FF ~::I see right through you::~ (Thread:1)

Mrs.ZSK thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#1

When two people both rich and with huge attitudes come face-to-face than was is there to expect? Two people who think there names is enough for people to bow down to them, that keep encountering each other through fate, let alone fighting is nothing else you can expect from them. And their names are " Geet Handa" and " Maan Singh Khurana" although there is more than meets the eye. Geet Handa who may seem as very simple and innocent is not really so or is she? She doesn't believe in love and has a past that has influenced the person she is now. Maan Singh Khurana doesn't believe in love either, but once it happens he can't run away from it and neither can Geet. Join the fun journey of these two similar and yet different people and see what fate has in store?
Geet Handa- 22 years old

VS.

She is a rich and spoiled girl that attends college. She could kill the world with her beauty . She is completely breathtaking. She has a past, which has influenced the girl she is today. Her life consists of only having fun! Be it partying, drinking, or having one-night stands. She doesn't believe in love, but is with a different guy like every week. She has a step-mother who she could care less about, because she believes nobody could take the place of her mother Rani! Ever! She keeps a pretense of being a simple and innocent girl infront of her family wearing salwar kamizes and such, but in other places she is completely westernized. If you mess with her than get ready to handle her attitude. She will not go down without a fight.


Her group of Best friends consist of Meera, Pinky, Adi, Dev Khurana, and Vicky Khurana. They are closer to her than her own family. People she really cares about, but they don't know how her one-night stands. They do know she likes to party, drink, and spend time with guys, but don't know anything more than that.
Maan Singh Khurana-26 years old


He is also a rich guy with a big attitude. He has a very high and respectable name in society. which adds to his ego. He never completed finished college and got his MBA degree, only a semester was left. He had to leave his studies for personal reasons. He does not believe in love, which eventually starts to change when he meets Geet. He has never been with a girl before or has ever touched one. Nobody had ever caught his attention for that matter until he meets Geet. Although in the beginning their relationship is rough, nothing but fighting.
He is Dev Khurana and Vicky Khurana's older brother.
His family consists of his Father: Yash Singh Khurana
mother: Naina Singh Khurana
and Grandmother: Daadima





Part: 1
Unforgettable Encounter


Again Geet was rushing through breakfast. She started mumbling to herself, " stupid alarm didn't even wake me up, and now I am going to be late for college again".
Mohinderlal saw her only child and daughter rushing through breakfast again. He loved her a lot and was smiling at her antics.
Mohinderlal: Geet did you stay up studying last night again.
Geet thinking to herself, " Yeah right! Geet and studying . . . of course studying boys" she mentally smirked.
Geet: Of course Daddy. I was with Pinky and we studied like all night. That is why I came late. I hope you are not mad at me Daddy.
She makes a little puppy face. Even though she was 22 she was still daddy's little girl according to her dad and so she used that to her advantage.
Mohinderlal: Of course! It is not like you were hanging out with boys at the disco like other girls these days.
Geet: of course not! chi chi chi! Can you imagine me wearing short dresses or mini skirts and dancing with boys' daddy?
Mohinderlal: That is why I love you so much! You have not lost yourself. Your simplicity is your most alluring aspect.
She rolls her eyes, but her dad didn't see it. . . Thank God! She kisses her dad good-bye.
" Okay dad I am getting late so I will see you later" she says as she rushes out.
Her stepmother Pammi also says, " bye beta".
She doesn't even turn around to reply. Never saw her as her mother, because she would never allow her to take her mother Rani's place . . . Ever!
Mohinderlal: Okay come home soon I need to talk to you about something important.
Geet barely heard what he said but yelled out "Okay!" She felt like suffocating in there. It was sad but she could never be herself in her very home . . . around her family. They would never understand, so she held this pretense.

Savetri Devi was waiting patiently at the breakfast table for her stubborn grandson to wake up. Everyone was present Yash Singh Khurana his father, Naina Singh Khurana, his mother, and even Dev and Vicky Singh Khurana his two younger brothers. She had some important news to discuss with him and he still was not here yet.
Finally the sounds of footsteps came and as he descended down the stairs so did this handsome man in a black business suit, which defined his muscular body in such a way that knocked the breath out of millions of girls. His face was flawless and had the face of a Greek God. His stubble gave him his manly tough business tycoon look, but his perfect "M" shaped lips just made your heart flutter uncontrollably making the way in for mischievous thoughts amongst many girls.
Before Daadima could say anything he retorted in such a stern voice " I can't eat breakfast today. I am late for a meeting" a voice filled with so much attitude and authority that the whole world could bow down too.
Daadima: Theek hai Mr. Maan Singh Khurana come home early tonight I need to discuss something important with you.
"Hmmm" he simply said and walked out.
"Oh my God . . . Vicky lets go we are late for college" Dev blurted out dragging Vicky who was drinking out of his coffee.
" Okay gosh I am coming no need to pull" Vicky retorted back.
"Vesebi I know you are not in such a rush to go to school as much as you are to see your girl" Vicky whispered and teased inside Dev's ear.
Dev: Shut up!
Vicky: oh sorry I meant you wish she were your girl!

Geet parked her red BMW convertible across the road from the coffee shop she came to almost everyday. Everyone knew her here. She would come in as one person and leave out as another. As she was about to cross the road a black Mercedes Benz came with amazing speed and braked suddenly at the red light splashing muddy water all over Geet.
Geet gasped in shock as her salwar kamiz was covered in muddy water. The person that she was how dare someone act like this with her?
She starts banging on the car window, but she received no response. Geet was not going stop either until she got an answer. The man inside " Who is it early in the morning bothering me?"
Driver: From the looks of it just looks like some random women in a dirty outfit trying to get your attention sir.
Man: Just ignore her.
Geet: So you want to play like this. I will show whom you are messing with . . . warna meri naam Geet Handa nahi hai!
Geet quickly goes and opens the trunk of her car and gets her pencil thin high heels out and barges in front of the car and breaks one of the headlights with her high heel shoe, giving an evil smirk to the driver.
The man in the car, "what the heck was that!"
Driver: Sahab the crazy girl just bashed the car's headlight.
The man, " Kyaaa!"
He barges out of the car and collides into something so warm and soft that sent electric currents down his body. He catches her before she could fall and they stood like that for a couple of seconds. Even though she had some mud on her face and clothes there was something about this girl that caught his attention.
Geet releases herself from his hold and stands up.
" What are you staring at . . . how you messed up my clothes?" she blurted out.
" I am staring at you so I could get a good glimpse of you and report every feature of your face to the police for breaking my headlight".
" Acha? Let me know something this is a very expensive car you have hear so you must have insurance as well right?
" Yeah I do but what does that have anything to do with this?"
" I will show you" she says as she goes and smashes the other headlight as well with her high heel.
" Heyyy!" he screams.
" Do you know who you are messing with? I am MSK! You smashed Maan Singh Khurana's headlights".
Geet: No I believe the question is do you know who you are messing with?
" This is what you get for messing up my clothes. Next time think twice before messing with Geet Handa" Geet says as she points her pencil high heel shoe at him causing Maan to back up a little against the car. She straightens her dupatta and twitches her nose a little before turning around and leaving.
Right when he went to go after her cars started to whiz by and when they finally moved out of the way it was like she had disappeared into thin air. For the first time some girl stood up to him like that. What was about this girl, her attitude, her feisty nature, or her beauty that blew Maan away? He didn't even know what it was, but it was sure a blow to his ego. " Kya pagal larki ti!"
Geet goes inside the coffee shop gets her keys out and goes inside her room, which was more like a walk-in closet. She had rented out this room from the coffee shop owner, which was supposed to be a lunchroom for the staff, but geet had rented it out for her personal use and demolished the lunchroom and made it into her closet.
She washes her face first trying to get all the mud off her as she looks at herself in the mirror a flashback of what she recently did played back in her head. She didn't even know why she reacted to such an extent for a salwar kamiz she could of careless about. She didn't know why by just seeing that MSK's face her blood boiled with anger for which she acted like that. What did he think of himself?
She brushes it aside and came to the conclusion that she did the right thing! She changes into a one shoulder top, mini skirt, and high heels. She gets rid of her one-sided braided hair and lets her hair fall open. She applies some lip-gloss and blows a kiss into a mirror and says, " Now this is the real Geet Handa".


PRE-CAP:

Glimpse of Geet's friends and life in college.



Hit the like button if you liked the udpate . . . 😳

Next Update~A little Intrigued

Note: I am getting some concerns from a few people, which don't like the fact of geet having one night stands and being portrayed as such. so i want to know if this is the concern of many of you than i guess i could revise it, but honestly i don't know than if i would be able to continue? Geet has a past for which she is the person that she is now and the title "i see right through you" is Maan's point of view of Geet.


If you want to be pmed add me in your buddylist!

You can check out my other FF's at ~*~*~*~ Zeynab's Writing Corner ~*~*~*~
Please check it out and share your thoughts.😳


INDEX

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

974

Views

132.8k

Users

142

Likes

2.7k

Frequent Posters

..shreyaa.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#2
yay me first
First of all Congratulation for the new FF zee
and all the best..m sure you will rock it
Omg omg..as i said before..Awesome concept!
Ahh I can totally see where this is heading..and Shreya cant waits to read more..
love the totally different side of Geet..im just waiting to read more..what is gonna happen next..its lingering around my head..all i can say is Shreya just goes crazy over this concept🤪
love the encounter of maaneet
continue soonnn
me cant waitt.uff
badi na insafi hai ye😆
luv ya .thank you so much
Love
Shreya

Edited by maangeetcrazy - 14 years ago
..shreyaa.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
#3
edited my comment Zee😳
khwaishfan thumbnail
Visit Streak 1000 Thumbnail Visit Streak 750 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 14 years ago
#4

Hi...Congrats on the new FF! Sounds intersting...just read character sketch n part one, update soon n include me in ur pm list! Btw u no pm? Will wait lol

Craziest_MG thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#5
New ff...congrats...
Sounds interesting...
Oh this Geet is really something...

Updt soon.
Sabmeratu. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#6
Congrat on the new FF
Love the concept
Wow gr8 start
Can't wait for ther love story
Cont soon Xx...
namita25 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago
#7
congo for the new FF dear...

n plz add me in.
375400 thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#8
awesome start dear
amazing
thanx for d pm
loved it

Love
Deepa
-bansi- thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#9
Awesome..!!!
Loved the start...!!
Looking forward to the next parts...!!!
update sooonn..!!
abinash079 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 14 years ago
#10
awesome ff so in other words geet is a prostitute who doesnt take money after spending nights with different male i didnt like it if geet is like this why dont u make maan also like this as i dont want maan to touch such a low girls who spends every night with different boys and moreove u mentioned that maan has not touch a single women i seriously dont like this idea of one night stand she can be grey like breaking hearts but one night stand is not acceptable plz reconsider it if u can

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: zajedno

5 months ago

When is the right time???

Everything happens at the right time, but we can't always recognize that right time. Don't wait for the perfect moment, because the perfect...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".