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Posted: 13 years ago


Part: 6

A little brotherly help


Everybody's mouths fell open at Daadi's statement. Naina had to cover her mouth from giggling. Yash just shook his head at his mother not being able to fathom what she said that. Dev had to hold Vicky's mouth or else he would of dropped dead on the floor laughing. They both heard everything from behind the corner. They were mischievously eaves dropping on the whole conversation.
Maan: DAADI!
Daadi: Yelling and showing your anger is not going to change anything beta.
Theek hai I will give you two choices, either you let us meet the girl that you have fallen in love with or you agree to at least meet the girl we have chosen for you?
" Fine. I will meet the girl you have chosen for me", he says and then leaving all them, actually more like running away from the situation.
Yash: I can't believe I have such a cunning mother like you.
Daadi: He is no different from you! I had to get my experience from somewhere.
Naina starts to chuckle. Yash just gives her a look, shutting her up and then leaves toward his room.
Daadi: Both father and son always escape from the situation.
Naina starts to laugh again.
Daadi: Naina jao uska paas. Only you will be able to get him to cheer up.
Naina to herself: God knows what I am going to have to do now.
Daadi just smiles at her crazy but loving family. She thinks to herself: I know I am not wrong. Maan has fallen in love".
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Like always he was in here, away from everyone. Whenever he was hiding something or some issue was bothering him, instead of sharing it with anyone he would come here and vent out his frustration. He even had a bed, desk, window and clothes up here. The only thing was missing was a bathroom.
A part of him just didn't know why he was so angry. He had never felt these feelings before for any girl. No girl has ever made him go weak on his knees with their beauty. If he could he would just sit their and admire her beauty all day. He throws a punch in the air as her image pops inside his head.
No girl's touch has ever sent his body ablaze. He never has craved for more. . . for more of her body heat against his. He does a kick in the air as he almost relives in the moment their lips touched.
No girl has ever had the nerve to talk back at him the way she has. She answers back with all her feistiness and insolence. He couldn't help but smile at her cute and angry expression especially those dagger-shooting eyes. With one karate chop he breaks the table as the memory of her glaring at him as she pointed her pencil high heel shoe at him causing him to back up a little against the car.
Maan just continued to due his intense tai chi until he was covered all in sweat. He stops when he notices both his younger brothers snacking on some ice cream and watching him as if he was some hero in a movie.

" kya baat hai? Maan bhaiya in the attic???" Vicky says gasping and looking shocked.
Dev:hmmm . . . he must be hiding something just like he used to when he was a kid and would run up here away from everybody.
Maan: Guys I am so not in the mood right now. What the hell are you guys doing up this late anyways?
Dev: Bro don't you know you can't hide anything from us. We knew you would be in here like always.
Vicky: Especially when it is a pyaar mamla . . . who better to confide than me?
Maan: The ice cream has seriously gotten to your head! Me and pyaar? You guys have totally lost it.
"If that is so . . . were you late because you were fighting against a werewolf " dev says bringing the mirror out and showing all the scratches and nail marks along his arms.
" or did you fight against a vampire who wanted to suck your blood" Vicky says taking the mirror and showing the lipstick mark on the side of his neck trying really hard not to laugh.
Maan takes the mirror throwing it to the side, the pieces shattering everywhere.
Dev:Itna gussa? kyun?
Vicky: Dev tumbhi na . . . aur toh kya. . . bro ko pyaar hua hai. For the first time someone else has taken control over the GREAT Maan Singh Khurana's senses, his thoughts, his heartbeat.
" Baqwas band karo! Just shut up and leave! LEAVE!" Maan screams at his brothers holding on to the wall for support and looking out the window. Maan didn't need for someone else to point everything right at his face. He was in enough dilemma already.
Both Dev and Vicky look at each other and then approach their big bro from behind.
Dev: Jokes aside bro there is no need to be scared of love. It is really a beautiful thing. Love gives your life a new meaning to wake up in the morning. You feel your life so much more complete. It is true that once you give her your heart she will be the one in control. If she is not there with you it is as if you can't breathe or sleep, but when she is it is as if time stands still with her as well bro. Do not hesitate in making her yours before it's too late and you lose her forever.
" Yeh lo! Who is giving who advice about not hesitating? Dev why don't you take your own advice sometime? You are so hopeless man!" Vicky says laughing.
Hearing Dev's words Maan's anger slowly starts to fade away as he realizes he is making a big deal out of nothing. He even smiles at Vicky's comment.
Maan: Dev you have also fallen in love?
Dev and Vicky at the same time: Also? So you are accepting that you have fallen in love?
Maan just looks the other way trying hard not to smile. He replies with a " Hmmm".
Dev and Vicky give each other a high five and scream, "ohhh hoyeee" and hug each other.
Maan just shakes his head. He had two crazy brothers, but he loved them to death.
Maan: But dare you both make a big deal of it.
Vicky goes and grabs the carton of ice cream and gets a spoonful to Dev. "Here kuch mithaye khalo".
Then Dev gives a spoonful of ice cream to Dev. Vicky raises his eyebrow and sort of gives a node toward Maan's direction.
Maan sensing the mischief in their eyes says, " oh no. Look how hot this body is. I do not want to become fat like you guys. At least one of the Khurana brothers has to have a sexy body".
Dev: He did not just call us fat did he Vicky?
Vicky: oh yes he did.
Maan starts to run screaming at the same time, " remember I am your Big Brother Maan Singh Khurana. You don't want to make me mad".
Dev: Don't let him get away Vicky. I will hold him you stuff him.
Vicky: Your threats won't work on us anymore bro. You are changing! YOU ARE IN LOVE BRO. IN LOVE! And I am going to make sure I sweeten your mouth if it is the last thing I do.
Maan grabs the pillow from the bed and starts to throw it at them. He ran and ran for his life all around the attic, but then his brothers' corner him and slam him down.
Maan: Okay I surrender.
Dev: Oh no we are not letting you escape that easily Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. You called us fat! yeh lo!
They stuff his mouth with all the ice cream.
Vicky: Bro your face is burning up red, stop blushing thinking about Bhaabi. Let me help you to cool down"he says putting ice cream all over his face.
Maan's eyes popped out in anger.
Vicky looks at Dev and they both scream, "RUNNN!"
Hit the like button if you liked the update and do comment 😳

Pre-cap:

Maan finally breaks the ice, " Whenever you are done checking me out pagli I will drop you off at your college?"

(back to having maaneet moments 😳)

Previous Part~ Shaadi???

Edited by zeynab111 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow looks like today is a lottery day for me
One OS and my fav FF update
wohooo
and awesome update
awh so sweet
i love the brotherly bond
and omg
News of the day
Maan singh khurana is in love ..omggg😍😍😍
oh damn i loved this line
Maan sensing the mischief in their eyes says,
" oh no. Look how hot this body is. I do not want to become fat like you guys. At least one of the Khurana brothers has to have a sexy body".
🤣
love the brother scenes..waiting for next update
ah the precap😍
cant wait
update soon
love ya
thanks a lott mwah


😲
Edited by maangeetcrazy - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved the bonding of the brothers feeling really bad for maaneet as till now geet's past is not known still it must be something big which must have made her like this

dear can u answer one of my question would geet fall in love with maan as she always runs away form it and could we accept a happy or sad ending of this FF i m asking this because i have read an FF with same characterization of geet and in the end she kills herself telling maan that she is not fit for him
plz tell me
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079

awesome update loved the bonding of the brothers feeling really bad for maaneet as till now geet's past is not known still it must be something big which must have made her like this

dear can u answer one of my question would geet fall in love with maan as she always runs away form it and could we accept a happy or sad ending of this FF i m asking this because i have read an FF with same characterization of geet and in the end she kills herself telling maan that she is not fit for him
plz tell me


hey thank u yaar😳. i also had a lot of fun writing about the brotherly bond.
umm i don't think it will be a sad ending cuz i personally don't like sad endings...so i think their will be a happy ending.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111


hey thank u yaar😳. i also had a lot of fun writing about the brotherly bond.
umm i don't think it will be a sad ending cuz i personally don't like sad endings...so i think their will be a happy ending.


thanks dear for considering to give us a happy ending and hope that ur university is going well and waiting for the next update of TBHFIL
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


thanks dear for considering to give us a happy ending and hope that ur university is going well and waiting for the next update of TBHFIL


no problem dear. As for university it is taking a lot of my time...but today was a national holiday so we had a three day weekend and since i was in a good mood i wrote away. WIll try to update TBHFIL in the next couple of days...again will try don't want to make any promises and give any high hopes.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fabulous update
very nice brother love
when ,maan come to know dev also love same girl.
what will happen
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zeynab111


no problem dear. As for university it is taking a lot of my time...but today was a national holiday so we had a three day weekend and since i was in a good mood i wrote away. WIll try to update TBHFIL in the next couple of days...again will try don't want to make any promises and give any high hopes.😳


no problem dear but still very greedy for update and once again i would like to congratulate for writing an awesome os do write some more if u find time😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Zee

Rocking part dear...

Ahan... Dadi is very chaalloo...

Brothers bonding...superb yaar...
Loved the way Dev n Vicky were teasing Maan...
Is Dev in love with Geet...?? I know he likes her but love...dont know yaar...m sure we'll soon find Dev singing, '' Mere brother ki dulhan''...lol


Updt soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abinash079


no problem dear but still very greedy for update and once again i would like to congratulate for writing an awesome os do write some more if u find time😆


Hahaha. there is no problem with being greedy 😆
ur so sweet! thank you 😳
will do. Although i will need to get some inspiration from somewhere to meet everyone's expectations now...cuz i kind of set the bar high with this first OS...maybe that was not such a good idea 😆

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