my new OS-Haafiz(final UD wid Epil) pg-6 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Cuty16

Hey jo,
this one was one of the most sweetest Os i had read here,
just loved each n every line.
mostly dat office scene from where arpi cum and den the way avi expresses his feelings.

@jes,
the epilogue was realy nice dear.Thanx dear !!🤗🤗

and loved it when avi makes her remember about dat night when she had said " to finish it off".
I loved dat line also...😳😳

On the whole u both made the end mind blowing and mind blasting. All credits to Neha..😳

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Picture perfect ending😍...

The verses in your update was beautiful Jo...

But I have a few doubts, what is zarra, aftaab, hafiz?😳

Jes- you picturised the window scene very well👏

I like Avi's last dialogue🤣

Originally posted by: prash_t

Jo and Jess..

This is for you both...



Jo...for writing this OS...It was extremely beautiful, awesome, wonderful and touching...😳


Nd Jess... for writing SR...(I want completed version of it) you left it half... I wont imagine😛 PM completed SR😆

Outstanding OS👏 I just loooved it to the core yaar...❤️


U, Jess (as well), CIC, Nidha, also Mukta Di, Sunaha Ramona(Sry if I missed someone)...u guys are romance queens...!!!..


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Hey Mrs, Thakur thanx for liking it hehe
wow so encouraging yaar
Oye m not romantic yaar its you who is romance queen have you forgotten ur first OS
kya likha tha😳

Originally posted by: yoga23priya

TJ 🤗Priyaaa🤗

ME FIRST ME FIRST 🥳 🥳

love you for dedicating this part to me 😳

after vista di n dreamy di you're my fav writer in GKD IF 😳
Hayyy Ram😲 no ways yaar how can you put my name with Vista di n Dreamy di,no yaar i have to learn alot to be someone's fav😳

hope my future Updates will be lovely like yours 😳

No words for writing i just loved it 😉
hey you know naa u are one of ma favs and
your Updates are greater then mine so i shuld hope to compare myself someday with you guys😉

Prashu ke Pappu Prasad got slap from Arpi 👏

loved this part very much n Avita's part of confessions were super duper fantastic 😳😳
Love yaa for such sweet appreciation😳😳

love you 🤗

* Epilogue *

My Jaanu Saku-Chan 🤗

wowieee i am proud of you n my family 😳

i always thought you are awesome writer after reading our story in Gangster of week thread 😉

Our devil family has unique talent in everything 😉

I Know that my saku is so innocent that she dnt know abt SR but it was lovely 😊

LOVE YOU 🤗