai. Kal shirdi jayenge. Wapas aake Mumbai mein shopping karenge.

Pura schedule decide ho gaya aur tum mujhe ab bata rahi ho

Nahi maan , mujhe bhi in logo ne aaj subah hi bataya

Sorry jijaji geet keep phone on speaker

achanak tay ho gaya. Aap bhi chaliye na

Everyone in corus plz jijaji

Maan understand everyone is around her. He don't want to say anything to geet in front of others

Main jaroor chalta par tum logo ne mujhe itna late bataya. Meri kal important meeting hai to mujhe Banglore jana hai. Waise bhi annie to aa rahi hai na

Par jijaji didi ko kaun company dega

Tum sab hona. Next time I will definitely come

OK this time we will give her company, next time you will have to come

Surely. Have happy journey.

Thank you jijaji bye

Bye

Geet want to talk to maan but not infront of everyone. She knows he is upset and bit angry on her. She wants to explain him all situation. For now she stuck in gang. Packing, tickets, traveling arrangements, hotel booking, etc she has to give final touch to them all. She didn't get time to massage him.

Geet thought to pick up annie from KM. by chance she can meet him before he will leave for flight. So she asked raji

We will pick up annie from KM

Kitni utawali ho rahi ho aap, apne sasooral jaane ke liye ki ye bhi bhool gayi air port hamare ghar se nazdik hai. Maine annie se baat kar li hai, wo dus min mein yanha aa jayegi.

This option of geet felled. So she called maan but he is not picking her call. Annie arrived and talk to geet. She is looking excited for it. Geet is just saying yes or no to annie while she is talking non stop.

Finally they get into car to go to airport. Geet texted maan

we are leaving. Aap ki flight kab ki hai? When you will return.

She hope at least he will reply to massage

I will return day after tomorrow. Have a safe journey and happy trip.

She thanked her stars, at least he gave reply. But she can see that he is still upset

Aap naraz ho

When he gets massage, he is boarding flight. So he replied

NO

With his just NO she is more restless. They reached airport. They all board flight. When they reach Mumbai, it is 8 pm. they cross checked the arrangements for tomorrow. They all eat dinner and go to room as they have to leave early in the morning.

Geet again call maan, but he is not picking up. Finally she gives up and tries to sleep. When she hears her mobile bip, she instantly take it. It is massage from maan

Main naraz nahi hoon. Jyada socho mat aur so jaokal jaldi nikalna haiGood night

Good night maan. She keeps her phone down.

Now she realizes how she gets attached to him. His just massage fills energy in her. How not talking to him is taking over her nerve. How his upset mood disturbs her. Maan becomes important part of her life within such a short time that even she failed to realize it. Thinking about him she sleeps.

Next morning

They all get ready and left for shirdi early in the morning. All while traveling, they played antakshari, damshe raaj. Geet is totally lost in maan's thought. She is missing him badly. She wanted to talk to him, see him. Her restlessness is increasing with each passing min. she is not able to concentrate on anything.

Finally they reached shirdi. They all get freshen up and left for mandir. Before entering raji asked geet to pick up garland for sai baba. Geet goes to shop. But she gets confuse with two.

Yeh loon ya ye waala

Wo right waala jyada accha hai

Mujhe bhi yahi lagta hai.

She feels voice which she is missing. She saidMaan

and she turned but her voice gets chocked in her throat when she sees maan standing behind her with smile on face. She is so happy, she wanted to hug him. But she controlled

maan aap yanha

Before maan can speak all young gang come forward from behind him and shout in corus with total excitement

SURPRISE


thanks for comments

hope you will like surprise

more to come 😉

previous----part 12

next ---- part 14

Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome loved it ...
Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry..i cant click the "like" button..
luvd deir surprise..maan too acted soo well!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

sorry..i cant click the "like" button..

luvd deir surprise..maan too acted soo well!



no problem
your comment give more than that
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both 12 and 13 parts awsome... just loved them
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hay!!! I just loved it!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome, loved it. continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

loved it ...

waiting 4 d entire surprise to unfold ..

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it 😊
wow nice surprise 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part...
what a pleasant surprise for geet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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