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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2 ...

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
lalitha.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
just read both updates
its awesome
cont soon
thanks 4 pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rujul13 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi Madhu

nice update...waiting for Maaneet moments...

by the way any chance getting update for Mystic Mishti and Gift of love please?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved geet nd her dad
sweet bond
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part...
And now I am getting a feeling that he is going to be accepted by all the girls of MIT...I guess he fights for GIRLS!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lol one of the funniest scenes of the movie. It was so small but when they were talking about extracurriculars...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome!!

I already love the relation between Geet and her dad,...very cute!!

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Posted: 13 years ago

Sooo sorry for late updates 😭 I was not well last weekend.But i am back now and thankfully today is a holiday for GuruNanak jayanti! 😃


Happy GuruNanak Jayanti to all...




PART 3


KHURANA MANSION:

Dadi: Maan in MIT?
CK: Ha mom. I don't have an option.
Dadi:but why? U know he is already so rude.Have u even thot how he would react to this?
CK: I know mom.par ap hi sochiye agar aise chalta rha to me kitne colleges change karti rahungi?
Dadi:and wat if he left MIT?
CK: How could he? Itni sari ladkiyo ke sath he. Wat will he do?whom will he fight with?
Dadi:hmm.u have a point.
CK:Ha par Maan ko kaise manayenge?
Dadi:leave that to me beta. U just relax

MIT College basket ball court:


Geet dribbling the ball,
Geet: so thats been decided
Pinky:huff... Kya?
Geet: yehi ki wo banda humare college me padne a rha he!
Mira:hmm himat to dekho uski. I mean how would any guy dare to enter the witches' land!
Geet: His danger bells are on high alert,nhe to uske dimag me aisa khayal kaise ayega?
Mira: waise Nivedita ma'm ke is chele ko kisine dekha he pehle?
Geet: ab dekne ko kya rakha he? Hoga koi wo.. 'bo** darlin' type! U know...(in animated way) "babe mera liner kharab ho gaya kya" "lip-stick dark to nhe he na" "naughty boy,u r such a liar "
Mira hi-five with Geet.
Mira: bilkul warna kaun banda yeha akey suli chadega?
Geet: Obivously he cant be straight
Pinky:ha. Normal to yeha kuch nhe ho rha.Waise wo Tasha keh rhe thi ki wo ladka Monday tak join karega.
Geet:wow matlab we have 2 days. Great we will plan a 'warm welcome' for our 'dear' 'darling'
Trio (hi-fiving): yeee!!
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Yash's boutique:




Yash: ladies and gentlemen..let me present before U the one in a 3500!!
Maan stood there angrily with his hands crossed over his chest.

Yash: Maan,mere yaar uparwala jab tumhe yu chapar phaadkar de rha he to yu badi ankhe dikha ke usey mana nhe karte!
Adi: he he he.. He he he..
Maan shot an angry glare at them.




Yash:dekha..isiko mana kar rha hu. Arey samjha kar yaar!
Maan: I have my own goals in life and i cant waste my time in such a rubbish!
Yash: to tumhe office join karne ko mana kaun kar rha he? Bas ek aur saal hi to he.Enjoy it Maan,aur wo bhi 3500 ladkiyo ke beech sirf tum! How lucky,huh!
Maan: enough! Its bullshit. I mean isn't there any other college?
Adi:college to he Maan sir, but wo bhi to apke conduct certificate dekhenge!
Yash: ha ussey to DTC bus me bhi seat nhe milegi,college seat to dur ki baat he
Adi:he he he...
Maan's anger was now at its peak.
Yash: umm..Maan,one more peg?
Maan: shut up U...me ache tarah se janta hu ki tum logo dadima se mujhe manane ka quotation leke aye ho! Idiots!
Adi:nhe sir,me to wo Rohtak project ke discusn
Maan: Wo plan to kal hi humne finalise kar li thi?
Adi:j..j..ji sir!
Yash(whispering) : be careful when u lie,thats Maan Singh Khurana!
Maan: aur Yash tum! Tumne apne fashion designing ke liye ghar tak chod diya aur ab mujhe advice kar rhe ho,great!
Yash: thats my passion and this is yours!
Maan:xactly and i dont want to do a course for namesake.I want to do something real. I can see KC as the top construction company within 10months and here i am wasting my time in some girls institute! Arghh!
Yash: easy Maan,have one more drink!
Maan took the whole bottle and had a bottom sip as Yash stood their jawdropped.
Yash: so wats ur decision?
Maan: wo me dadima ko bata dunga aur waise bhi agar normal college se restricate hone me 1month lag jata he to phir ye to after all ek women's clg he.Mark my words,i will be out of this within 1week!


KM:
A tipsy Maan was goin to his room.
Dadi: Maan,u r drunk?
Maan:ha dadi,kyuki aj ka sponsor mere kuch khaas log the!
Dadima gulped.
Maan: waise idea kiska he mom? Ya apka?
Chitra:kisi ka bhi ho Maan,its for your own good!
Maan: 'my own good' ? Thats interesting.
Chitra: do u feel that i don't know wats good for u?
Maan:mom aisi baat nhe he and plz i don't want an arguement now!
Chitra: and wat xactly do u want?
Maan:lets just don't get into that. Apko kya chahiye? That i have to go to that college? Fine! I am ready! Mujhe sudharne ka ye ek mauka me apko deta hu.Lekin ek sharth par
Chitra: kya?
Maan:agar yeha se mujhe bahar nikal diya to ap mujhe kahi aur join karne ke liye nhe bologe
Chitra: ok
Maan:Fine! Then i vl join from tomorrow!

After Maan left,
Dadi:wat if he gets restricated from there also?
Chitra: no he wont. Pata nhe kyu par mera dil keh rha he ki sab kuch acha hoga..
Dadi:aur waise bhi in ladkiyo ke beech Maan aisa kar bhi kya sakte he?
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Next morning,

Maan got up early and started doing some vigorous tai-chi moves.It was his first day in a college and that too a complete women's college! He hated girls,not all but those chipku ones who stoop so low to get his attention!



He would have nothing to look forward. No fights,no enemies! He ran his hand back through his hair.
Maan(self-thot): ye mom aur dadima ne milke mujhe kaha phasa diya! Here goes the most eligible bachelor of Delhi to a 'women's college' ufff...Cmon Maan just a few days and u vl be free!

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MIT hostel:
Geet:to aj aneywale he humare sher! Us nikamme ka hum aise swagat karenge ki wo zindagi bhar yaad rakhega.Ek hafte ke andar hum us dostane ka ye haal karenge ki dobara ladkiyo ka naam tak apne zubaan par nhe lega.Ready girls?
Gang: yesss!!
Mira: Geet,this bag contains all those things u hav askd for.
Geet:great! Pinky,sabko distribute kar.isi se hum uska swagat karenge.
Pinky:ok

She distributed a wide range of lady's cosmetic to all the girls,including blush,musqara,lip gloss,compact powder.
Pinky: Geet,mene to socha tum sade hue ande,tomatos distribute karogi par ye cosmetics?
Geet: Pinky, ye baat to paka he na ki wo hoga koi behenji types.
Pinky:ha
Geet:to bas hum usey ye sab gift karenge.Wo besharam ye le hi lega.aur phir,pure college ke samne ab bhi hum hi star rahenge
Mira:humesha ki tarah!
Geet:xactly...
Pinky:wow! I cant wait for that moment!
Geet: bas aney do apne anti-hero oops heroine ko!
The trio hi-fived each other giggling.

On the other hand, Maan set off in his bike VROOOM...

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PRECAP: GEET WELCOMES MAAN! 😉

Hope U like this.

I feel miserable for delaying my updates but there is no convenient time when i can use my system 😒

Hope U are all enjoying this.I don't know if u are getting the continuity 😕


Next update probably on Saturday 😊


Edited by madhubala123 - 13 years ago

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