September 6, 2011 SSBN Written Update

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Tuesday, 6th September, 2011

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Dumbo Face and Dumb Brains.

Rohini the Smart-Rat, is getting the attention of Naina. She gives her the pills, and Rohini swallows them with a glass of water. Rohini starts the plan hatched by the two rats, and tells Naina, that she wants to eat something tasty, and suggests that they both go to the kitchen and make something for themselves, as the elders are away, and the Kaka too is not at home.

Naina, is given a special mask, of a Dumbo Face. I can not understand, why they change the natures of these characters so often, and for no rhyme or reason. Could it be that one serial influences the other, especially in the same Channel. Could these writers be the same in the other serials too. Two other serials precede Sapno se Bhare Naina, and in both these there is a Dumbo Face character. In Tere Mere Sapne, it is Radha. In Hamari Devrani, it is Vrinda. And now, Sapno se Bhare Naina too has apparently joined the bandwagon. Up to the Lonavla scene, of Abhi's engagement, and the return of Daksh and Naina, the scenes were realistic, but ever since, it looks that the workmanship is sliding, and if this trend goes on, the sliding approval ratings of the Chaska Meter will go down further, until it will become unbearable to watch this serial. Perhaps, the CVs take the hint, and give better results.


The Smart-Rat Rohini, walks down to the kitchen with Naina, and she starts rolling out the puris, and cooks the vegetable, and gives to Rohini to taste, who finds that the salt is less, and in the meantime, the smart-brain works over time, and she spills drop by drop oil from the container, and she speaks loudly, so that the other Smart -Rat can hear. She is with Akruti, trying to explain to her the intricacies of the case, and tells Akruti that she will take care of the case, and she need not worry. As Sonakshi, can hear on her mobile, what is going on downstairs, she gives her partner the hint, that she will now follow up the play. She tells Akruti that she will go down and bring some juice, but as she gets up, she pretends that she has pain in her leg, and Akruti wants to go down and bring it for her, and then both go towards the kitchen.

In the kitchen, Rohini has spread sufficient oil, and she wants Naina to slip and fall. But Sonakshi and Akruti reach the kitchen, and as Naina is getting ready to go and get the juice, Akruti tells her that she will do the needful, and goes to the refrigerator, and slips on the floor. Sonakshi is ready to catch her from falling, and gets the credit for saving Akruti. The Smart-Rat Rohini starts spilling her beans, and blames Naina, who splendidly, gives us a grand show of her Dumbo Face, and she has no words or explanation, but a painful and guilty face, as directed by the Creator of this Serial. Thanks to him, we have a matching serial to the two preceding ones on this Channel. This dumb face is compounded by the rats, who wriggle with expressions of success. Rohini wants to get more stress on the scene, and she calls Ayee to come home soon. Sonakshi calls Dr. Vihan to have a look at his patient.

The doctor has his second shot, on the serial, just to enter the house, make an examination of his patient, and make some noise about how one should take care of the patient, and with his stethoscope, examines the baby, declares that its heart beat is normal, then he takes the blood pressure, and declares that it too is normal. In the meantime, the hyper women, Shyamal and Vibha arrive, with their dumb brains in the cold storage, and all show of emotion and anxiety is spread over their faces. Rohini tries to exploit the situation, by insinuating that the Dumbo Face Naina was responsible, and she too proves that she is indeed a dumbo, as no words of explanation come out of her mouth, and she submissively takes in everything they pile up on her with her drooping, sad face.

Naina finds her phone, and calls Daksh, who is informed of Akruti's accident, and he rushes home. When he reaches, the dumb brains have a meeting where the Dumbo Face is the target and we see the brainless idiots blaming her and she sucks up all the venom, and the viewers who might have been watching till the end, might have arrived at their own conclusions.

In the precap
, Kaka, is blaming the outsider, and Shyamal too is agreeing with him and says, that she will take care of her daughter herself from now on.

P.S.

Though this story is made up of a Dumbo Face and dumb brains, it does not mean, that the actors and actresses have not given their best to this serial. They have done their job well. Perhaps the story tellers, are fed up of the intelligent viewers, and want to rope in other viewers, from the great Indian crowd and have catered to their minds.

I apologize if I have sounded brusque and rude.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks for the updates, I agree with you that it is the storywriters and not the actors ruining this serial.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I feel terrible for not reading 😭 it but the advice on the forum is to keep our BP normal as possible. But thanks for making the effort of posting and please keep it up 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the update... Atleast in today's episode they bought that Dr back oherwise he had disappeared only... I too think the writers have done enough damage to the show... It's higt time they balance the act now...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: hookedonGeet

I feel terrible for not reading 😭 it but the advice on the forum is to keep our BP normal as possible. But thanks for making the effort of posting and please keep it up 😊



Perhaps Dr Vihan could help us ! I have taken this job to write the updates. So, even if I do not like it, I write it with the hope, that soon the tide will change. Even in other serials which started with a bang, with good script, suddenly drop in efficiency after about 100 episodes. Wonder if it has anything to do with the renewal of contracts.and the writer leaving the show. We do not have any good information of the production team. They only focus on the actors and actresses.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very true,walquest, i hope like other serials they do not get out a track where Daksh misunderstands Naina or vice versa, i would stop watching
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the update.
This show has disappointed so much that I have quit watching and only read your updates in hopes of it going back to its old magic. Will watch again if it does.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Curiosity got the better of me and i have read it. although it is better than watching i guess. Walquest at point in one of the previous updates was right, its better to know and keep up with the story then trying to catch up later.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Well said...it has become tad boring.I never missed this serial until Abhi's engagement and Both confessing their love.I have quit watching after that.Really the creatives have lost their minds...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank u Thank u Thank u So much but a boring episode...

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