MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 35

Originally posted by: mechantefille

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But was this it? The limit where he stepped back and let her cover the rest of the journey alone? His heart wanted to believe that there was more to it.

Yes, my heart believes there's more too. 😳

The pull is there - And his reply instill's confidence in her.. WOw that is so touching. I loved that bit, Jazz.

Nothing feels as good as to know that there is a person who cares about what you care about.

She would complete him in many ways he could perceive. But would it be fair to drag her into the murky waters of his existence, when she has such colorful pallete of desires? It's not his place to do so, for he needs to better his existence. A place that is worthy of her. She wants to experience life on her own terms. And he would not be selfish to stand in her way.

i LOVED THAT BIT!!

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Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

😊😊 Okay.. so everything i wanted to say... has already been well and truly said... and articulated brilliantly by others... so i wont dwell too much on those other points i had

This chapter caught us all at an opportune time... ripe for a soulful, intense, poignant (i think i must have used this word a couple of hundred times since yesterday 😆😆) love courtesy the episode yesterday... this has connected at an even deeper level...

I feel this is my fav chapter to date...and not just because of the episdoe yesterday... because it just took their relationship to the next level

I loved his letter to her... it was beauitful in its earnestness, simplicity and the laying bare of his soul... while she is the one comfortable with words, it was his words that caught my imagination today...

A kindred spirit, another lonesome soul,

Why do i feel you make me whole?

You call out to me at a level so deep,

That i feel my heart is yours to keep.

I yearn for you as i have never before,

That i thirst for 'us' forever more.

But the shadows call and i fear to reveal,

So a moment here, i try to steal.

Till you're prepared to look beyond your dream,

I must remain an unknown stream.

One that flows with you all along,

Moistening your dreams with a reassuring song

🤢🤢.. i tried capturing the feelings that Maaneet evoked... didnt really come out well...

But let this not be a reflection of my feeling for the poetry i saw in yours... it far surpassed this...

Well done Chhote👏👏 🤗🤗

Oh and thank you for the note at the beginning.,.. since Simz is not here edging me out, i will only 'take the trophy' on her behalf too... 😆😆

Love

Ustaad

Originally posted by: hamini_yash

hi are you updating?

Originally posted by: jazzerette

Ustaad...item aapki...toh trophy bhi aapki😆

The poem! Right...it didn't come out well🤔. It came out AWESOME!!!!

Eee!!! That was one awesome poem Ustaad!! Shika wrote a beautiful piece on behalf of Geet and you summed up Maan so well!!!

I feel like deleting the update and replace it your poem and the Walt Whitman one. Short, crisp, precise and profound!!

Thank you for not only commenting, but also giving me such beautiful meanings, moments, memories.🤗🤗

Originally posted by: TomJerryTom

Hello Deej!!! u can't edge me out 😡

Jazz thank you sorry i missed out the first line 😳

Originally posted by: jazzerette[/QUOTE

Koi na...but Ustaad took the trophy away. You will have to run after her😆

Originally posted by: TomJerryTom

no ways!!! i'm getting it...now that i'm latest item i get all the trophies 😉