ShAdEs Of LoVe..A SaJaN SS(COMPLETED)

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HI guys!!!
i dont know i should start that one or not...coz i dont know when my mood changes or get buzy with my studies...hopefully i think i wil not do the either things😆so i am starting it...read it ...n tell hows it...so i can continue...Here is the storyline of my new SAJAN story...
STORY:
In world some people are very lucky or say blessed and some are not...some people feels jealous seeing others success...while some people admires generously...so this story is too about a guy n girl...
the guy named SAMRAT SHERGILL...


the elder son of MR.SHERGILL...his mother died in his childhood...he had a yonger brother ROHAN SHERGILL...as samrat completed his MBa...his father died...samrat was caring n loving since childhood...he loves his father n brother a lot...and one more person in his lyf was important that was his girlfriend SHENA MALOTHRA...who was now MRS.SHEENA SHERGILL...(😕confused sajan k love story sey pehley he the end kar diya ab aesi bhe nai hon mein)married to ROHAN SHERGILL😆yup yup...she batryed samrat...as after mr.shergill death...rohan demand his share in property n become seprate n maries to shena...obviously all credit goes to evil SHEENA...it happens two years before...and in these two years...coz of inexperience rohan lost his all money...n now both facing hard tyms...where sarmat flourishes HIS SHERGILL INDUSTURIES...n were now have 200 crores...n is depply in love with ...(yeh bhe bata don ge tou update mein kiy likhon ge) for samrat no one exsist except her...however he was btrayed but he didnt become stubborn or harsh...he stil was calm n soft jolly to everyone...he was hapy in his own created lyf ..he is crzy about beautiful paintings.one change which came was that HE STARTED DRINKING a lot...beacuse of which...doctors predict he wil not live long more than for two years😭...no friends..all close employs are his friends...no one else...only his doctor mayank sharma is a best friend
girl named GUNJAN BUHSHAN...


younger sister of dia buhshan...n mangater of MR.ARNAV SINGH...😆...n madly in love with him...for her only him...no world nothing exsits...n love her sis n mangater a lot...doing last sameester of mBA...soft calm...decent sedhi sadhi bholi ...inocent...but get fierce when anyone hurts her...her father was drunk n died before her brith...while mother died when she was just one year old...her sister take cares of her...thats why she trust her blindly...

OTHER CHARACTERS...
ROHAN SHERGILL (SAMRAT S YOUNGER BROTHER)

nyc by nature loves shena a lot...n somewhere he cares n loves his brother too...
MRS.SHEENA SHERGILL...

love only money...batryed samrat...
DIA BUHSHAN..

sis of gunjan...samraat s employ...friend of arnav...
LAVANAYA...
samrat s PA...
ARNAV SINGH.

samrat s to be new employ n friend...n mangater of gunjan...
MR.MAYANK SHARMA
samrat s best budy n doctor
MR.SHAAM SEXANA.
a painter n sarmat s friend...
INSPECTOR MR BENJIMEN SWAMI...
investegator of samrat s accident case
anyother wil be described as story wil continue...n yup all characters are grey...might be positivty is there..but negativty is abundant...lets see how remains postive through out story n who become evil at end...

now how sajan wil met...fell in love...get maried.or samrat die...etccc...lets see...

SOME TYM in lyf we dont get what we desire...but some get what they desire...some loses someone...some gets someone...some people break ur turst...some one breaks themselves other trust...someone btrayes u...n sometym u bratyes them...world is so selfish n mean...that it always tries too take advantage of simple n honest people...but sometyms fate proves that...only honesty turth wins...is there any word LOVE in world too beside betrayal,,,,,,,selfishness...mean...does it really exist LOVE...
some tym whole world is against u...but if u at ryt path n good for other n urself...truly u are blessed with the best one giftt...just have to wait with trust on ur CREATOR.

hope fuly u lykd it...
sugeest any name i am confusd...i thnk BETRAYAL...coz is ss mein har koi aik dosrey ko cheat karey ga🤣...
dont throw chappals...😆
i wil update the first part soon...
sugeetions for title..plz chose anyone...or tell urs...
Justifications of Love..ya reasons for loving..The thread of love..Unsafe Loves..Trail of Love...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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so here is the first part...😉
PART ONE
it was a great sunny day...cool breeze was blowing...rather then normal day today was strange happiness in morning...he get up as usually at 7 when his P.A make him wake up...miss. Lavanaya was doing job as his personal sectary from last two years in office n at home both...as he wake up with a call..he open eyes n saw the most beautiful face with whom his morning start...right in front of his big bed...it was a beautiful painting..it was hard to tell painting was beautiful or the girl face having shy smile in the painting...

he madly stares for minutes...for long tym he tries to read her eyes...but then again failed...at last he get up n saw his things already ready so he went to get ready for his office...
he was non other than MR.SAMRAT SHERGILL...the CEO of shregill industtries...he was in love...yup in love with that girl in painting...he doesnt know who is she where is she...etc...that painting was gifted by his one friend on his birthday who is a painter n lives in dehli n expected to come soon to meet samrat as samrat anxiously wanted to know about that girl...n he feell one love with that pic...might be everyone see that should be fell in love as that picture seemms to be speak itself...the beauty was just undefine...
He came out in his dashing busineess suit...he was looking handsome n dashing as always...as he was brushing hairs he glance at the pic on back wall through mirror..he smiles...n then picking up his cell...he left the room...
it was shergill s palace...a huge lawn...rows of brand new cars...lavanaya saw a guy wearing formal suit...

LAVANYA:hi mr.arnav singh...

ARNAV:jii...

LAVANYA:nyc to meet u...lavanya...MR.SAMRAT SHERGILL...k personal secortary ...aye sir apka andar intezar kar rahe hain...

she led him in a big palace...n then in coridor they met samrat...

LAVANYA:sir yeh hain mr.arnav singh...

SAMRAT:hii...lavanya breakfast ready mat karwana aj tm ja k files dekh lo

LAVANYA:jii sir...

SAMRAT:aye mr.arnav singh...beht k baat kartey hain...

samrat led him to a big weell decorated expensive furninture n all things...

SAMRAT:so arnav mjhey dia ney tmhari kafi taref k the...n i know k usney sahe he kha ho ga...yeh tou tmharey kaam sey he pata chaley ga
ARNAV:ji sir...

SAMRAT:sir nai samrat...mjhey sarey samrat boltey hain...ok...

ARNAVok..samrat...

SAMRAT:Thats sounds great humari achi baney ge...so lavanya aur dia tmhey sara kam smjha dein ge...aur salry car k keys flat k keys etc jo bhe hai woh sab subhani sey poch lena...mjhey bus all tym tm available honey cahye ho as friend advisor n eveything

just then a servant came up...n gave samrat a glass of wine...

SAMRAT:tum lo gey arnav

ARNAV:nai sir mein nai peta...

SAMRAT:thats gud...par mein tou all tym peta hon...

arnav just smiles faintly...while for samrat doesnt make difference anything...

ARNAV: i wil try to came upto ur expectations...

SAMRAT:not try u have to...it was pleasure to meet u...now have to go...wil meet u in office tomorow...

ARNAV:thanks sir...

SAMRAT:sir nai samrat...

ARNAV:ya samrat...

SAMRAT:n second i hate words sory n thank u so dont use them in front of me...
ARNAV:ok...

SAMRAT:bye have a great day...

samrat leaves...n arnav left sheergill palace...

there was a huge building of flats...in one of them...

girl1:dekhna usey job forna mil jaye ge

girl2:bilkul bilkul akhir dia buhshan ney jo ki hai sifarish...

dia: ab aesa bhe nai hai gunjan tu bhe na uski ablities par shak mat kar

gunjan: di i know wo deserve karta hai mein tou mazak kar rahe the

dia:han aur tjhey pata hai uski salry two lacs hai car flat alag sey

gunjan:yeh tmhara boos di bohat rich hai kiya??

dia:shergill industires ka CEO hai woh...aur shergil industries india k no.1 company mein sey aik hai...

gunjan:acha acha di...ab apney booss k qasedey mat padhney lag jana

dia:pari tjhey pata hai wo dosti aur pyar ko biqao maal smjhta hai

gunjan:kiyaaa di ?? mein smjhi nai

dia;woh kehta hai k pyaar aur dosti kuch nai hota sirf paisa hona chahye apkey dost aur pyar karney waley kudh a jatey hain apk pass

gunjan:ughhh kitni ghatiya soch hai uskiii

dia:mr.smarat shergill

gunjan:ya ya ya mein arnav ko bol dein ge uskey sath zyada baat na karey...

dia:aye haye apney mangater k itni fikar

gunjan:diii...of course of itna sedha hai yeh samrat shergill jisko dosti aur pyar ka matlab nai pata...kbi lana merey pass apney sadiyal boss ko sab smjha don ge usey mein...

dia:woh sariyal nai hai gunjan bohaat acha hai...hm sab employess ka bohat khayal rakhta hai aur janti ho woh hmey sir bhe nai bulaney deta

gunjan:di choro apney us boss ko arnav ko phone kar k bolon k wo hmey treat deney k lea ley k jaye dinner pe??

dia:han han kuin nai tm dono chaley jana

gunjan:thank u diii u r so sweeet...

the scene shifts to a decent big banglow...

Rohan triely sits on sofa...

he was tired n woried...when sheena with cup of cofee comes...

sheena;kiya huwa ? khahn gaye the subha he subha??

rohan:kahein nai...rohan called out servant for coffee...

sheena:apney bhaii k pas he gaye ho gey hana??

rohan:nai janey wala hon...

sheena:rohan tm kuch kartey kuin nai ho tmhari waja sey sari company barbad ho gae...

rohan:sheenaa just cut this crap...din mein dus martaba sunta hon mein yeh...kbhi bus bhe kiya karo...

rohan leaves home angirly...
PRECAPE:
mein samrat sey milna chahta hon...

sir k tabiet nai tekh ap abhi nai mil saktey...

samrat asii koi ladki nai hai yeh sirf imagination hai...

itni koabsorat imagination kise k nai ho saktiii...

HOPE U LYKED IT
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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INDEX
PART ONE PAGE ONE
PART TWO PAGE FIVE
PART THREE PAGE SEVEN
PART FOUR PAGE TEN
PART FIVE PAGE TWELEVE
PART SIX PAGE FIFTEEN
PART SEVEN PAGE EIGHTEEN
PART EIGHT PAGE TWENTY
PART NINE PAGE TWENTY THREE
PART TEN PAGE TWENTY FIVE
PART ELEVEN PAGE TWENTY NINE
PART TWELVE PAGE THIRTY THREE
PART SIXTEEN PAGE FORTY FIVE
PART SEVENTEEN PAGE FIFTY
PART EIGHTEEN PAGE FIFTY TWO
PART NINTEEN PAGE FIFTY TWO
PART TWENTY PAGE fifty eight




THE END.
Edited by mars14 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Merii🤗 What an awesome concept & CS..Its really very different from all your stories so far...Yeah u r right there is lot of negativity in the concept but it also give us +ve hops too..Really felt bad for Samrat...😭 Samrat intro scene & Gunjan's picture scene was mind blowing...Gunjan was really sweet & bubbly...😛Arnav ka tho kuch pata nahi ...Sheena oh I hate her...😡 Rohan was Ok..The beginning was so good..Plzz continue soon..Can't wait to read more of it..😃
Edited by Anjali_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful story and cs...im glad ur starting a new ss on sajan...i think betrayal is a good name if everyone is cheating each other lol...cont soon

part one was fantastic...samrat having a painting of gunjan on his wall was cute even though he doesnt know here...sheeena is soo mean...cont soon
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tht was nice concept bit confusing as well
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wow part one was so cool hate sheena rohan is really a ok guy
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wow meeri this is definetly a different concept par bara sad hai...poor samrat always driniking :( i hate that sheena but rohan seems like decent guy who got trapped into sheena's fake love..loved gunjan and dia both are sweet as for arnav well he seems nice too i like ur choice of title betrayal sounds intresting i just hope that in the end of the story sajan are happy and together
do cont soon
love
tanzeel
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awesome ss loved the story and CS
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reserved 🤣
ab maine soch liya unress tb karongi jb koi part achcha lage ga 🤣
cs samrat n gunjan alag alag hayo raba 🤣 beta jb tak tu unhe milwa nhi leti na mjhe mere comment ki umeed chod de !
Han yeh bat hai maine kbhi bhi tere update pe cmnt nhi ki 🤣 par ab main badal gayi ho 🤣
chal jb sajan ka milan aega tb cmment karongi tb tak ke liye mere ress se kam chala le jo new nhi hai tere liye bt still dosti ke khatir bata diya ! 🤣 atleast thank u to bolde 🤣

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