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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: RadhikaBhushan

reserving it will edit later

do teell me about that later😆n ya sory yar i wil try to update magical too par abi uska story merey damag sey nikal gae hai jasey he yaad aye ga k mein ney kiya likhna tha i wil write it at once😆😳
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ArShSaJan

hey meeriiiee..that was an awesome..one..diferenett n awesome.. my poor samratt!!!! but no worries...gunjan hana..awesome cs n part..do continuee soon..

hi manisha...thank u sooo muchhh for lyking the concept n update...yup so ture...sajan hain tou fir kiya problem ho ge😆thank u once again
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
@ashzin...
thank u so much api...u r always in pm list...😆
@ rija api
thank u so much for the lovely comment api...hope k agey bhe pasand ayey...wasey i know ap joti tarefien karney ka shoq nai rakhtii😆
@sajanlove3
thank u 😊
@nisha
thank u very much dear for comenting😛
@sm_317
thank u so much for lyking it😃
@hami
thank u very much hami for replying
@rukma api
thank u api for lykng it...hope u lyk the next one too
@sarah
thank u so much sarah for lyking it...hope it remians differnt from others...
lolzz that convo i realy didnt think while writing for once..
u r in pm list dear no wories i wil pm u
@sanz
thank u sanz...oh i realy not sure...k kon kon positve rehta hai..par i hope sajan positive he lagein tmhey...
@ayesha
thanks aysh...ending lolz...abi starting tou honey do ...thank u so much
n all others for presing lyk buttons a very big thanks to alll
only those people are in pm list who press lyk buttons or comented
thank u so much
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
here is the next part ...
Part two
(one thing i forget to mention...samrat is crazy about beautiful painitng n i hope u lyk the name...a very big thanks to anjali api for sorting it...😳n one new character is in this update...MR.SHAAM SEXANA..a weell known painter thats why samrat s friend..)

Samrat s Palace:

Gatekeper comes in coridor to lavanya...
Gatekeper: Mam, sir ko milny k lea unkey koe dehli sy dost aye hain.
Lavanya: unhy merey pas andar behj do...
gaterkeeper left n After five minutes a guy came there.

(i dont know i am able to add it in my ss...but have to bear...as gunjan k tasver banaey ka nek kam unhi ney anjam diya hai )

Shaam: hi mera nam shaam hai.. Shaam Sexana.
Lavanaya: oh yeah.. Samrat Sir k favourite painter jin ho ney wo painting behji the dehli sey..
Shaam: ji bilkul ap ?
Lavanaya: mein unki P.A hon lavanaya..
Shaam:
mein samrat sey milna chahta hon...
Lavanaya: sir k tabiet nai tekh ap abhi nai mil saktey...unhey doctor check karney aye hain
Shaam: kuin ? Unhy kiya huwa ?
Lavanaya: kuch ni as usual ghum sy nidhaal ho gaye the.. Doctr ny tou kha hai wo 2 saal sy zyada zinda nai rahein gey...
There was strange silence in between two people.

In samrat s bedroom.
Samrat: mayank, i am fine yaar..
Mayank: Sam, y dont u take medications ?
Mayank n samrat stares at each other for a second n then samrat shaked head in dismayed...
Samrat: They are of no use. Leave it..
Mayank: par...
Samrat: dude, i want to go to hill station for my bday..
Mayank: sam tu...
Samrat: mayu pls na i am perfectly fine aur mjhy yeh do saal apni marzi k jeney hain.
Mayank n Samrat looks at each other...n for a moment maynk smiless...
Mayank: aesa tou ho ga nai par tekh hai tm ja sakty ho.
Samrat: aur tm? Tu apney best budy k bday ni celebrate karney chaley ga ?
Mayank: sam sory tjhy pata hai nupur ka wo journey ni kar pati..
Samrat: chal tekh hai jesey teri marzi...
samrat was sad a bit... but knows maynk cant make up...mayank was woried for him..for mayank samrat was more than brothers...
Mayank: tu wahan apna khayal rakhein...
lavanaya open door n enters
Lavanaya: mein hon na doctor hmesha sir k sath..
Lavanaya joins them.
Samrat: see.. Wo chalney ko tyar hai aur tu best 4nd ho k bhe..
Mayank: Samrat shut up.. Take rest complete aur aj koe drinking ni...
Samrat: mayank u knw i wil..
samrat kept on smiling at mayank.as mayank always stops him..but HOW CAN SAMRAT SHERGILL LISTEN ANYONE ELSE EXCEPT HIS HEART
Mayank: i wil see it. Lavanya chahye Samrat kuch bhe boley.. Koi uski nai suney ga.
Samrat: mayank!!! Tekh hai. Tu jeta mein hara.bus kush.
Mayank: Samrat Shergill khbi ni harta..thanks budy. Raat ko call karun ga. Bye and take care
Samrat: tu bhe bye. Nupur bhabi ko hi bolein.
Mayank: han sure..
Mayank leaves huging him.

Lavanya: sir apsey Mr. Shaam Sexana milney aye hain..
Samrat. Shaam! Behjo usey yahan foran..
samrat was starngly very excited

Lavanaya: okay sir.
Later lavanaya came back with shaam. Samrat meets to him gratefuly.

Shaam: kasey hain samrat ap ?
Samrat: as usual fine.. Firstly thanks Shaam from coming
Shaam: its my Pleasure Samrat.
Samrat: shaam thanks for the gift. Aj sy pehly mein ney khabi itni koabsorat aur pyari painting ya yun kaho ladki ni dki. Wo kon hai Shaam ?
Shaam: kon Samrat ?
Samrat: tasver wali ladki.
Shaam: Samrat woh meri imagination hai...
Samrat:
itni koabsorat imagination kise k nai ho saktiii...
Shaam: samrat yeh imagination hai. Aesi koe ladki nai hai
Samrat: i dont belive. Itni pyari ladki, iski ankhein..iska hansna.. Sharmana.. Sb itna perfct.. Itna acha.. Itni haseen ladki... I love ths pic.. I love her.. Truly i love her... Thanks shaam for ths wonderful gift..
He kept on staring the pic..
Samrat: Shaam mein kal lonavala ja raha hon,... tm chalo gey na?
samrat asks him to acompany him...
Shaam: as u wish Samrat.
Samrat: tekh hai.. Lavanaya car niklwao driver sy kaho mjhy ofice jana hai..
Lavanaya: par sir..
Samrat: sham guest room mein rukey ga... Mein 5 mint mein ata hon.
Lavanaya nods in yes n both leaves...

Shergill Industries..

Rohan enterz in dia s cabin...
Rohan: bhai khahn hai dia ?
Dia: oh to Mr. rohan Shergill aye hain ? Samrat Shergill k so called bhai.
Rohan: dekho dia..
Dia: mr. rohan mery pas tm jasy cheaterz k lea koe tym ni hai. Yeh lo cheak 50 thousand ka samrat ny deny ko bola tha.
Rohan: What ? Mein ny 1 lac ka bro ko bola tha...
Dia: lena hai to loo warna leave from here at once. I cant bear u anymore.
Rohan: tm ney abi bhe mjhy ni bhula pae ?
Dia: shut up! U were out of my lyf when u left me for that Bitch!
Rohan: DIAA.. Dont cross limits..
Dia: get lost! Security...
Rohan left glaring her...
As he left, dia sits... N just then she stared smiling..forgeting rohan...as were in deep thoughts..

In flat...arnav came to meet up gunjan...n gunjan was dam happyy...

Gunjan: congrats arnav..
Arnav: thanks pari..
both smiles at each other as they settles on couch...
Gunjan: meri treat ?
Arnav: treat tou mjhy tmsy chahye tmharey hath ka bana huwa dinner..
Gunjan: arnav.. Tm hmesha mjsy diner banwatey ho.
Arnav: tm banati he itna acha ho. Kuin tm nai bana k khilana chahti ? Tmhey acha nai lagta mery lea banana ?
Gunjan: arnav.. Tmhary lea kuch bhe.. Mein to tmhey apni jaan bhe dey sakti hon.
gunjan stares at arnav lovingly...arnav smiles at her...
Arnav: gunjan apni jaan sambhal k rakho smjhi.. Wasy tmharey lea aik surprise hai.
Gunjan: Surprise ? Kiya? Batao na pls arnav..
she get super excited listening surpries...
Dia: kiya baatein chal rahe hain ?
Dia came in from front door back from office...
Gunjan: di arnav ny koe surprise plan kiya hai merey lea. Pocho na kiya ?
Dia: surprise ? Kiya? Arnav batao ?
dia looks at arnav...
Arnav: hum log kal lonavla chalny waley hai. Gunjan k sb sey fav hil statin.
Gunjan: kiyaAa !! OMG ! Arnav u r best! Wao di kitna maza aye ga hum teno sath mein koab masti karein gey...
gunajn hugs arnav...n then her sister...she was just lyk a kid...
Dia: mein sath ja k kuin tm dono k romance mein kabab mein haddi bano ge ?
gunjan blushes lightly n then glares her sis fakely...
Gunjan: Dii!!! Ap k bina mein nai jao ge u knw that...
and she realy meant it...
Arnav: han dia aur wasey bhe oficaly mjhy Samrat k sath bhe rehna padey ga na..
Gunjan: what ? samrat ? Wo idiot bech mein khahn sey a gya ? ?
gunjan doesnt lyk samrat since she had listend that he doesnt belive on friendship n love...n considers money important...
Arnav: wo gunjan ...
Dia: gunjan itna gusa karny k zarorat ni hai.. Wo hmesha apni bday pe hil station pe farm house hai uska wahan jata hai. Arnav ko bhe jana pady ga. Wasey bhe uska koe 4nd ya relative ni hai..
Gunjan: par di rohan uska bhai ni tha?
Dia: us bastered ka naam mat lo.. Bikhari hai aik number ka .. Bhai ka dushman hai.
Gunjan: wo aj aya tha ?
Dia: tjhy kasey pata ?
Gunjan: di ap itna gusa tbhi hoti ho jb us ko dekhti ho chalo dafa karo usko .apke lea tou koi prince charming aye ga. Chalo ap aur arnav t.v enjy karo mein dinner lagati hon.
Dia: thanks pari.
Gunjan: anytym di..
thrice had great tym n enjy the dinner...
late night after seeing off arnav gunjan came in her room...n after changes lyes on bed...she was very happy...in her small world...she smiles remembering arnav...then she reminds dia s talk about samrat...
uska koi bhe nai...wo ktina akela feel karta ho ga na...hm...mama dad k begair mjhey bhe ktina akela feel hota hai lakin merey pass to di hai aur arnav bhe...aur uska bhaii aur wo kon hai...di ney bataya tha i thnk shena han ...how mean na...samrat ko asey akela nai chorna chaye tha...pata nai log cheat kuin kartey hain..i hope k uski lyf mein bhe koi aye jo us se pyar karey...gunjan tu bhe na...kiya soch rahe hai soo ja..wo belive nai karta friendship aur love pe islea akela haii...wasey bhe kal arnav k sath kitna maza aye ga lonavla mein ...omg...
she blushes n then slept...
samrat was staring at sky ...trying to find one star fimilar to him...but here too...might fate was testing him still...ohh godd...i dont know tm realy kiya chahtey ho...kiya life di hai...jis mein koi apna he nai hai...jo mjsey pyar karey...merey pason sey nai...ughh...i hate this world ...yahan sab jhoot hai...kuch bhe sach nai lagta mjhey...uff...samrat leave it kiya terey complain karney sey koi a tou nai janey wala na jo terey lea pagal ho...GOD!!!! realy i dont know mjhey thankful hona chahye ya...par mein ungrateful nai...thanks tumney lyf he di mjhey...aur kiya mein mango ga tmsey...
he goes to lye on bed...when saw the pic...
yeh ladkii na mjhey kise din pagal kar dey ge......samrat smiels to himself n then get lost in the pic...n dont know when he sleptt...

precape: sajan in lonavla...😳😳along with kabab k hadiis🤣
samrat gets shock😲 😆 😆

hope u lykd it n enjy it...
thanks
love
meri
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
WOW Merii🤗 Really awesome update...👏Loved it...😃 Atleast Shyam😡 is good in something..😉..Rohan & Diya have a FB too...😲 That too of betrayal..Arnav was good..Can't tell much abt him..😛Mayank was sweet as Dr & friend...😃Gujna is such a sweet heart..Wow!!!She is really sweet...😍..Precap was eventful ..😛 Can't wait to read the Lonavala part...😉..
Edited by Anjali_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowow tht was sooo awesome love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wonderful update..gunjan is sooo sweet...hate rohan he is sooo selfish...mayank is such a nice friend...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey meri it was owesam cs bt very confusing😕 as well...in sammy nd gujan or arnav..lil confusing yar😕 ...cnt soon next part ...thank for pm add me in ur pm list ...😊
love
tia...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow
awesome part
really nice 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sorry yaar!!!!!! abb padhna start karungi..coz my mom doesnt l8 me e1 touch pc dese days...soory 4 d delay in rpying...add me in ur pm list...mere liye 1 favour karegi...plz apne updates mein smileys mat daal...mein updates cell mein daal ke padhti hun oh uske hyperlink ban jaati hain...plz itni favor kar de!!!!!!!!
best of luck for ur ff...

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