FF ~::I see right through you::~ (Thread:1) - Page 2

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Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome ff so in other words geet is a prostitute who doesnt take money after spending nights with different male i didnt like it if geet is like this why dont u make maan also like this as i dont want maan to touch such a low girls who spends every night with different boys and moreove u mentioned that maan has not touch a single women i seriously dont like this idea of one night stand she can be grey like breaking hearts but one night stand is not acceptable plz reconsider it if u can

Originally posted by: zeynab111

i understand where you are coming from...but geet has a past in which she is like this and as for maan he will eventually come to know the truth and what he does about it you have to read and find out! I

This is a very twisted love story, which the fact of Geet sleeping with other men is needed. I know it is hard to digest the fact of Geet being like this, but it is really needed for this FF.

k if u want to keep it like that then make maan also like that by sleeping with different girls everyday then i can be at little peace and at a time how could u handle 3 ff and moreover u r not very much regular keep this in halt and finish ur previos ss or ff then continue with this else everything would suffer dear plz take this into consideration

nice concept..
like it soo much..
cont. soon..
thanx 4 d pm..

Originally posted by: abinash079

k if u want to keep it like that then make maan also like that by sleeping with different girls everyday then i can be at little peace and at a time how could u handle 3 ff and moreover u r not very much regular keep this in halt and finish ur previos ss or ff then continue with this else everything would suffer dear plz take this into consideration

Originally posted by: zeynab111

You know the title " i see right through you" is maan's point of view at Geet. Maan needs to be the good one. I will add a note on my character sketch and if i feel like a lot of people have a problem with this then i will see what i can do. ALthough idk if i would be able to continue?

I am sorry for not being regular but it is not easy. You have to plan and such way beforehand and then sometimes when u write you don't like it and you start over. Before i was an FF writer i didn't understand the fact of how much time it takes...but now that i do every free time that i get i am writing.

And i don't think i am the only one who is not regular?. Those who are, are probably very talented writers. English and writing are not my strong point at all so it takes me a longer time. Please i would really appreciate it if you could bare with me.

You are a very loyal reader of my Fanfics and i don't want to make you upset or anything.

dear i m not upset with u but i m little worried as it would be really tedious job for u to maintain 3 ff's so to lower ur burden why not first end ur SS which is comparatively small of around 25-30 parts then u can concentrate on other 2 ff's

Congrats on d new FF