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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

I m too lost to comment. . .dnt dstrb me in my lala land. . .hayee. .kya likh dala yar?kmal kr diya. . .ji thoda tym lgega khyalo se bhr ane me. .phr prprly btayege. . .hey ya! Just do a favour. .meri wud be SR ap log hi plan krna. . .heheh. .wow neha! Hats off sweety! Jadu tona kr diya mhare pe. .:-D

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

N abt. .whi finish it al. .haha. .luvd it. .yar,thoda or dscribe krna tha,avi ki bt ate hi innocence tel lene chli jati he. . .heheh. .luv u avdhshji. .:-D

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: joliefille

<font color="#660000">Hey Pallavvi thanx for liking this one that much dear😳

you read Desire n now U R Mine haan😉

thanx for that too will do it asap😳</font>

are yar,u dnt need to do tht. .u write rely wl yar. . .i lykd dis the mst bcs its so simple stry yet so diffrnt. .avita ke nye nye rup yar,mza aa jata he pdh ke,missin thm lyk hl. .apke ff hi to he jo unko znda rkhte he. .keep it up dr. .waitn fr ur nxt magic os. .thnku. .:)

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Are bhai, IF pr nye he to kya hua. .gkd forum ke silent readr rhi he bndi,ap logo ki bate. . .PRASHU,SUHANA,PRIYA,RAMONA,MONI,CHATTER DI,LAXMI N U. .sbko janti hu me. .bs kbi tym nhi mila join krne ka,vrna kbka aa gyi hoti pkane. . .haha. .:-D

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Eowyn
Picture perfect ending😍...
The verses in your update was beautiful Jo...
But I have a few doubts, what is zarra, aftaab, hafiz?😳
Jes- you picturised the window scene very well👏
I like Avi's last dialogue🤣

thanx for liking dear😳

and about your doubts
zarra mean tiny travel thing without any importance and
Aftaab mean Sun,
Haafiz mean Savior , protector 😳
and yap jes's epilogue is picture perfect 😉
and the last dialogue of Avi was totally Her thought 😆

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joliefille

@joliefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Pallavvi
I m too lost to comment. . .dnt dstrb me in my lala land. . .hayee. .kya likh dala yar?kmal kr diya. . .ji thoda tym lgega khyalo se bhr ane me. .phr prprly btayege. . .hey ya! Just do a favour. .meri wud be SR ap log hi plan krna. . .heheh. .wow neha! Hats off sweety! Jadu tona kr diya mhare pe. .:-D

hahaha Pallvvi dear come out of your lala land 😆
kya yaar itna praise mat kar hehe and about SR we have specialist for it
for ur would be you can contect our romance queen Parashu , or Ramona my CP Priyaa n theirs a long list for romantic SR specialists hehe😆

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joliefille

@joliefille

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Pallavvi
Are bhai, IF pr nye he to kya hua. .gkd forum ke silent readr rhi he bndi,ap logo ki bate. . .PRASHU,SUHANA,PRIYA,RAMONA,MONI,CHATTER DI,LAXMI N U. .sbko janti hu me. .bs kbi tym nhi mila join krne ka,vrna kbka aa gyi hoti pkane. . .haha. .:-D

nice to know dear that you know all of us,
yaar really missing those golden Avita days 😳

ab to Lax di, Sow di log OL bhi nahi hoti all di s are busy now😕

nice to know that you guys are joining GKD forum even after the end of show

well m not regular writer but di log ko dekh ke seekh rahi huun n Avita ko imagine karte hi jo bhi mind me aata hai pen down karne ki koshish karti hun thanx for liking it

about Innocence whole forum knows that we are innocent dear😳😳😉

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Cuty16

@Cuty16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Hey jo,
this one was one of the most sweetest Os i had read here,
just loved each n every line.
mostly dat office scene from where arpi cum and den the way avi expresses his feelings.

@jes,
the epilogue was realy nice dear.and loved it when avi makes her remember about dat night when she had said " to finish it off".
On the whole u both made the end mind blowing and mind blasting.

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PrashT

@PrashT

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Jo and Jess..

This is for you both...

Jo...for writing this OS...It was extremely beautiful, awesome, wonderful and touching...😳

Nd Jess... for writing SR...(I want completed version of it) you left it half... I wont imagine😛 PM completed SR😛😛😛😆😆😆😆😆😆

Outstanding OS👏👏👏👏👏👏 I just loooved it to the core yaar...❤️

U, Jess (as well), CIC, Nidha, also Mukta Di, Sunaha Ramona(Sry if I missed someone)...u guys are romance queens...!!!..

Edited by prash_t - 14 years ago

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Jessie

@jes_jade

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Neha Darling !!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗

Must say awesome Epilogue !!👏👏👏👏

I loved it when Pappu got a slap !!!👏👏😆😆😆

Arpi worshiping Avi like God was really touching...😳😳😳

& I loved how he proposed her...😍😍😍😍

Don't praise me...mine is nothing when compared with urs...i just randomly in sleep wrote dat...

You Rock !!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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