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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


what happen shreya khan jana hai kya oh yes shopping jana hai



LOL not clothes shopping yaar🤣
uff got to go to buy some groceries😡😡

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Posted: 13 years ago


Part: 9

Marriage on the cards?

Rano: He has already found the key Geet and he will open you. He will see right through you.
"Tell me who? I will. . ." she says turning around, but then stops midway seeing her mom was not there anymore.
". . .not let him" she whispers the rest of what she was about to say.
Right then she gets a knock at her door.



At the front of her door stood her father and stepmother.
" Let's go Geet," he says walking away to the car.
Paami: You look completely stunning. Hope no evil eye falls on you.
" Just save it" giving a disgusting look and passing by her heading out of the house.
It used to hurt Paami a lot dealing with her snide remarks, but by now she was used to it. She just felt sorry and worried for Geet.
They enter the hotel reception hall and it was decorated magnificently, not one detail was left out.

" So he is one of those big shot guys" she scoffs and rolls her eyes.
Geet's father motions her to head over to the left direction where a man and woman in their forties stood with an elderly woman beside them.
Geet says, "Namaste" and bends down and touches the elderly women's feet.
"Jeete raho" she says to her.
Geet starts to feel a little conscious as none of their eyes moved from hers. She fidgeted a little trying to see if anything was on her.
The women noticed and said, " You are very pretty I know my son will lose himself in you".
Geet faintly smiles, but in reality she wanted to run away and give this guy a piece of her mind.
The man speaks up, " As usual our son is late, probably still at work. Doesn't he know this is a business function as well".
Paami: Maybe he is nervous.
" Yeah maybe" the elderly woman says hesitantly.
" So Geet I know this might be to early to ask but I can't control myself. Are you happy about this relation?
Geet was about to tell the truth, but she was cut short and interrupted.
Mohinderlaal: Of course she is. She has already accepted and is all for this alliance. From the looks of it I don't think any girl would refuse the Maan Singh Khurana.
"Thud. . . *****. . . Thud THud" Geet's heart skipped a beat! Her world came crashing down in just a blink of an eye. Maan singh Khurana??? He wanted to marry her! And when did she ACCEPT this alliance her father was talking about????
She looked at her father with eyes full of questions and a little pain for him doing this to her.
" I trusted you Geet, but you broke that trust. I have changed my mind you will get married it is no longer your choice anymore" her father whispered lowly only for her to be able to hear.
The elderly woman, "Here he comes now".
Geet's body went numb after hearing her father's words. A particular part ripping her sole the most " you will get married it's no longer your choice anymore"
Her father gives her the notion to turn around. She silently does and that is when his eyes catch hers.
Geet couldn't deny that he was looking exceptionally handsome in his black Armani suit, but at the moment as her mind was occupied with something else. As he descends down the stairs Maan had to suck in his breathe seeing Geet in a white saree. He didn't know why she was here, but he was not protesting for the first time he was excited in a party after seeing her here. He just let himself absorb all of her beauty as much as he could.
" Excuse me I need to go to the washroom" before anyone could say anything she made a dash for it, her pallu sliding against his face intoxicating Maan with her mouthwatering scent. Maan turns around totally captivated and lost in her as he watched her retreating body.
Mohinderlaal: I am sorry about that.
" For what? She is feeling nervous and she used the excuse of going to the washroom" Daadi said with a smile and hint of happiness and glisten in her eyes. She could tell both were affected by each other.
Maan snaps out of his trance and notices that she has left. . . but where? Forgetting that this was a business party and that he was supposed to meet the girl that his family chose for him he just went and followed his pagli who looked so sexy tonight.
Naina: So what if she has left, Maan will not let her run away so easily.
Everyone laughs.
Yash: I can't believe there is finally a girl in this world that is making Maan run after her? Is that even my son? I mean who knew a girl could ever have such an effect on Maan.
Everyone laughs again.
Yash: I don't know why I am even asking, Geet has some certain jadoo that captivates everyone into liking her instantly. I am really happy for this alliance.
Geet's parents smile and agree with him.


As Geet reaches the bathroom she holds the marble sink counter for support. Ripples of cold shock continued to run through her body. It chilled her to the bone. Her friends, more like his brothers set her up. . . set Geet Handa up? His words " Jawab doh pagli. . . are we together" echoed through her ears.
Geet: What did they think that I would never find out? that I wouldn't mind because I would have already fallen in love with Maan.
But she was confused didn't Dev like her? I guess he got the message and moved on Geet thought. Like she gave a crap anymore she couldn't believe she called him her best friend. Without asking her he set his brother up with her who according to her father she can't even refuse the guy anymore. Theek hai she thought.

Slowly the anger started to disappear and got replaced by a wicked smile.
"ufff wrong girl guys . . . wrong girl!" she laughs a laugh filled with evil intentions.
Geet: Time to have some fun Geet, and DARE you hold yourself back after all they are the one who has invited you to play!
She gathers herself together and steps out of the bathroom right into a hard, but warm muscular form. She waited to hit the ground, but instead two pair of muscular arms grabbed her by her exposed waist driving his sensuous long fingers protectively around her navel.
Geet: Maan you can let go of me now I am standing.
Maan: uhhh ohh.
He says about to let her go, but then entraps his fingers around her navel again causing her to come closer this time lips millimeters away. For some reason for both the room seemed to be getting hotter. If only they knew. . .
" What if I don't want to let you go pagli? What if I want you by my side forever? What if I want to make you mine forever?", he whispers slowly and huskily.
He waited to hear her response. Geet just looked at him not letting her face show any emotion, making it hard for him to read what she may be feeling. He couldn't take the suspense any longer.
Maan: I have fallen in love with you pagli!
Geet let's go and turns around. Rejection started coursing through his blood for the first time as she turned her body around . . . away from him.
Geet turns back around, " It took you a while," she says smiling and pushing him up against the wall.
Shock and happiness ran through his veins as Geet entrapped him. . . the Maan Singh Khurana against the wall. But he was willing to always be held captive within her hold as long as she was only his and that too forever.
Geet: Tell you what let's ditch this boring party of yours and why don't you meet me in about two hours.
Maan: Your wish is my command. But where to jaan?
"jaan" Geet says raising one eyebrow.
"me like" she says seductively running her hand along his face.
"Pagli" maan almost moans out.
Geet: hmmm
" You are making it awfully hard for me to control myself" he whispers in his sexy voice.
" Who is asking you to control?" she replies with a mischievous tone.
Maan was taken aback at her boldness. A smirk creeps onto his lips.
Maan: oh really jaan? On marriage night I will surely test this himmat of yours.
"Are you sure you can wait that long" Geet whispers leaving him and stepping backwards.
Maan quickly grabs her arm and pulls her, Geet twirling back into his arm.
" Kya hua? I thought you said you can wait maan," she said chuckling.
Maan: I like this naughty side of yours . . . I didn't know you had it in you.
Geet to herself: You haven't seen anything yet Maan. I am going to show you what it means to come to close to me!
Geet: Okay stop it now. Someone will come.
Maan: Scared already? Where did all your himmat go pagli?
Geet: Maan I am serious someone will see. Just come to XYZ address okay. I will be waiting for you there.
Maan: But what is this address?
Geet: It is a surprise and don't dare to be late! Be there sharp at 11:00 p.m.
Maan: I can't wait that long.
Geet slowly walks up to him and plants her luscious lips onto his cheek, arousing him with desire.
" See you there" leaving a dazzled Maan to fend for himself.
Geet had an evil smile on her face as she walks away: Ufff I am just too good!
Pre-cap:
or more like a promo 😆:

He was confused why would Geet tell him to come here. Why would she want to meet him here? She didn't look like the type at all maybe he came to the wrong address.

He is about to turn around when slowly the lights turn off and the atmosphere gets masked with darkness. The spot lights falls on her and the music starts to play. She starts to sway with the music and the crowd roars with cheers. She was angry and hurt so she was gonna let herself loose tonight and that is when she grabs the microphone.

She knew he was watching.



Hit the like button i want to get 200 likes come on guyszzz how desperately u want the next update.😉

P.S I want to open a new thread so comment and spam away 🤣


Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wohooo
I am first


ahh zee

geet Missunderstood maan
that her friends has set her up
i would hate her if she hurt my maan
i kind of think that maan would be in
so much pain that for the
first time he opened his heart to someone
and she just destroyed it
seems like in that place geet would
show maan her true self
i would not be able to see my maan in pain😭
but would wait for the next part


i feel soo damn i cant wait
ahhh me going crazy

i kinda feel geet's secret will be out to maan

Hope jo bhi ho aacha ho😆
Continue soon ZEE🤗

This was absolutely awesome updatee




Edited by abinash079 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am hereee
and yay i am second everyone
🤣


omggg zee..
what an update
hailaa
i am going crazy

uff this geet na..she is gonna hurt my maan so much😭
she misunderstood maan
and this family..uff
they are happy
but geet is gonna do something gadbad or sure
omg omg
but i love the maaneet talk
IT WAS

🤣
They are already talking abt their SR☺️
Okay i have gone crazy

🤣
uff i wont be able to see maan's face after hecomes to know abt geet
but he might change his pagli
who knows😳

the precap is scary
maan i am with you dont worry
🤣

Dhunki u better not make it sad otherwise i will cry badly😆
awesom
e update yaar
love it

mwahh continue soon
i got to go again
haha

😆








Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy



LOL not clothes shopping yaar🤣
uff got to go to buy some groceries😡😡


haila u have also became like GEET of show she is also having no cloths that's why wearing same tents😡🤣

going to buy groceries with mummy or alone

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Posted: 13 years ago
Zee comon ur time up get up and click enter to the update post it we cant wait yaar😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
Most awaited epi plaing game loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maangeetcrazy

abi ur first again..🤣
thanks a lot zee..you did it on time
i love ya dhunkii

and abi and maaneet bye guys
i will edit this later
mwahh enjoyy


abi has some luck 😆!!!
luv u too chamak chalo 😳
i hurried as fast as i could!
I know u will enjoy it 😉 😆

will be waiting for u luvly comment!
Muahhh!
Luv u jaan! take care!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

Zee comon ur time up get up and click enter to the update post it we cant wait yaar😡


haila i posted it dear 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow zee i loved the post atlast u gave it k but u said maan is very cute in thisFF so plz dont depress our maan that much

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