Maan and Geet Poetry Collection! - Page 10

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

"innocent heart"

very sweet poem. full of hopes n dreams that eventually got demolished. it reminds me of "laws of love" by Ashleydevlin . have u read it?

Originally posted by: Water.

Innocent Heart

(For Tellyme's FF - Her Complete Submission)

Innocent

Her Innocent heart

Only used to beat for him

Ever since she had known him

Ever since she had felt his presence

Ever since she had felt his pain

Ever since she had felt his restlessness

Her innocent heart

Only used to beat for him

He was the only one for her

His ego, his anger, his rejection

It was all hers and only hers

She accepted it all with an open heart

She accepted it all with her outstretched arms

She accepted it all because that is all she got from him

She accepted it all because it was all unknown to her

She accepted it all because her heart had given him all the rights

Just to him, because

Her innocent heart

Only used to beat for him

Days became months and months became years

She grew up into a beautiful woman

And he into a handsome man

She loved him day after day

He hated her night after night

One day destiny played a game and married them together

She knew that she loved him

Loved him with the last breath of her selfless soul

She knew that he hated her

Hated her with the last breath of his heartless soul

Yet, her innocent heart

Only used to beat for him

Every minute, every hour, every day

He kept on tormenting and torturing her

With his silence and with his cruel words

She died a little breath by breath

She died a little day by day

She died a little night after night

Her eyes became soulless and hollow

Her heart became as numb as a hard stone

Her tears got stuck in her throat

Her breath got suffocated in her soul

With immense pain pricking her mind, body and soul

She lost it, lost it all

Her love, her patience and her strength

She lost it, lost it all

Her selfless soul that only used to beat for him

Today, she is no longer innocent

Her innocent heart that only used to beat for him

Has drowned, drowned in the reality of his cruelness

In reality of his hatred and resentment

In reality of his anger and ego

Her innocent heart and her innocent soul

Are far away, far away from him.

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

To embrace what the future holds,

you have to first be able to let go of what

keeps holding you on to the past

hi,

Originally posted by: Water.

Hey,

I am so overwhelmed with ur comments.
Thank you so much.

It means a lot to me.

Happy Diwali to u too.🤗

I can try to see if luck comes ur way. I will try my best dear. 😳

Originally posted by: dhamigeet

hi,

love ur writing skills

great work

godbless

pls pm ur new posts

love tc

dhamigeet

Gorgeous work yaar.. i dunno why i missed this thread n for so long!

Our the most recent one is really janu. The khwahish of hum one. Really cute. I think I've always read ur work in English. It's amazing that u r equally equipped to deliver such finess in both the languages.