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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
me waiting jaldi se update karo di...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Congrats on new thread!!!
awesome update
Please make Geet rember everything soon
Can't see Maan in pain
Luv
TC
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Hi Muskan,
I'm a regular reader of ur ff's. Ur stories are really breathtaking. Plz add me to ur pm's list.
Dreams is really nice. I feel bad for Maan & the Baby.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
please resolve everything in the story... may Brij try to be nice to Maan... i know everybody is RIGHT at their own place... but just don't understand how will everything be resolved...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Wow ur updating.. Cant wait..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Dreams
part 73

Geet couldn't stop talking abt garv & his acts. How he got attached to her.
Geet told her plans of doing this sem from home so that she could take care of the little one.
Brij didn't say anything. He already hated himself for depriving the baby from her love. But that was the only safest option then for. He didn't know whom to chose. ..he couldn't have forgiven himself.. to have left the premature baby alone with Maan.

Next day Maan didn't know if brij would let her come. But knowing brij, he wouldn't stop her either. Now it was his duty to keep her safe from the past.

Geet did come at her usual time. She saw the baby was a sleep.
She went & made coffee for him.
He looked at her & the coffee mug in her hand. He clinched his fist & turned his back to her.
U come here for baby
so take care of him
don't interfere in my stuffs.

She placed the mug with a thud on the kitchen slab.
She twisted her lips & left from there
he took the coffee mug & kissed it..whispering sorry. ..
I have to push u away. Its for ur own good
she peeped back..a min latter only to see him sip the coffee..she smiled... aakdu & waited to see the smile that touched his lips after the first sip.


before Maan could notice she went to baby's room. She waited for baby to wake up. Baby & mama had their day while daddy preferred to stay out.
Before leaving Geet came infront of him
he angrily looked away
Geet ' humri baat kal adhuri rah gayen thi
kuch bathen
kuch rishthen adhoren hi teehk hain
lekin
he coldly looked into her eyes ' I don't want u think of me the way u think. I don't like all this.
The darkness that concealed his feelings pricked her heart... she held back the tears that threatened fall
I know u love only baby's mama.. she said sadly
her sadness only hurt him further
He reached out grabbed her arms hauling her close so his muzzle that inches from hers
yes I love her only her. Samjhi tum...
she was silent, glaring at him defiantly. He shook her roughly
samjhi
dur raho mujhe se
he said pushing her away.

She looked back at him before leaving, hoping that he would stop her there, but he fixed an expectant gaze on her baring his teeth in unspoken threat.
She dropped her shoulders & left from there.

The moment she stepped out.. Maan hurt him self to have hurt her.. to have been so rude. How could he?? he screamed in pain & misery.


Geet was smiling & grinning madly at his rudeness. Though she hated his anger, but the pain she felt with his grip.. she rejoiced, it felt sweet. She looked at her arm in the mirror ..traced her fingers on the red mark.. he never had expressed any kind of closeness with her.. except that weak moment probably he was dreaming. But now he as not, he was in his senses.. he still held her
she chuckled
held her arm in anger.. he was not refusing her but he was fighting himself.

I can feel your pain, I can feel your yearning,
And thats what puzzles me, worries me, scares me;
I look into your eyes, I want to find answers,
I want a window to your soul,
But, what I see seems hard to read...
Its something I know, yet don't know,
Its something I want to hear, yet you don't say;
Its something my heart screams, yet mind denies,
YOU LOVE ME...more than your life...
BY
SWATI

Next day

she was not at all angry with him, but still gave a stern look as she walked in. his heart ached to see her like that. He wanted to say sorry.. but that will only bring them close & increase her feeling for him. Let her be angry .. he ignored her & so did she...though..she watched him all the while & he silently admired her.


Their silent war only lasted for couple of days. After which Geet angrily held his collar & threatened him.
U can't stop me from loving u
he closed his eyes at his plight
if u can..she paused stop ur self. Her tone was warning & challenging at the same time.
He couldn't stop himself thinking of the past.. yes he couldn't then & how could he now


he hated her then for coming into his life..but still couldn't stop himself for falling for her the lady of principal she was.. she is. After all that he did to her..she didn't let his pride down.. she took care of Daadi..who looked low at her. His heart cried..low at a princess. How she fought alone the battle of winning his heart when she herself didn't want to. He couldn't then..How will he stop himself now.

Couple of days had passed & nothing had much changed between them
Rano finally made an initiative to meet Maan.
Rano '
yeh sab kab thak chalega?
Tum ussen kuch kathen kyun nahi?
Maan kept quiet
rano '
have u thought wat will happen when people start noticing all this
she can't just be coming here for ever to take care of the baby
log kya kahen ge tumhare rishthen ke baren main
Geets foot froze at the door step as she heard the last line as she entered the room.

PREV PART 72 NEXT PART 74

Plz look out for the updates on the maanetFF thread
PLEASE

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love
muskan
ps...dream will end in 4-5parts
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
😲😲😲I CANT BELIVE I M FIRST...😲😲😲...AM I DREAMING
oops! i know i m first by chance i thought u ll take sm tm bt my lk is my side today😈,,,,,,,,hheehehee
great update...lvd that geet didt mind his rudness...oh god she is trualy a angel...😍
pooor maan...i feel so sad 4 him...his 1 sin nd he has nothing left in his life...😭
rano is talking to maan...hm she is r8 too wat ll people think...looking 4wrd to the next ppart...😍.lvd it
con asap
Edited by _mahi.ve_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98

😍🤗hi mai mar gayi.. muski updating at this odd hour of her...

hi ab hamara kya hoga... intzar kaise karege...
jaldi karo darling. we r waiting ...
life mai hai life mai pehle baar mai second at muski's update let me enjoy dearies...🥳☺️
Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
ooppss...maan ignoring her...while still she wud admire him n not b angry at him...
n maan hurt himself for hurting her...he is trying ot keep himself away from her...for her own good...
oh god...she heard the talk btn maan n rano...!!
cont soon di..!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Kya Baat hai very nice update

not much to say only waiting Maan to react



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