We Are Family FF- Chapter 7 pg.14 11/13!!

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Hey guys!!
So im starting a new FF or SS. This is my first time attempting like this so please be patient with me😳. I'll make it longer or cut it short based on the response i get. Here's the introduction and charcter sketch and if enough people want me to, i will also post the first chapter today 😊

This story is set in the US in the wonderful state of Massachustetts. Manav and archana are happily married with 2 children, ishika and Soham. Manav has a younger brother named Sachin who lives in New York with his wife Preethi (never liked the name shravani but the character is the same person who plays shravanai) and they're daughter sanjana. Manav runs a successful construction company and is very financially stable. Sachin also has his own buisness and isdoing very well. Manav also has a younger sister names rajini( same character as vandu in the show but really didnt like the name so i changed it).She just recenatly got married to Ajith, a very positive and caring guy who runs a buisness in Conneticut. Savita and Damodar (manav and Sachin's Parents) are positive in this story. They are both very kind and caring people and treat all of their children equally. His parents live for 4 months with Sachin and his family, the next 4 months with manav and his family and then the last 4 months with Rajini and her family. They try to balance their time with all of their children. They absolutely adore their 2 daughter- in- laws who they treat as daughters and their son in law who they treat as their own son.

Charcter List

Manav: Main Male lead
Archana: Main Female Lead. manav's wife
Ishika: Archana and Manav's six year old daughter
Soham: Archana and Manav's eight year old son

Sachin: Manav's younger brother
Preeti: Sachins wife
Sanjana: Sachin and Preethi's 4 year old daughter

Rajini: Manav and Sachins younger sister
Ajith: Rajins husband

Savita: Mother of Manav, Sachin and Rajini
Damodar: Father of Manav, Sachin and Rajini

other characters will be introduced as story develops

Index:
Chapter 1- pg.1
Chapter 2- pg.4
Chapter 3- pg.7
Chapter 4- pg.9
Chapter 5- pg.11
Chapter 6- pg.12
Chapter 7-pg.14
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yes, please develop the story further... I would definitely like to read it. :-)
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hey Anu.. carry on wit the story yar.. wud love to read it😃
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Chapter 1:

An alram clock rings.

A slender hand reached out to turn the alarm clock off

A women gets up and we see it is the beautiful and gorgeous archana. She looks around her and sees her clothes and her husband's clothes thrown all over the place. She smiles to herself as she remembers what happened last night

she looks to her right and sees her sexy and handsome husband shirtless sleeping peacefully. . His muscular chest moving up and down as he breathes. she gives him a quick kiss on the cheek wraps her blanket around herself and heads to the bathroom. See finishes up and comes out to wake up her husband. She sits next to him on the bed and strokes his hair.

Archana: Manav (she says softly with love)

Manav moves slightly

She suddenly feels very naughty and moves towards his inviting lips to try to wake him up that way but before her lips could reach their destination.

Ishika: (*KNOCK KNOCK KNOCK*) MAMAAA!!!!! BHAIYA HIT ME!!!!!

SOHAM: I DID NOT!!!! SHE'S THE ONE WHO WON'T GIVE ME THE TV REMOTE EVEN THOUGH ITS MY TURN TO WATCH TV!!!

Manav wakes up startled by the noise while archana groans as her private moment with her husband was ruined thanks to her two lovely children.

Manav: "wazzz goin' on?" he said still half asleep.

Archana: What do you think??

Ishika: ITS MY TURN TO WATCH MY CARTOONS!!!

Soham: NO!ITS MY TURN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ishika: DAADDDYYY!!!! she screamed banging on the door.

Manav realizes what's going on and groans.

Manav: Archana please solve it.

Archana: Nope it's your turn, I solved last night's argument.

Before Manv could reply back she ran into the bathroom to have her shower.

Manav sighed and got out of bed, put his clothes on and opened the door before his daughter knocked the door over with her banging.

He saw Ishika struggling to keep the remote away from her brother

Manav grabbed the remote leaving them startled

Manav: What's going on?!!

Ishika: Bhaiya hit me!

Soham: I did not. I just lightly tapped you. Anyways it's my turn to watch tv and you weren't giving me the remote!!

Ishika: You always get to watch your shows. Today it's my turn!!

Soham: "Oh really", he says sarcastically, "what about you watching Cinderella last night! I missed the red socks game because you wanted to watch some stupid Disney princess movie!!!" (the Red Socks are a baseball team for those of you who don't know)

Manav: Soham, don't say stupid!! soham softly mutters sorry still angry at his little sis.

Manav: Ishi beta I think it's your bhaiyas turn to watch TV.

Ishika: BUT DADDY!!!

Manav: No buts ishika. Let soham watch now and later you can watch okay. Your mama was saying that she had to take soham out to do some clothes shopping later you'll have the tv all to yourself then right? so you watch a much as you want then okay

I shika: "Fine," she says a little grumpily. Inside Isika is jumping for joy because she knows how much her bhaiya hates shopping!

Manav: Good girl! he gives the remote to soham who happily walks away but then suddenly stops-

Soham: WAIT, WHAT???!!! I DON'T WANT TO GO SHOPPING!!! EWWW!! DAD DO SOMETHING!!!

Manav: "Sorry buddy," he said chuckling. Your mom is pretty firm on going shopping with you today, and you know that no one can change her mind.

Soham groans and goes downstairs.

Manav looks at ishika who is still standing there smiling to herself

Manav: And what are you smiling about? he asked playfully.

Ishika: If mama and bhaiya are going shopping that means it will only be us so I'm just planning what we're going to do.

Manav: Oh really?! he said with a chuckle, and what are your plans

Ishika signaled him to come down to her level indicating that she was going to whisper something in his ear. Manav smiled and bent down offering his ear to her.

Ishika: first we will go out and eat ice cream, then we will go and buy lots of candy and hide it at home so mama can't find it, then we will finger paint and be as messy as possible, then we will go and play in the sprinkler and then we will watch Snow White, do you like my plan??

Manav Laughed as he listed to his daughter list activities that he knew she was not allowed to do around her mom.

Archana also happened to come out of the bathroom after her shower at this time to see manav and ishika talking secretly.

Archana: What are you two talking about? she asked suspiciously.

Manav and Ishika: NOTHING! they both said together trying to look as innocent as possible.

Archana decided to ignore it for now as she knew she would eventually find out if her husband and daughter were planning to do something they knew they were not supposed to do.

Archana: Ishi beta I'm taking your brother shopping today, would you like to come?

Ishika: No thanks mama, she says sweetly and then slyly looks at her daddy who winked back at her secretly.

Archana: Okay then, where is Soham??

Manav: I think he went downstairs to watch TV. Or he may be thinking up of ways to get out of coming shopping with you, he laughed.

Archana: No way is getting out of coming shopping today. He's been growing so much latley that all of his clothes are too small now. There's a sale at Macy's today on childrens clothing and I'm not going to miss it. (Macys is a clothing store in the US incase people didn't know)

Manav: "Well I wish you luck in getting him ready," he said in a teasing manner.

Archana: Oh don't worry, my son always listens to me.

Ishika: HEY! what about me??!! ishika pouted

Archana couldn't help but smile at how adorable her daughter looked when she pouted.

Archana picked her up

Archana: OF course! my sweetie pie is the bestest daughter in the world. She gave ishika a big kiss on her cheek

Ishika kisses her mama's cheek

Archana: Have you brushed your teeth yet.

Ishika: No.

Archana: Then you daddy quickly go and brush and shower cause mama's making chocolate chip pancakes and if you don't come and quickly then your bhaiya and I will eat all of them. she puts her down back on the floor

Ishika: Oh no! she puts her hand on her head

Ishika: Daddy come quickly! We need to brush and then take a shower before bhaiya eats all the pancakes and you know how much I love chocolate chip pancakes. she grabs manav's hand and drags him towards the bathroom.

Manav: I'm coming sweetheart. You go and get started and I'll be there okay?

ishika runs off to the bathroom

Manav turns towards archana who is in front of the dressing table brushing her hair and was looking very sexy

he walks towards her and slides his hands around her waist and starts kissing her neck

Archana turns around facing him and placed her hands around his neck. She could now get that kiss that had been pending since this morning.

They slowly and gently started kissing each other but before they could make the kiss deeper and more passionate-

Ishika(from the bathroom): DAAADDYYY!!! HURRY UP!! BHAIYA AND MAMA WILL EAT ALL OF THE PANCAKES!!!

Archana and Manav broke apart looked at each other and sighed.

Precap: Breakfast at the Deshmukh's

So here's the first chapter guys!!! please let me know what you think and offer any feedback!!! this is the first time im doing something like this so i hope you all like it!!! 😳

Let me know if you would like to be on the PM list šŸ˜›

And please let me know if anyone has any idea for a title cause i can think of one šŸ˜†

Edited by anushyap - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anu very well written, great jobšŸ‘šŸ¼
I could visualize everything, u hv written it so well.

Aww soham,ishika scenes wit arman are really nice. I always wished arman hv a baby girl, and i actually visualized the small girl who was in Umeed the Zee new logo launch wit sushant. The small girl was so cute..
ishika-soham part is very wel writtenšŸ˜†tats hw bro-sis fight😳

I really liked ur first part.. 😃 looking forward for the next one😃

EDIT: Do add me in ur pm list
Edited by Ankifan - 13 years ago
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Oh its really sweet...love the kids interaction with ArMan. Dying to see all this on PR but alas. Just want to say a big THANKYOU and yes do add me on ur PM list.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ankifan

Anu very well written, great jobšŸ‘šŸ¼

I could visualize everything, u hv written it so well.

Aww soham,ishika scenes wit arman are really nice. I always wished arman hv a baby girl, and i actually visualized the small girl who was in Umeed the Zee new logo launch wit sushant. The small girl was so cute..
ishika-soham part is very wel writtenšŸ˜†tats hw bro-sis fight😳

I really liked ur first part.. 😃 looking forward for the next one😃

EDIT: Do add me in ur pm list

thank you so much for appreciating my work di 😳 šŸ¤—and guess what...i was also imaging that little girl drom new logo launch when i picturized ishika!!! she looked so cute in that adorable pink dress😊 i was thinking back to my own chilhood when i taught about the bro sis fight šŸ˜† i will definatley add you to the pm list 😊 oh and please if you ahve any suggestions for a title let me know!!! i am stumped in that department šŸ˜†
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Originally posted by: bonnefille

Oh its really sweet...love the kids interaction with ArMan. Dying to see all this on PR but alas. Just want to say a big THANKYOU and yes do add me on ur PM list.


thank u so much for liking the part. this is my first time doing something like this so i was really nervous😳 it would be lovely to see all of this on PR but the cvs dont seem to care about our opinions as viewers🤢 and i will definetley add yout to the pm list 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Anu,
Great job!!! Loved it. Loved both Arman's intimate moments, as well as the kids interactions. All very realistic. Wish we got similar scenes in the real PR. Sadly, I don't believe we will ever get anything close to this.
Please add me to the pm list also.
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Originally posted by: suan

Hi Anu,

Great job!!! Loved it. Loved both Arman's intimate moments, as well as the kids interactions. All very realistic. Wish we got similar scenes in the real PR. Sadly, I don't believe we will ever get anything close to this.
Please add me to the pm list also.


Thank you so much for appreciating my work di 😳. Maybe the cv's will read our posts and understand how badly we want to see a sweet arman family scene. just ope they will do that before its too late... and i'll add you to my pm list 😊

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