new os doo check it :P

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Posted: 14 years ago
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jai shri mohan evry1 😛

hii evry1 i m ripal...i m nt new to the forum becoz dis forum is alsoo new naa 😆 bt i had already introduce myself...i m ripal 😆

it was 12:30 nd I was lost in world of mohan kastur :P I was just thinking wht will happen next how will dey meet :/ den atlass I visualize sumthng abt der 1st meeting'.lol datss only my os 🤣

its mixture of gujarati hindi english 😆 i dont know to write os den alsoo wrote...may be it wud be nt soo nice 😆 bt den alsoo comment nd press like🤣...enuf of me now...my os is of sumthng like 1st meeting of kastur nd mohan 😆 hope u like it *fingers crosed* 🤣

(in desai nivas)

Jasu ben- kasturr ooo kastur'kyaa che tu?

Kastur- aree haan auchu baa

Jasu ben ' jaldii aai kastur

Kastur 'are haan baa aaii

(nd kastur entered jasu ben's room''jasu ben was seeing salman's movie)

Kastur- haan baa bolo su kaam che

Jasu ben- aliyaa kastur aa joo kon che tv par

Kastur- are baa tamaroo salman che biju kon

Jasu ben- aree wo to muje pata he''kastur mane eu lage che ke humara mohan bhii esaa salludo jesa dikhegaa gaa (kastur blushed)

Kastur(confused)- kem baa mohanjee ane salman me su same

Jasu ben- aree kastur''teraa wo mohan bhi America jake aaya he wo bhi to edum handsome aur smart ban gaya hogaa ekdum maraa sallu daa jevo (nd she laughed)

(kastur got confused'..she kept staring at salman'.nd was thinking abt mohan jee how wud he look''jasuben saw her nd smiled silently)

Jasuben- kastur suu jove che

Kastur(took her eyes from d tv)- kuch nai baa'..baa me jati hu muje kuch kaam yaad aa gaya) (nd she stood up to leave from d room)

Jasu ben(giggled)- oiii kastur joile joile salman ne tera mohan bhii esa hee dikhega

Kastur(looked bak nd smiled)- shu baa tame pan

(nd she left d room blushing'.she ran towards her room'..on d way she heard)

Kastur's mom- aree natuu jaldii kar'mohan aur uskaa pariwaar abhii ata hee hoga

(kastur heard dis'her heart beatss strted beating fast'.she blushed lost her in thoughts nd ran towards her room'..she closed her room'..she was brething fast nd fast'.she rolled on d bed blushing'..nd she took out d pic of mohan'nd kept staring at it her '.she felt as her life took a pause'she couldn't imagine dat d day came when she can see her mohan'.she embrased d pic wid her chest'.nd lie on d bed lost in her own thoughts)''(dem after sumtime she heard a voice'..nd she suddenly got up)

Jasu ben- kastur'..mohan aa gaya

(kastur was feeling as if she is in heaven'.she got up from d bed'..nd rushed to the terrace'..she peeped down'her eyes strted searching for mohan'.firsly she cudnt find him'she looked here nd der''suddenly her eyes fell on a tall handsome man'wearing blue jeans nd white shirt wid a brown jacket on it nd wid shades on his eyes'.kastur felt her heart beatss stopped for a min'.she looked at dat person nd she recognized dat was only his mohan''she saw d photo nd again looked a dat man'nd vice versa she looked at d old mohan nd den to dis mohan which was completely changed'.kastur turned bak)

Kastur(in mind)- mere mohan jee aa gaye

(she again turned bak to get his glimpse'..mohan took out of his glasees''adjusted his jacket'..nd looked her nd der nd his eyes went to d teraace whr kastur was standing staring at him'..he looked at her bt becoz of refrction he couldn't see her face properly'.he tried to see her face properly bt failed'.kastur realized mohan's eyes was at her she quicly took her face nd turned bak )

Saroj ben(screamed)- aree mohan andar chal

Mohan- yess mom :P

(kastur heard saroj ben's voice'.she got little scared'she rushed to her room'..taking d glipse of mohan in her eyes''she rushed to her room nd lied on d bed)

Kastur- mera mohan jee kitne badal gaye he'baa theek hee keh rahi thi bilkul salman jesaa handsome lag rahe the (nd she blushed'..nd closed her eyes''she visualize dat glipse of mohan jee'..she still felt it was a dream'..dat glipse of mohan cudnt get away from her heart'she was dreaming abt mohan nd blushing hard'.suddenly she heard a voice)

Jasu ben- kastur'neeche aav mohan aaa gaya he

(kastur heard dis voice'.now she was sure it was nt a dream'her strt strted pumping fast''she got up from d bed'..looked herself in d mirror ..combed her hair nd got ready'to goo down)

(she moved her step to d stair case'.she felt veryy scared'..nd was blusing continusaly'.step by step she came down)

(galla family nd desai family were all talking nd were having tea''jasu ben saw kastur )

Jasu ben- dekho meri kastur bhii aa gai

(evry1 looked at her'..mohan was having his tea'.he was about to take d anoder sip der his eyes fell on kastur'..he looked at her simplicity''.kastur saw mohan lookin at her she quicly took her eyes nd strted lookin down''mohan was still lookin at her'.kastur turned her head here nd der'.soo dat she don't catch a glipse of mohan'..mohan was wondering why dis girl was nt looking at him''kastur atlass turned her eyes up'mohan nd kastur had cute eye lock''kastur was deeply lost in mohan's eyes'.she felt d same love in mohan's eyes for her which was in her eyes from him'.she felt verryy happy nd smiled genuinely)

Kastur's mom- are kastur beta badhan ashirwaad to le

(kastur took evry1's blessing '..nd sat on a chair which was just opp to mohan's chair''kastur was deeply involved in mohan eyes''it was a dream came true for kastur too see d man in front of her for whom she was waiting like mad nd now dat man was in front of her'she felt as if she was in heaven)

Jasu ben- aree kastur beta'..jaa mohan ne apna ghar to dikha

Kastur(shocked)- baa hu kevi rite

Kastur's mom- are haan kastur baa bilkul theek kahe che'..mohan ne apdu ghar dikha aur tum dono bate bhi karlo thodi der

Jasu ben- haan jao jao'..mohan jaa kastur ke sath jao

Mohan(confused)- par mom

Mohan's mom- jaa mohan ghar joi aye

(mohan unwandetly stood up'..nd stood near kastur..both were just standing)

Jasu ben- aree aiyaa ubha suu choo'jaa kastur ghar dikha apna

Kastur- haan baa

Kastur- chaliye

Mohan shook his head

Mohan walked in front of her'..kastur was walking side by him''she evrytime looked up at try to catch a glimpse of mohan'..nd den when mohan look at her..she bends down her eyes'..they strted walking upstairs'.kastur slighty looked at him again

Bg music- suraj ki tapan ho raama

Rahu tera sath hee

Me to teri parchai

Tera peeche peeche ai''

Mohan(coughs)- hmmm soo u r name is kastur

Kastur(realside)- haan su

Mohan- mera matlab tumharaa naam kastur he

Kastur(blushed)- haan

Kastur- yeh dekho'.yeh mera kamraa he

Mohan- ohh achaa

(dey both entered kastur's room)

(mohan observed d room'.it was full of stautues of krishnaa bhagwaan'..he looked here nd der'kastur was just staring at mohan)

Mohan- nice cool room'.full of god's statues (nd he laughed) (kastur didn't understood eng'she kept wondering wht dis mohan just said)

Kastur- kyaa kaha apne mohan jee

Mohan- mera matlab tumhara kamraa kafii achaa he nice

Kastur- dhanyaawad mohan jee

Mohan(in mind)- kyaa jee???

He looked at kastur in a confused way''.kastur'.moved bak nd got slipped'..she felt storng arms of mohan around her'mohan caught her'.kastur blushingly looked at mohan'..mohan nd kastur were lost in each oders eyes after after sumtime'..mohan made her stood

Mohan(genuinely)- r u alrite'.tu theek to he

Kastur- haan maaf kijiye gaa wo me galti se gir gai

Mohan- koi bat nai its ohk

(mohan was confused nd was wondering'..why kastur was staring at her'.nd was calling him jee)

Kastur- yeh dekhiye (she handed him him pic)

Mohan(took d pic''firstly he just kept looking at d pic'in a confused manner) (der was a precense of silence between dem)

Mohan- yeh thoda thoda mera jesaa nai dikhataa??

Kastur(looked at him in amused way)- ha ha ha ha ha ha (she laughed hard)

Mohan was looking at her nd amusement

Mohan- aap has kyuu rahi he

Kastur(giggled)- apko nai pata ye kaun he

Mohan- naii tumhara bhai he kyaa

Kastur(shocked) ' kyaa bhai''aap bhi naa mohan jee kitnaa mazak karte hoo(nd strted giggling)

Mohan(in mind)- kyaa mazak?? Yeh aldki pagal he kyaa kesa haas rahi he

Kastur(looked at mohan)- aree mohanjee yeh aap hoo

Mohan(completely shocked)- kyaa me'nai hoo hee nai saktaa

Kastur- aree han mohan jee'.baa ki kasam khake kehti hu yeh aapk he ho

Mohan(took d pic again'he got amused'.nd strted shooking his head'nd rotaing d pic here nd der'..he was completely shocked to see his pic

Mohan- haan yeh too mee he hu

Kastur(giggled)

Mohan- tumhare paas meri tasweer kesa aai

Kastur(blushed nd bend her eyes down)- woo muje meri baa ne dii thi

Mohan- ohhh

Natuu(screamed) kastur didi

Kastur- haan aai

Kastur- mohan jee me abhii ati hu

Mohan was still looking at his pic'.he didn't heard wht kastur said

Kastur- mohan jee me abhii aai

Mohan- ohh haan achaa theek he

(kastur stepped to go from room)

(mohan looked at d pic again''he went near d mirror'..he observed d pic properly nd den again he looked at his old pic''vice cersa he was seeing d mirror nd den his pic'.trying to match himself wid d pic)

Mohan- pehlaa me itna champu dikhata thaa''mera baal its soo oillyy

(he ekpt d pic aside'.nd looked at d mirror..nd wore his glasses)

Mohan- hmm yeh he aaj kaa mohan

(nd eh smiled)

(kastur was just stainf outside the room'.peeping in d room from outside'..she genuinely smiled seeing d inoocense of mohan''she turned bak smilingly'..d happiness in her hear was getting refected on her face''she felt overjoyed'.nd again looked bak to catch d glimpse of mohan jee''nd den ran down''blusing hard)

Bg music- me to teri parchai tera peehce peeche aai

Suraj ki tapan hoo rama

Rahu tera sath hee

Kastur(in mind)- baas aab jaldii me mohanjee ki dharampatni ban jau


ps- dont bash me or kill me if u dont like it 😆

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Originally posted by: sheila1990

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Madam...
aap ne to apne jalwa dikhana shuru kar diya...
Amazing OS...
i think aise hi kuch hoga show me bhi...
ANd my Mohan looks sooo ya bataun...
Amazing OS rips...
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Ahem ahem,arre wah meri crack
🤣gr8 work ⭐️.keep it up.
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wooww ripzz acha kaam kiya! keep it up!:)
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wawo ripz bachu 😆 superbbb work yr 👏
❤️ it
keep writing dear 👍🏼
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😆 thnkss for commenting 🤣 😛

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