my new OS-Haafiz(final UD wid Epil) pg-6 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

Can't u cntinue yar. . .its yet nt cmplete,dono ko milva to do. .plz neha,i lyk it vry much,plz cntinue. .abt thr second meetn,arpi luvd hm or nt. . .its a humbl req. . .plz cntinue if u can. . .i wnt to read mr,kuch adhuri si lg rhi he ye stry. .

Originally posted by: lololuck33

😊Hello der m new 2ds forum😊 ur os z js fabulos plz continue it waitn 4t

Originally posted by: jes_jade

Neha ji !!!!!!!🤗🤗Jess jiii🤗 hehehe

This was one was really beautiful...& the song dat u selected is also superb!!👏👏thankyou ji😳

But I am very very angry with you...Dat was really an odd ending...I wanted to kill u for finishing a beautiful OS with incomplete end..😡😡 🤣🤣hehehe you and your hubby both are just made for each other she already threatens me for next part and give it some other ending hehe😆😆
😆Don't feel bad abt dat...It is just dat I think abt happy & complete ending...😆😆 oye why should i feel bad yaar😉
This is good too...Actually on second reading...I felt dat the ending gives us the meaning abt the whole concept of OS & its title- Haafiz .. When I understood dat...I want to hug u !!!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
🤗AA gale lag jaa 😆😆😆🤣 thanku yaar actually that's the main content yaar how two strangers met for few hours n one saves other from her whole instructing world n without any expectation save her from it that's why Haafiz😳


Awesome OS !!!!!👏👏

I simply loved it !!!😳😳 thanks yaar for your appreciation ☺️

If u wish...u can give an epilogue or something like dat to show how they ended up together...coz I knw U r gonna get requests for completing it !!😉😆😆
yap yaar u are right i got it and i almoset done it
for your hubby😉 , you and rest of forum members who feels its incomplete😉
and of course yaar m waiting for your Epilogue as i want to Update it fast so you should start work on it 😆😆😳

Originally posted by: Eowyn

Wow Jo!

This is totally brilliant concept...

Hats off darling👏

Waiting to know more