ShAdEs Of LoVe..A SaJaN SS(COMPLETED) - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
awesum part luv it thanxs for PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oww awesome update loved the way gunjan cared for samrat but on hearing abt samrat her reaction was shocking now can't wait for next update do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hey merri
awesome update loved it
but whose trying to kill sam 😕
precap is interesting
do cont soon
n thanks for the pm
Edited by fend - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
@anjali api
hey apiii ...awww...thank u sooo muchhh for all the appereciations...why she is scaring wil dsectibed in next update which i am gona update now...hope u wil enjy 😆
@hey sanazz thank u so much for ur beautiful comment...that wil described later😃thank u so much for lyking update...
@tia,shafoo,saduf,pretty,lekshamic7,nisha,rukma api,sajanlove3,manisha,kins103,hammi,ashzin api,richa api,aysh
thank u guys for loving update n commenting...same question..lolz. yar yeh bata don ge tou update mein kiya likhon ge dont wory agli updaet mein sab clear ho ga...
@rija api
thank u rija api for ur sweet comment...itney sarey sawal lolz...
gunjan loves arnav but usney samrat k barey mein bohat kuch sun rakha hai n she used to fell bad as he is alone...and samrat ko injured dekhney pe jo reaction tha wo islea coz she is extra sensetive...n it was not coz of love..it was just caring nature...as such hmadardi u can say jab ap ksie ko musibat mein dekhtey ho...n that happen in her lyf first tym k uskey samney koi maar raha hai ..n she cant do anything...aur bad mein jab wo sochte hai tou that was too yeh uskey sath pehli dafa huwa tha islea wo dari huwe the n pareshan..n wo uskey lea dua as just an human love k tor par kar rahe the...so wo samrat k lea woh nahn feel kar rahe jo wo arnav k lea karti hai but stil aik point hai it wil dsecribe later in updates...mein kise ka pov nai likh sakte coz us sey sari story reveal ho jae ge...n aik do updates u wil know k kon kitna SACHA haii...
thanks for pressing lyk buttons
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Part five
It was night..when sheena s cell rang.
Sheena: helo.
Guy: mam merey baqi pasey ? Apka kam ho gya hai.
Sheena: kiya khak kaam kiya hai tm ney ?
she replied angirlyy...the guys become surprised
Guy: mam
Sheena: mein ney tmhey paisey usey Jaan sey marney k lea dea the na k zakmi karney par. Idiot. Police ko dy don ge agar aenda mjhy phone kiya...
She cut cal angirly.. Rahul came out after changing in night suit...
Rahul: kiya huwa kis ka phne tha?
Sheena: tha aik idiot. Chodo so jao tm..
rahul however knows its non other than his wife make an attempt to kill his bro...but he was quite that at least samrat is now fine...he was guilty but he cant say anything to his...dearly wife...
Nxt morninggg...
Gunjan was standing in balcony and reminding dia s comments about Samrat.

Wo Drink karta hai...
Wo dosti aur pyar per yakeen nai karta...
Wo do saal sey ziyada nai jee paye ga...
Uska koe nai hai...
Usky bahi ny uski girlfriend sey shadi kar li..

she was not able to understand her feelings.she hates him or feels bad for him...it was true for her every small things happen matters a lot...about samrat she had listened a lot from dia n arnav frequently...she used to be feel bad whenever thinks that he is alone..but when she recalls that he drinks n doesnot belive in friendship n love...she feels lyk she hates him most in the world...in her wrold...these two things were very important n had a great impact..obviously her father was a drunker thatswhy their mother faced hard tyms n she hates this fact...and with arnav she never feels she is alone...two years ago when he had confessed she hadnt belive him...but frquently she belives as he takes great care of her...used to paln small surprises...her sister s attention...all that her lyf was beautiful whenever she thinks about samrat she feels fear how he used to live alone?? n after meeting she was more scared of him as his eyes...she was scared of his eyes...it has different glow,...starange brightness...something really differnt...she had seen a lots of eyes but never seen that "difference" in look as he used to look at her with ...
Gunjan came out of thoughts as her cell rang.. arnav.. A smile came. She acepts it wiping her tearz..
Gunjan:hi
Arnav: hi pari kasi ho ?
Gunjan:tm kasy ho ? tm a gaye wapis arnav ? Mjhy tmsy milna hai...
Arnav: gunjan i m fine. Han a gya hon. Diner tmhary ghar he karo ga ok.
Gunjan: thanks.
Arnav: tum university nai ja rahe ?
Gunjan: bus tyar honey lagi the.
Arnav: jaldi karo tmhari bus nikal jaye ge.
Gunjan: ok ok bye.
Arnav: bye take care.
Gunjan smiles and went to change.
Samrat was in his room having his coffee when lavanaya told about arival of arnav...and samrat asked to sent him in his room..arnav came n meet him warmly.
Arnav: kasey hain sir ap ?
Samrat: I am absolutely fine Arnav...
Both smiles and just then arnav get glance of Gunjan s Pic on wall. He was shocked and Surprised...Samrat followed his gaze..n them smiles..
Samrat: She is beautiful indeed..her smile...her eyes..her shyness...
Arnav: kon hai yeh ?
Samrat: merey lea tou chashmish.. meri chashmish... I love her.
Arnav: ap kbhe is sey miley hain ?
Samrat: han do dafa.. Pheli dafa dekh k to hiran reh gya...yaken ni aya k wo tasver hai ya kudh .. Par jab dosri baar uski godh mein sar rakha...usny mjhy touch kiya...uskey ansu.. Sach jano...USNEY MUJHEY PHIR SEY ZINDA KAR DIYA..MJHEY NAE ZINDAGI DI HAI US NEY...
Arnav: kiya ap jantey hain usey ?
Samrat: nai .. Par jb bhe woh mjhy mili mein usko phr janey ni don ga khaein...
His thoughts discrated as his cell rang. It was from nupur and samrat get pretty scold from her with a congratulation on exsistence of his chashmish..he blushed..arnav left...
Dia came back from Job..dia n gunjan enjyed Tea..
Dia: gunjan
Gunjan: han di
Dia: aj arnav ni aye ga.
Gunjan: kiya? Kuin di ?
Dia: wo mjhy tmhy kuch batana hai.
Gunjan: kiya di? Tm asey kuin bol rahe ho. Batao na..
Dia: wo gunjan plz shant ho k suni..
Gunjan: bolo di..
Dia: samrat hai na...wo aik tasveer sy pyar karta hai.. Mera matlb aik ladki ka potrait usey bday gift mila tha..usey us sey pyar ho giya.. Wo us ladki ko dhond raha hai.
Gunjan: kon hai wo ladki?
Her sixth sense were alarming her. Her heartbeat raised fast...
Dia: tum.. Gunjan Samrat tum sey pyaar karta hai.
gunjan didnot belive...she felt the fear more to occupy her mind...she loves arnav...n arnav loves her...then how can anyone say that he loves herrr?????//how can she bear it?????
Gunjan:SHUT UP DIII..I HATE HIM..USEY KOI HAQ NAI POHANCHTA MJHSEY PYAAR KARNEY KA...
Dia: gunjan...plz relax..calm down Jaan..
Gunjan: di...
Gunjan didnt take it more and hugged her..just then she remind of arnav..
Gunjan: di..arnav? Usko pata hai kiya ?
Dia: han..usi ny dekhi tmhari tasever uskey bedroom.
Gunjan: kiya? Di wo mjsey gusa to nai hai na?
Dia: pagal ho gunjan nai..wo kuin hoga gusa?
Gunjan: di mein us sey milney jao..pls..
Dia: par..
Gunjan: plz di plz..
Dia: tekh hai jao.
Gunjan: thank u di..
Gunjan wiped her tearz..
In nxt 20 minz she was in his flat huging her and sobbing...
Gunjan: i am sory arnav..
Arnav: hey pari plz stop crying.
Gunjan: i am realy sory arnav
Arnav: pari its not your fault..plz stop crying for me.
Gunjan: tm mjhsy naraz to ni ?
Arnav:bikul nai gunjan,now just forget it and tel me diner kiya ?
She shaked head.
Gunjan: nai
Arnav: pari tm bhe na.. Mein oder karta hon kuch khaney k lea..
Gunjan: nai. Mein kuch banati hon
Arnav: par
Gunjan:pls
Arnav: ok as u wish.
Both smiles. They did diner together...and then arnav leave her home...
As Gunjan lyed in bed she remembered..
GUNJAN SAMRAT TMSEY PYAAR KARTA HAI.
Gunjan cried hiding her face in pillow...just then dia came in and seing her crying. She make her calm down.
Dia: gunjan tm kham kha mein ro rahe ho. Usey to pata bhe ni hai k tmhara nam kiya hai? Tm khahn ho? Tm bhe na kham kha mein itna dar rahe ho.
Listening it Gunjan was bit normal...
Gunjan: di arnav mjsey...
Dia: nai ho ga... Chalo ab so jao tum...
Gunjan lyed down again. Dia left room. Gunjan just kept on turning remembering moments with Samrat...y he was leaving impact on her so much ? It was beyond her understanding...
Another sleepless night passed...
Sheena and rohan was sleeping..when door knocked. Rohan get up.and servant informed him the arival of INSPECTOR MR. BENJIMEN SWAMI...another new entry...postive or negative..let wait a bit to know...
Precape:
5 lakhs deal...

Sheena slaped dia...

Samrat came to knw about gunjan...n wished to meet her...

thanks gals for ur support n aprreciation thank u so much..sory no sajan..it wil take a bit tym pls...but when i wl show sajan then i wil make sure that other then sajan there wil be nothing...
love
meri
Edited by mars14 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh Meriii🤗 Its so nice to read ur update everyday...& love the way story is going...SHEENA ...😡 oh I hate her...She is the one behind all this..Poor Rohan..😛..Samrat's & Arnav's conversation was really nice & straight forward...Gunjan came to kow abt Sammy's love...😍 Can't wait to see SaJan romance..Gunjan is so sensitive..😛 Dia is really a good Sister to her...Hope Arnav turn's negative..Precap was interesting...Benji's entry...WOW!!!Sheena slaps Diya...😲Can't wait to read it...😃
Edited by Anjali_12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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tht was soo nice part
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi...very nice update meri..i lov ur part..
love tia

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Posted: 14 years ago
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marvelous update...hopefully benji is a positive character cause its hard to imagine benji negative...cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow superb part i really hate this sheena and sam and arnav conversation was good and gunjan got to know about samrat love .cont soon and thanks for pm

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