ShAdEs Of LoVe..A SaJaN SS(COMPLETED) - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part Three...
it was morning...when samrat was wating for arnav to come so that they can leave for lonavla...
Samrat called arnav.
Samrat: arnav u r still not here ? We r waiting...
Arnav: Actualy Sir, dia aur uski sister bhe lnavla janey wali hain.
Samrat: why they dont come with us ?
Arnav: sorry Sir i wl be there i promise.mein unk sath...
Samrat: oh ok. Bye...
samrat cut call n moves to his jeep...
Samrat: I wl go in my jeep. Lavanaya shaam tm log driver k sath a jao.
He left without listning any reply. They were a bit woried seing him upset n then too leaves. Samrat called mayank while driving car.. He was using bluetooth ear device...
Mayank: hey dude..
Samrat: mayank tu mjsy 3 ghantey baat kar sakta hai ?
Mayank: what ? Tera wo arnav...
Samrat: uski tou baat na kar. Just tel me na..
Mayank: yr mein doctor hon i think...
Samrat: bhabi khahn hai us sey baat karwa tu hai he boring
Mayank: ley a gae hai teri chahattii bhabi mein chala hospital k lea late ho raha hon. Ok.
Samrat: han han jaa jaa
Nupur: hi Sam kasey ho ?
Mayank: u both enjy
Samrat: hi nupur tm kasi ho ? bye mayank
Nupur: mein tekh ho sam aur tum ?
Samrat: tekh hon mjhy kiya hona hai ?
Nupur: samrat.. Phely promise me wahan ja k drink nai karo gey..
Samrat: mein aesa koi promse ni karo ga jo pora ni kar sakta
Nupur: tm merey lea bhe yeh ni karo gey ?
Samrat: mein maynk ni hn bhabi jaan
Nupur: apni chashmsh k lea bhe nai ?
Samrat: hum koe aur baat karein ?
Nupur: nai. Mjhy tmhari chashmish k he barey mein baat karni hai. Jab woh aye ge na tou mein ..
Samrat: bhabi bhabi pls leave it na. Yeh btao apko kiya lagta hai baby boy ho ga girl ?
nupur was 7 months pregnat.
Nupur: umm tmhy kiya pasand hai ? Boy ya girl ?
Samrat: baby girl. Fairy
Nupur: oh par mjhy lagta hai baby boy ho ga.
Samrat: wo kuin ?
Nupur: yr wo itni kicks marta hai na Samrat.
samrat laughed.
Samrat:wao usko footboller banana ho ga.
Nupur:sam tm bhe na!
Samrat: thanks nupur.
nupur smiles...
Nupur: tmhara mood karb tha na ? Plz tm hanstey raha karo hmesha
Samrat: okay my sweet bhabi i wl
Nupur: hmm so merey pyarey dever apna birthday achy sy celebrate karna..
Samrat: hmmm...
They both continued for long time... They realy share a very beautiful friendship...
In evening Samrat reached lonavla and feels strange happiness. He loves the natural beauty. He loves to spend tym on his farmhouse.
On other side gunjan was having great time with arnav n dia.. Mostly arnav n dia both keep silent while gunjan kept n talking. She saw dia slept and arnav was driving ...she was siting at his back...n looking at him thorugh mirror...for seconds she stares n then moves gaze to window...she get lost in natural beauty..
on reaching lonavala...gunjan excused her n went in her room to sleep...in lonavala dia n gunjan were staying in a hotel...
arnav left after droping them to farm house..samrat was in realy a good mood...so he asked arnav to join him in basket ball...arnav n samrat realy enjyd it palying...n the game ended while samrat wins from 2 goals...
s:wao dude u plays weelll...
a:thanks sir...
s:samrat
a:samrat...u r superb...
s:thanks...mein fresh ho k ata hon...phir diner kartey hain
a:ya sure...
after sometym...samrat did dinner with respective three friends...
it was late night 11 45..arnav,lavanaya and sham had asked samrat to celebrate his bday n cut cake at 12...so samrat didnt went for long drive.. samrat was standing in balcony of his room...n arnav was with him...they were talking friendly...and samrat was telling him about adventures he usually do on coming lonavla every year...samrat saw him cutting call again n again...
samrat:kiya hwua?zarori call ho ga utha lo na?
arnav:nai samrat its okay...woh...
samrat:she is must be ur girlfriend ryt??
arnav:meri mangater hai
samrat:waoo soo cool congrats dude...tou baat kar lo na us sey
arnav:actually she is waiitng from me..
samrat:woh bhe lonavla mein hai tou usey yahan bula lo i wil not mind...
arnav:wo nai aye ge...
samrat:hmm..chalo phir tm chaley jao usey wait mat karao...
arnav:par abi cake bhe cut karna hai
samrat:oh thats nothing important...5 mint pehley cut kar lein gey tou kuch nai ho ga i am not use of things lyk this.
arnav:sir 5 mint tou reh gaye hain i am fine...
samrat:are u sure??wo gusa nai ho ge??
arnav:usey mein mana lon ga sir...
samrat:thats mean wo tmsey bohat pyar karti hai
arnav:yeah...
samrat:chalo usko phone kar k tou bata do na...
arnav n samrat smiles...arnav nods
on other side...
gunjan:di yeh arnav kuin nai phone utha raha??
dia:utha ley ga...
gunjan:di mein us sey gusa hon ab...tm apney cell sey call kar k bolo usko foran aye yahan...
dia:parii tm bhe na...lao do cell...
dia takes it n called him...
dia:arnav khahn ho??
gunjan takes cell...
gunjan:arnav mein tmsey gusa hon...tm...
arnav:i am coming pari thoda tym lagey ga na...
gunjan:tmney kha tha tm surprise do ge...
arnav:han na tou aon ga na tmhari di sey hmari shadi k baat karney...
gunjan:kiyaaa...sachhh...i love u arnav...ok tekh hai mein tmhara wait karti hon
arnav:bye pariii...
dia;bus kushh
gunjan:han bohatt
dia:chalo phir walk pe chaltey hain
gunjan:par...
dia:arnav k aney sey pehley a jaein gey ok
gunjan:tekh hai chalo...
cut to samrat...as clock struck 12 samrat cut the cake...all his employs n called friends...he smiles as they wished him.n after tasting a bit cake...
samrat:so arnav now u can go n enjoy
arnav:thanks sir...
samrat:i dont know yar tm logo ko kitni dafa kehna padey ga no sir...anyways guys enjy the cake...i am going for a drive..ok bye guys...
samrat leaves...he loves late night long drives...n that too in roads having grenerey on both sides...it was his fav hooby in lonavala...he was enjying music along driivng...
gunjan n dia walking on damp dark road...
gunjan:di khahn hai tmhari fav place...itni door chala chala k maar diya hai ...itna andheera ha yahan...mjhey dar lag raha hai ...diii...
gunjan see beside her no body n as she tunrs saw lonly road...n as again turns backk lisnting voice of a coming car...she was still...n didnt move an inch...was shivering due to fear...n put hand on face as to stop the approaching light...n he stops the jeep with jerk...n as both gaze meet ...it seems whole universe is still...nothing moving...both went on staring...
these lyrics were sung at background...
Pehli nazar mein
Kaise jaado kar diya
Tera ban baita hai
Mera jiya
Jaane kya hoga
Kya hoga kya pata
Is pal ko milke
Aa jee le zara



gunjan s pov:
i was shivering with fear...but when i saw the car stoped with halt...the light was pericing in my eyes...but stil i was able to see his face...his eyes...he was staring at me...his brown eyes...making me fall...there was sadness in his eyes...there was something in him...he was handsome...the one i had never seen in my whole lyf...blue suits him...it was dark...but still i could see him clearly...he was shocked...but why??...i was unable to stop staring at him...


samrat s pov:
i was enjying the music...when i saw that girl in red dress...i stepped the brakes...she turns...n i was speechless...speellbound of her beauty...is this real?she was standing in front of me...the same beautiful eyes...she was shivering a bit...red suits her so much...is i am dreaming...?? ...is this girl is the same...the pic one...to whom i love...is she is there...?????
SAJAN were lost in each other eyes...

gunjan didnt felt when dia pulled her behind bushes beside the road...her duppat struks in bushes...she was not in senses...n dia was going awaay handling her hand...n pulling her almost...she was fast indeed...gunjan s dupata torn into two pieces...
samrat came out of his thoughts...n as looks here n there to find her...but no one was there...he get down from car...n looks right n left...n just then he saw the piece of her duppata...he takes it...n then saw the payal on sand...he takes it...he wondered where she had gone away...he was restles...if he didnt get the stole n payal...he had never belived on himself that he had seen her...he didnt drink whole day...he recalls...he goes back in jeep...n then tunred it to farm house...he was lost in thoughts...
precape:
somone attacked on samrat with knife...

he saw his head in her lap...n as her hand creases his face it seems...he lived once again...

diii kuchh karooo...hellp plzz...
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
Merii Rocking update...👏 Loved it a lot!!SaJan 's was really felt like dream for us too...😛 Wow Nupur & Samrat's conversation was really sweet & you can really feel the comfort & friendliness of Devar & Bhabi...😃..Samrat was so nice with Arnav..He really want to see him Happy with his Love..😛..Gunjan was really very innocent..😊 But I didn't understand why Diya pulled her into bushes..But the Payal & Dupatta was so romantic!!! Remembered MJHT SaJan days...😍..Precap was scary..😲. Par Samrat in Gunjan's lap...😍 Wow!!!Can't wait to read more...Plzzz continue soon...😃
Edited by Anjali_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
hi meri howz u yr?
very nice update i loved it...cnt soon next update ...thanks for pm me...
love
tia...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice CS n Awesome Concept. Keep it up. Cont. soon. Thanx ADEEN for the link.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tht was sooo awesome love it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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rocking update thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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NICE update. sajans meeting was superb. precap sounds scary! continue soon. thanks 4 d pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear awesome update seriously loved it gosh loved sajan's first meeting superb gosh precap is scary now can't wait for next part do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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**awesome update!!! 😃**
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ok Meru...Last twoparts were Awesome...Great and very well written👏👏👏👏👏
Feeling very bad to know that Samrat has only two years to live...
Sajan first meeting was Superb...finally Samrat'd dream came true...😳😳
now i know ab sammy us ka duppatta uthey ga..phir wo mjht wala red torn piece of duppatte ka scene aye ga...hath pe roll karne wala😉😆😆
Meru its one of your finest SS...keep it up the close to reality plzzz...
Wese ye Sajan SS he k mjht or ipk ka mixture...😆
eagerly waiting for Sajan officially meeting now...
plz continue soon the next part
thanks for the pm

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